Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot to me, that was definitely my intentions when writing the story
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Btw, there was one scene in particular that really spoke to me on a personal level that I wanted to mention specifically.Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot to me, that was definitely my intentions when writing the story
Ashley started out as such a hard character for me to like. The whole creepy, needy, clingy thing was really starting to bother me. But then she has this moment when the mask slips and she begs the MC not to leave her, and she's sitting there in this completely vulnerable state of loneliness and fear of abandonment and in all honestly I teared up a little bit. It was the realest thing I've seen in a VN.
I really appreciated that. I don't know what you drew from to find that moment and I don't need to know, but it felt real and personal and it broke my fucking heart in the best possible way.
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This is one of the most moving written scenes or collection of scenes in any games I've played in recent years.
This absolutely broke me.
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There are several scenes...Ashley's plea, Kali's confession of love, Maria's breakup and return, Android's musings on life...that actually give me a lump in my throat the same I way I get when I read my favorite literary passages. Not to sound like a fanboy but this is high-quality, immersive writing and is what makes this game the best of it's kind. I feel empathy for these characters and want to watch their stories continue.
Now if only I could play this, and other games like this, on planes without everyone around me freaking out
Now if only I could play this, and other games like this, on planes without everyone around me freaking out
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I can't say I have that personal connection but it did change my outlook of her. In the beginning, to me, she was "just" an annoying yandere porn game character. But then after her history and motivations were revealed there was suddenly a frightened and lonely woman desperately trying to find a place in life. So while I still don't especially like her pregnancy fixation she did grow me quite a bit. I just wish I could reasure her and have her overcome her remaining desperation.
Speaking of which. Am I the only one thinking Ashley's mother is redeemable? Maybe I'm misremembering but wasn't it mainly her father being abusive while the mother was away because of work? So if she realises was an asshole her husband is and leaves him we can try and reconnect her and Ashley. I think that any contact outside the harem will help Ashley a lot, especially rebuilding a bridge to the past. But that will certainly not be easy.
Speaking of which. Am I the only one thinking Ashley's mother is redeemable? Maybe I'm misremembering but wasn't it mainly her father being abusive while the mother was away because of work? So if she realises was an asshole her husband is and leaves him we can try and reconnect her and Ashley. I think that any contact outside the harem will help Ashley a lot, especially rebuilding a bridge to the past. But that will certainly not be easy.
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I don't think I'd give too much credit to the girls having issues, there's no reason why healthy, well-adjusted girls can't join a harem. I agree that their backgrounds do inspire a strong protective instinct though. I'd also like to pick up on the word "family" as well, that's something I feel is important; the scenes between two or more girls really do add a lot to the game compared to if it was just MC dating a number of girls at the same time. (In my opinion if the girls aren't cool with each other you don't have a harem, but that's a conversation for another time).
I'd love to see more scenes which emphasise the family dynamic, whether that's another outing like the beach or something else (maybe the girls coming together to help with a problem one of them has rather than MC just fixing it on his own? I'm not a writer).
You just want to hold her and tell her you're not going anywhere, don't you? I know it's tricky in first person view, but another thing I'd like to see more of is that. Aside from taking the girls to bed at night, you don't seem to hold them or kiss them nearly often enough.
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Do what I do, use a privacy filter! Only I can see the screen!There are several scenes...Ashley's plea, Kali's confession of love, Maria's breakup and return, Android's musings on life...that actually give me a lump in my throat the same I way I get when I read my favorite literary passages. Not to sound like a fanboy but this is high-quality, immersive writing and is what makes this game the best of it's kind. I feel empathy for these characters and want to watch their stories continue.
Now if only I could play this, and other games like this, on planes without everyone around me freaking out
God. That Maria return scene when she runs up to you and hugs you and tells you she missed you... Holy shit. It's so strange in a porn game to find a moment of pure love like that.There are several scenes...Ashley's plea, Kali's confession of love, Maria's breakup and return, Android's musings on life...that actually give me a lump in my throat the same I way I get when I read my favorite literary passages. Not to sound like a fanboy but this is high-quality, immersive writing and is what makes this game the best of it's kind. I feel empathy for these characters and want to watch their stories continue.
Now if only I could play this, and other games like this, on planes without everyone around me freaking out
Sure, it's not 100% necessary that they're all products of broken homes with daddy issues, it's just that I love how the hotel slowly becomes this refuge for outcasts. It's like, no matter what they were like in the past and no matter what they've been through, there's this place they've created where they can find love and acceptance. Like you said, it IS a family.
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That's a masterpiece of writing, I'd say.
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For some reason even after finish Lin's story I still can't ask for a footjob for her. I just wanna get all her traits man. ;-;
Runey I discovered your game only yesterday, but i really like it !
And thanks for the amazing easter egg with Felicity asking for money...
And thanks for the amazing easter egg with Felicity asking for money...
Make sure you're on v0.7.2, there was a bug preventing you from getting her footjobs if you didn't initially choose the footjob
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There was a bug, but not anymore. Update to 0.7.2 if you're not already there, visit her in the kitchen, and ask her to put on her apron. The footjob option should be there.Yeah im on 0.7.2 and yeah I didn't choose footjob first no wonder
Oh yeah, I love her mom, want to 'see' more of her. Though with Ashley, I know of expect one much like the first time we met her, when Ashley blew us in front of her where some comes back and Ash forces her to do something as some kind of payback or whatever. It could also be that mom was fantasizing about it since then, as her husband can't compare, etc...
You would do that, wouldn't you ...THEA?!?!?
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