Well, I'm sorry you didn't like the direction. I didn't intend for Vanessa to come off in a way that made the player think "Urgh, just go away" whenever she's on screen. That's why I wanted to make her look like a dumbass in certain areas, such as when she assumed too much about you, which she wont in the future anymore. MC and Kali will grow on her though, especially after that event, and she won't be as annoying as you considered her here. You're right though, with the racist character.This isn't true though. The insertion of real world politics is exactly what put me off so strongly. In world politics is neat, I'll take that in measured doses. Having a racist caricature spout out "Make Syl'nar Great Again" or having an anti-slavery group that may as well be called AntiSla because it's a 1:1 proxy of Antifa isn't keeping current life politics out of the game.
The worst part is that it's not even handled well. Vanessa is absolutely toxic, completely unlikeable as a person. Why would anybody fight to have a person like this in their life? Why was there no dialogue option to say, "I'm interested in learning about Elven history, can you give me the book's ISBN so I can read it and learn without the presumptuous, denigrating commentary?" The tone that's been presented is that somehow the player is blessed and should be grateful that Vanessa is berating him and interfering in his life, when in reality who would want to spend five minutes in the company of someone like this?
Why does this character even exist from a narrative perspective? Kali was already interested in doing good work with her father's business and if you want to present more elven abolitionist perspectives you already have Lin, Nia and Sylvia who already have connections to the group, are stronger voices because they're actually elves and have faced actual discrimination. So why fly in the face of narrative principles like the conservation of characters and spin up an entirely new character so the player can receive an exposition dump interspersed with woke hot takes and insults from someone who is absolutely peripheral to the story, the main cast and elven oppression? Hearing that she's going to be increasingly involved with Kali's story is most likely going to shift Kali from being one of my favourites to content I want to avoid. Because even though Kali is an asbolute treat, throwing Vanessa into the mix is unpalatable in the same way that nobody wants to eat a bowl of icecream that's been mixed with an ounce of poo.
She is self aware of how passionate (and agressive) she is over this stuff. After all, most of Syl'anar thinks elves are nothing but animals. MC and Lin know just as well as Vanessa does that it's annoying when people don't understand that they're equals to humans.
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