So having sat with my thoughts for a day or so, I've only really come up with one piece of criticism, as I enjoyed this game immensely.
I'm not sure I even want to call that criticism, as it may be an intentional choice and it isn't necessarily a bad thing to have happen. Just mentioning the one thing that kinda threw me in a game I enjoyed very much. Also maybe we could get a fast-travel point in / near the poison swamp. I know we only went there twice, but it's a bit of a walk from the village, and I can't afford for Lily to walk too much, girl needs to keep those sweet, sweet curves.