VN Ren'Py Harem Hotel [v0.18.1] [Runey]

[Deleted member 3313072]

Just came across the video game scene with Kali, Moon and Emma.

God, that brings back such good memories...!

That was probably one of my top 3 scenes in the entire game, along with the Never Have I Ever with Moon & Maria. I love how Emma got "nerded" up a bit and she's a great character. The look on Moon's face when she's determined in that scene is just wonderful.

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[Shadesishere]

Runey
fascinating, and the fact that you have a plan going forward (even if you only have a rough idea atm) is a very good thing.
the worldbuilding has been excellent IMO, and I am looking forward to seeing how it all weaves together in future updates. I posted a while back on things I would like to see when you asked for suggestions, but honestly, just knowing that you have a plan going forward is heartening to hear.

and as for the characters being "wacky caricatures", I believe a better way to put it is that you started with a few set tropes and have evolved them. you had Lin as a shy (slave) maid that wasn't very good at some things that has been improving and is slowly learning more, both about her races history and her place going forward. Kali started as a gamergirl/Neet with rich business father, but now she seems to be looking at the business as a way forward. Ashley is... Ashley but seriously I like how you have been evolving these characters.

Currently on a replay (upgraded my pc's storage and managed to lose a chunk of my data) and honestly, I'm making a point of really paying attention to how each characters story is playing out.

 

[Mathesar]

I see Harem Hotel as kind of a deconstruction of porn tropes.

Lin is an examination of what sex slaves are actually like and how that impacts society.

Kali shows how normal the nerdy girl really is and later what the isolated rich girl might be able to do when motivated.

Ashley shows what kind of hell a person has to go through to become a yandere.

Maria's life has a tendency to revolve around sex and we see her questioning who she is without it.

Android of course raises the existential, moral, and ethical questions regarding sapient sex bots.

The twins behave like actual sisters rather than unconditionally sharing everything and banging each other at the first opportunity.

Autumn has to actually have her beliefs about sex challenged rather than just experience an orgasm in order to change, and will likely synthesize her old beliefs with her new ones rather than just become a sacrilegious slut.

 

[TheDevian]

I'm curious to know what ... everyone else thinks of my plan.

I love it. That is part of what keeps this as one of the best games on here.

Autumn has to actually have her beliefs about sex challenged rather than just experience an orgasm in order to change, and will likely synthesize her old beliefs with her new ones rather than just become a sacrilegious slut.

To be fair, her first orgasm WAS a huge turning point. XD

 

[itfod]

Hey, been playing all the storylines to completion; found one potential error in the dialogue, and that's only because the word itself is so weird is so weird:

Kali: "He was only really good at builging motherboards and stuff like that. but where he really shined was business."

This is a past tense of the word 'shine', and unfortunately, the damn thing has two past tense words. In this case, I think the word should be 'shone.'

Just FYI, a website explaining it:

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EDIT: Another possible few:

MC: "We don't judge a book by it's cover, ideas can come from anyone and creativeness is encouraged." - I think it should be 'creativity.'

Lin: "Since there weren't many people around, their deaths didn't go noticed for a long time." - think it should be 'get'

 

[ThtsMyScrtCapImAlwysHorny]

I think the optimal wording on that last one would be "went unnoticed".

 

[itfod]

I think the optimal wording on that last one would be "went unnoticed".

True; double negative and all. Yours is probably a better phrasing of it.

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How DOES one do the whole blurring of partial sentences and stuff here??

 

[Tavi13]

Anyway, I hope I didn't scare anyone off with this wall of text, I'm curious to know what you think Rex, and what everyone else thinks of my plan.

As I have said elsewhere, I am one of the ones here for the stories. Sure; I love the lewdz, I'd have to turn in my perv card if I didn't, but they will never keep my attention for long.

I have enjoyed watching the story (and its world) evolve, and I am interested in seeing where you take this. I also appreciate the fact that you have a set idea of where you want to go, and how to get there. Looking forward to the trip!

 

[itfod]

Quick question; just realised that I don't have all of Autumn's photo's available yet, there's an 'event' set missing.

Is that unreleased content, or can it be access somehow? And if so, how?

