daviezwei Holy shit. You did it. You made me feel sympathetic toward Kayden. I had no idea that could even be done!
Sarcasm aside, I'm legitimately impressed. Your character writing remains possibly the best I've read in an hgame
Really hoping this bout of failure - and the heart-to-heart with Sparkle (particularly if you acknowledge that he's trying, but failing) - will result in some changes on his part.
Also, how dare you cut the version off right before Sparkle finally gets railed by her Mama!
(Sidenote, I'm really loving the caring-dom vibes I'm getting from that relationship - "let me make decisions for you, because I want to keep you safe" and all that. And crucially, she seems to be telling the truth - not being manipulative, she actually does care)