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I'm guessing you meant Our Red String by Eva Kiss, rather than "OUR" [linked to Life in Middle East]I have a thing for female main protagonists and this is a fine one: Life in Middle East, but the shitton of slurs is a turn-off. Dating sims like OUR are perfect. The female protagonist can 'disable' the slurs by shutting down the dudes that she dates or encouraging them, or stop the sex and kicking them out. The same goes for the male protagonist who can choose 'humiliate', but not all the girls will be happy and can also shut him down, change the relationship, or even completely ruins everything between them. Devs with brains like Eva Kiss are rare.
thanks for the heads up. Edited.I'm guessing you meant Our Red String by Eva Kiss, rather than "OUR" [linked to Life in Middle East]
that would be the best!make it so he enjoys her doing it.
This is one of the best AVNs that go straight to business, far from being a slow burn. The groping scenes are one of the best My only complaint is the excessive use of slurs like slut, bitch, whore. Must have the right moment for those slurs to pop out also the word good girl is a reward for a submissive girl, but is fucking a masterpiece. The girl can easily be considered the hottest FMC ever made![]()
You should consider one thing, every dev makes his game according to the customs and traditions of the country where he comes from. So it makes it more genuine and outside certain standart patterns, which are dictated by the Anglo-Saxon world.I dislike excessive use of slurs too; as you said, it's better when they are well-placed. However, I generally find "slut" to be more appropriate for dirty talk than "bitch" and "whore" (which seem more degrading to me). I suppose it's the idea in part that a woman could be more of my personal slut (or at least is more sex-specific), whereas the latter two imply other things (e.g., hostility and sex for money).
Having said that, if you think that the use of slurs in this AVN is excessive, then you (like me) probably would dislike it even more in The Singer. Calling women "bitch" repeatedly is the standard for The Singer.
I thought about that, the words "puta" (slut) and "perra" (bitch) are no big deal and can be much more intimate than offensive for them. But for 'us' is quite annoying, maybe more for me, I never was fond of dirty talk, and the plot is all about sex, giving a lot of space to slurs.The Dev ... is Spanish
In my opinion it is the player who has to adapt to the game and not the contrary, of course then one plays as one wants, but the package is all inclusive otherwise you sterilize everything removing the personality.I thought about that, the words "puta" (slut) and "perra" (bitch) are no big deal and can be much more intimate than offensive for them. But for 'us' is quite annoying, maybe more for me, I never was fond of dirty talk, and the plot is all about sex, giving a lot of space to slurs.
I don't know, but for me, dirty talk is a Kink, which I don't have. But I do respect every kink. The renders and animations of this AVN are top-notch, and the plot is not complex but good enough. My review is still 5/5 for this AVN. However, I confess that I skip the text in h-scenes.In my opinion it is the player who has to adapt to the game and not the contrary, of course then one plays as one wants, but the package is all inclusive otherwise you sterilize everything removing the personality.
By this year, the dev finishes the game and then goes to SteamAny word on when this will be finished &/or cumming to Steam?
I've had it on my wishlist forever, and searching* this thread, I don't see any mention of Steam in the past few months.
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* yes, I actually searched the thread. I know that seems basic to some and heretical to others.
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My guess is that the plot of the game will be slow-burning, which is inversely proportional to Loren.I don't know, but for me, dirty talk is a Kink, which I don't have. But I do respect every kink. The renders and animations of this AVN are top-notch, and the plot is not complex but good enough. My review is still 5/5 for this AVN. However, I confess that I skip the text in h-scenes.
slow-burn? but would need a remake then or a complete rework.My guess is that the plot of the game will be slow-burning, which is inversely proportional to Loren.![]()
Happy endingI strongly recommend devs to change the name to "Happy Days."
I am with you. Which plot??? What kind of slowburn?? There is no Story at all.slow-burn? but would need a remake then or a complete rework.
Other words are used at times, when the moment is more playful, like 'minx'. Whilst others have been avoided completely, for being too offensive but also inappropriate, like 'tart' or 'trollop'.I thought about that, the words "puta" (slut) and "perra" (bitch) are no big deal and can be much more intimate than offensive for them. But for 'us' is quite annoying, maybe more for me, I never was fond of dirty talk, and the plot is all about sex, giving a lot of space to slurs.
That's nice to hear... A good idea would be persistent pet names, one of the characters calls the FMC 'sunshine' and others something like that, all the time instead of just belching slut, it's a kind of way to say that guy owns her by calling a pet name.Other words are used at times, when the moment is more playful, like 'minx'. Whilst others have been avoided completely, for being too offensive but also inappropriate, like 'tart' or 'trollop'.
It's definitely not always easy but you have to consider, that most of the time here, the person using the words 'slut' or 'whore' is indeed asserting their dominance and wants to degrade the recipient. There are also quite a few cases where the original version has more of those words and they've been removed from the english version to smooth things down.
But I do hear what you're saying and it is something I keep in mind all the time.
HMMMM your profile's imageHmm, Loren![]()
Okay, now stop whining, but what plot do you want to create in 7 days? Because maybe you didn't realize that is the length of the game?I am with you. Which plot??? What kind of slowburn?? There is no Story at all.There isn t even a Story where it is worth to fight for your Love/Wife. Day 1 : lovely Housewife! Day 1 1/2 : free to use hole, for the Family and the whole Neighbourhood/City (i forgot her "Business" Meeting)!! Maybe someone can rewrite her Character a little bit, because her behavior isn t normal at all. My personal guess is that she is mentally ill. Look at the ingame text : She s jealous that her Hubby likes Kirsten (Kristen??), but she never talks with him about her feelings and because she doesn t want to talk of that she s lying, cheating and manipulating her Hubby?!?! And on top of that, she has no shame, no dignity, no self control and is fucking around?? As a woman she has the worst Character ever. She is unnormal selfish and a Narcissist. Best Ending for her would be : Hubby catches her fucking in a threesome with...well...anybody....and throws her over the balcony. Last Render could be that Laura is standing at the next Street Corner as a crack addict and as a 5$ Whore begging for Cocks...and so her "wish" is fullfilled...! Hubby gets a new Wife with a sane mind. End of Story.
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