EDIT: Found a spell error.

Kali: "Oh, this my be more fun than I thought..." - 'may'

EDIT 2: Finally finished all main storylines! What a fear! And it only took me... almost 26 hours of full gaming time.

Well, I probably spent too much time leveling up different lewd aspects.

Gotta ask a question though; I can't seem to get Autumn to the level of cumdump, no matter how many times I get MC to cum on her. Does she have a much higher number to get that, or is she not supposed to be able to be that yet?

 

[TheDevian]

Gotta ask a question though; I can't seem to get Autumn to the level of cumdump, no matter how many times I get MC to cum on her. Does she have a much higher number to get that, or is she not supposed to be able to be that yet?

Cum Dump is cumming inside.

 

[Mathesar]

How DOES one do the whole blurring of partial sentences and stuff here??

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[itfod]

Cum Dump is cumming inside.

Oh, really? Sheesh, I thought it was cumming ON.

Thanks!

 

[TheDevian]

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Oh, really? Sheesh, I thought it was cumming ON.

Thanks!

Yeah, dump is inside, and slut is out. Just remember that you put things inside of a dumpster, and sluts like to play with it.

 

[itfod]

Yeah, dump is inside, and slut is out. Just remember that you put things inside of a dumpster, and sluts like to play with it.

Lol, thanks for that!

Runey, gotta say, excellent piece of work here. An actual novel, with a compelling storyline, and really good sex scenes.

I normally prefer my sex scenes with sound effects, but I find that the lack of them in this game does not bother me so much.

Hope to see more content for Moon, Kate, Juliet and Lucy. Also, I am SUCH a fan of Kali. And I am kind loving Autumn's content, but kind of disliking it too, you know? That's only because I had a fairly reserved upbringing myself, and see so many similarities to her and the women I loved growing up. Obviously, I don't follow anymore, but it still makes me uncomfortable to see a devout person fall into sexual depravity... as much as it also is a forbidden fruit.

The weird things that you notice in the games and novels you come across...

Feel so bad for Marie; saw it coming, for both her and Hana. There was a single line of dialogue that you put in that confirmed it for me, when I was selling a set of her pin-ups, mentioning scars on her ears. When you add that to the stories of how half elves have no rights, and how many of them were put up for adoption, and Hana's fear of going to see other doctors, boom. Confirmation.

I do hope that we find Maria's parents to be loving people, and that Ashley's Ms. Ren is somebody the MC can save too. But, we'll see what you have planned for us.

Anyway, thanks for the amazing work! cannot wait for the next chapter! Thanks for actually writing a impressive, cohesive storyline into my smut!

PS: Oh! Lastly, IS the missing set of pictures for Autumn upcoming, or is there a special trigger I haven't found yet? Please let me know!

 

[therealkirun]

Can someone compress the updated version?

 

[MrRooster]

Lovely game. It's been very nice reading through all the character development for Cali, Maria, and Felicity.
It's so easy to be reductive about characters, but I find them more compelling than other characters in the genre. They don't feel boxed in.

A lot of the side characters are so fun too. Moon and Nia have some of the most interesting dynamics.

 

[Xypher]

Any chance of someone updating the compress version?

 

[TheDevian]

Any chance of someone updating the compress version?

The main version is the compressed version, if you are asking about the crunched one, hard to say... Someone might have posted one, you can try searching for it here... I don't pay much attention to it personally, so I can't say, I would probably download the full 80+gig version if it was an option.

 

[Deleted member 929426]

The main version is the compressed version, if you are asking about the crunched one, hard to say... Someone might have posted one, you can try searching for it here... I don't pay much attention to it personally, so I can't say, I would probably download the full 80+gig version if it was an option.

I wonder how many people are asking Todd Howard for a compressed version of Skyrim when the Anniversary version is released.

 

[TheDevian]

I wonder how many people are asking Todd Howard for a compressed version of Skyrim when the Anniversary version is released.

Well, they did get an Android version or something... lol Ripe full of microtransactions.

But like with Harem Hotel here, I want the HD versions. XD

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On the idea of gifts, how about a fancy anal plug for Lin, then we could make her wear it on occasion.