I see... yeah, that would have helped a lot.
Anyway, finished the current version. A few small typos:
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See how one of Melissa's lines ends with a comma? Either something is missing, or - more likely - it should not end with a comma.
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Missing comma after "Damn"
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It seems to me like there is a word missing in the second sentence. There could be a "While" at the start:
While I'm not opposed to any danger that might come from it, I wouldn't want you to get dragged in with me.
Or there could be a "but' after the comma:
I'm not opposed to any danger that might come from it, but I wouldn't want you to get dragged in with me.
Also, Carna's skills need descriptions. I thought her second skill was also an attack skill, but it turned out to be a healing skill.