These places really do devolve into echo chambers of positivity eventually.
Is this your first time at F95?
These threads are toxic cesspools.
This game needs a lot of work but it is promising. One thing that drives me crazy: the X to close computer windows is not in the same location as the computer's power button to leave it, but it's close. This makes it annoying to have to click the small X, move the mouse slightly, and then hit the bigger power button. If they were closer to the same place, it would be a quick double click to get off the PC rather than having to aim and then move.
The girls are also a little too easy and they need to be fleshed out some. It's a bit shallow now, but I am sure this will get better as the game approaches completion.
You bring up a fair point. I'm not sure I ever noticed the X, but I can look into that.
Yes. Shallow not in terms of being superficial personality-wise, but shallow in terms of characterization. A couple days after meeting Ashley she wants to suck my cock just for entering her room at the right time? It's a little ridiculous. Lin wants to give me a handjob and blow me and every Wednesday she wears that crazy mating outfit, but she won't put the heart outfit on that I buy her? It's a bit much. There are some characterization issues here. It could be better. I get a footjob in the middle of class with witnesses around just for answering some riddles? It's' a bit much. Even for a sex game.
To reiterate Ashley's story, the reason she sucked your cock so early, and tried to go so incredibly attached to you, is explained further into her story during the flashback. That's when she admits she was trying way too hard to keep you because she was so afraid to lose you. There are certainly reasons for every action, and it gives these characters depth.
I can look into that heart outfit stuff, that might just be a relic of old content. Had you approached this topic as "Hey Runey, can you look into X, Y, and Z? I think this can be improved upon to make more sense" It would be much more productive and you wouldn't seem so hostile.
No, you don't get a footjob in the middle of class. You visit between classes. Those witnesses are your girlfriend, your other girlfriends, and your girlfriends friends. In another comment you seem to remember this actually.
And no, this isn't a sex a game. It's an Adult Visual Novel. I can respect your criticism if you can respect my work.
I appreciate your explanation. It is one of many possible explanations. I just don't buy it. Not only is your explanation lacking (the girl giving the footjob doesn't have an exhibition stat), it ultimately is just one of many possible rationalizations you can give to excuse poor story telling and that's really all there is to it.
I buy magic in Lucky Paradox. I buy Ashley getting anal in the train bathroom in Halfway House. I buy demons in Once in a Lifetime. The way it's told, it's just not enough for me to believe it. But it's ok. I don't buy Bryce Dallas Howard running through the jungle and away from dinosaurs in 7 inch Stilletos, either.
For you and the others who like it, don't let my complaint about this one slightly unbelievable aspect ruin your enjoyment of this game. On the contrary, enjoy it. I'll play the rest of it when it's done.
You're taking this way out of proportion. You realize that you're arguing about a character in a game giving a footjob in a near empty class room with only people she has known her entire life? And that it's less believable than actual magic? I'm not sure if I should keep taking your criticism seriously at this point.
I only made two comments about things that I thought were strange. They were not game-breaking complaints and they were not absolute dealbreakers for me. I completed the game as well, and it is quite fun overall.
I think you have blown this way out of proportion. I didn't expect you to end with "I actually find the game fun" with the way you were commenting at first. I am always trying to get feedback from people, I can't get enough of it and it only improves the game, but the way you initially gave yours here felt like you were almost insulted by what you witnessed, it didn't feel like you want to help, but complain.
Fortunately, I am here, and can fix things.
So please do report anything you feel should be fixed or improved upon. I'm not sure what is going on with the heart outfit requirements, but it appears that Kate giving you a footjob is working as intended. I enjoy all feedback!