Strike-10

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Jan 19, 2022
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every person in this story could benefit from a new personality archetype

Lin, being the oldest, could gain more coordination, more awareness of herself as the most mature person invoved, the 'adult,' at least inside the Hotel and among the group. Id like to see her dress in larger clothing, along with a larger personality.
Kali could lose a little of the geeky awkwardness, and either shift towards a calm businesswoman personality, or a affectionate seductress
Yandzilla could plan for motherhood maturely, rather than with frantic neediness
Maria could either embrace the idea of being the property of someone she trusts, or become a gentle supporter of fleeing and displaced elves and others who are rejected
Android I'm not sure, perhaps something related to real world permanence, since discovering mortality is very odd for a machine, or perhaps a secret steward of emerging intelligences. Maybe this is too serious for her, and she just needs a cute hobby that she takes far too seriously.
F+E I can't see them doing anything except getting serious about petplay. Perhaps a clothing business, but eventually maturing into hotel management
Churchlady is still developing narratively, so I'm not sure, but I actually think politics would suit her better than religion.
Looks like you have a good start to the development of your very own game.
Let us know when you get it done!

I get that HH isn’t quite up to your expectations… however … If I was in your shoes I would have framed my comments differently.
maybe list a few things that you enjoyed or that you think are done well vs a list of things that you think need changing and that could have been summed up under a heading of …

“This is how you screwed up your characters and your 4+ years of work has minimal value.”

Just a thought.
 
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Perniciousducks

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Cool story, once he’s written and published a successful game based on his own characters I’ll take his pronouncements about what should have been done with the characters with slightly more importance than my used toilet paper.

Constructive feedback is nice, telling someone they did it wrong and to rewrite a many year project is not constructive criticism. It is pompous blather.


Edit: damnit. Just noticed the post total of the poster. It’s just a alt account troll. That’s what I get for just reading the quote.
 
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Strike-10

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Cool story, once he’s written and published a successful game based on his own characters I’ll take his pronouncements about what should have been done with the characters with slightly more importance than my used toilet paper.

Constructive feedback is nice, telling someone they did it wrong and to rewrite a many year project is not constructive criticism. It is pompous blather.
Yep Exactly!!

My response to him was mostly me laughing in a creative way but MAYBE they might look at their posting from a more human-like viewpoint.

That was his very first post here … so it’s either a troll account or someone that has issues of some sort.
 

Runey

Harem Hotel
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May 17, 2018
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Looks like you have a good start to the development of your very own game.
Let us know when you get it done!

I get that HH isn’t quite up to your expectations… however … If I was in your shoes I would have framed my comments differently.
maybe list a few things that you enjoyed or that you think are done well vs a list of things that you think need changing and that could have been summed up under a heading of …

“This is how you screwed up your characters and your 4+ years of work has minimal value.”

Just a thought.
Yeah, to be honest, I read the first sentence of that post and ignored it. It doesn't seem constructive at first glance. I've just begun ignoring some posts. Other sites might have an issue with letting literal children play these games, but this site has an issue with pure toxicity.

I can tell it has something to do with personalities though. Every character grows and won't end in the same place they started. Lin is gaining confidence and independence, which is something she has never had in her life. Just one example.
 

jocoyo

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May 9, 2018
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is there any walkthrough to the game besides the walkthrough mod?
Honestly this isn't the type of game where you really need a walkthrough. The game will outright tell you if a choice will put you off a side character's path, but other than that, you have to see every scene to progress the story.

The only times I can think of where a walkthrough would be helpful is that there are certain story scenes (maybe like 4?) that have bonus content if you levelled up a certain stat (anal, exhibitionism, etc) with that specific character. I suppose the wiki would be helpful for that.
 

Jjay08

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Honestly this isn't the type of game where you really need a walkthrough. The game will outright tell you if a choice will put you off a side character's path, but other than that, you have to see every scene to progress the story.

The only times I can think of where a walkthrough would be helpful is that there are certain story scenes (maybe like 4?) that have bonus content if you levelled up a certain stat (anal, exhibitionism, etc) with that specific character. I suppose the wiki would be helpful for that.
What is with you people and walkthroughs. Have you tried playing the game in a way that isn't goal oriented? Be curious and walk around and check stuff out. Do you need your hand held during a visual novel?
 

Adalace

Newbie
Jun 19, 2020
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16.0 incl 16.0 rpa and apk files:
Mega
Any chance of a torrent or different file host? A file that large cannot be downloaded from Mega unless you install and use their software — it cannot be downloaded using a web browser (at least not Firefox).
 

peetee33

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Jun 18, 2018
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I'm curious, I just started a new run after not playing for a few years. If I have Lin call my Daddy, is there dialogue throughout the game or is it just the intro dialogue that is different? Using the name Daddy feels weird, but if it has some funny/interesting dialogue later it might be worth it.

Edit: So I found someone mentioning the script file and I took a look. If anyone is interested, it seems like it only changes how some dialogue is phrased past the opening. Like "Mmmmhh~ thank you Daddy~" instead of "Mmmmhh~ thank you~"
 
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Wills747

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Dec 14, 2018
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Any chance of a torrent or different file host? A file that large cannot be downloaded from Mega unless you install and use their software — it cannot be downloaded using a web browser (at least not Firefox).
I'm not going to host multiple places as it takes me forever to upload to other file servers and has failed an hour or two into the upload before.
I would recommend using Mega's client even for smaller files. If you find yourself going over quota, I've heard using a VPN to switch IP addresses works, personally I've reset my router(dynamic IP) to do the same.
 

DigDug69

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Jun 29, 2019
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I'm curious, I just started a new run after not playing for a few years. If I have Lin call my Daddy, is there dialogue throughout the game or is it just the intro dialogue that is different? Using the name Daddy feels weird, but if it has some funny/interesting dialogue later it might be worth it.

Edit: So I found someone mentioning the script file and I took a look. If anyone is interested, it seems like it only changes how some dialogue is phrased past the opening. Like "Mmmmhh~ thank you Daddy~" instead of "Mmmmhh~ thank you~"
I just happen to use the name Daddy.
This game just happens to have many fun scenes where the girls scream daddy.
 
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