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On A Pale Horse is the best one out of the Incarnations series imo. Piers wrote it after a literal 'brush with death' . He had a heart attack and ended up in the hospital, and it changed him significantly, and gave him the idea for the book. It was also the first of the Incarnation series to be written, and it was very well received so Piers decided to go on and write books for the other incarnation characters from the book. I have the hardcover version of that one.Piers Anthony?? Bro are you me? I read Bio of Space Tyrant and Incarnations of Immortality during Middle school... :0
First gotta agree to share duties with Lei, when you're convincing Kayden to go save her from the dungeon; one of her duties was free use, but Kayden didn't enforce it for her.When does the public use route come in? The walkthrough says it starts with a conversation with kayden before the bandit raid, but I cant seem to get that to trigger.
I have no idea what settings you are referring to (probably because I've not looked) but ...So Ive noticed that in settings there is a choice between female, futanari or trap, but when Ive chosen trap and began the game, the mc still appeared in the world of the game as a female. Am I doing something wrong? Ive read that there is a possibility to play not as female but as femboy
The settings are mainly a convenient way to watch alternate sex scenes from your playthrough, the actual choices come up naturally over time just as Staimh laid out.So Ive noticed that in settings there is a choice between female, futanari or trap, but when Ive chosen trap and began the game, the mc still appeared in the world of the game as a female. Am I doing something wrong? Ive read that there is a possibility to play not as female but as femboy
Not recently, I don't think. She's nekky when you rez her, of course, but since then? Nej, not yetRegarding Harmony: have we seen her fully nude?
I must say, i'm a bit unhappy for this change. I personally like being reluctant and being forced into free-use situations. So I did not see this as a bug at all. Because while i may object openly and pretend I don't like it, I most certainly want to be taken without permission as often, and as violently, as possible. But playing as sparkle, I would never admit that in the game. But I would still purposefully put myself into situations where that would happen, and I would piss people off as much as possible so they would be rougher with me.Here it is!
[*]Fixed "bug" that didn't allow Panki to offer to override the mandatory "free use" from Roopah if you are in a relationship with her (must be reluctant)
Thank you so much! As I mentioned to a friend on Discord, "Well I'm trying to keep that feeling going by riding the line between outright objection and begrudging acceptance on that particular "slow corruption" route. The point where Sparkle eventually "leans in to it" will likely be near the very end of the game for people with this sort of coy playstyle. With a less reluctant playstyle the compliance and deepening degradation will occur much faster since Sparkle is not acting bashful."I just love davies work like no other.
Although I dont fancy a lot of the fetishes here, it still caught me. I hope this (game) never ends ;P
And like some others already stated, I hope for more Sub-Sparkle Content.
I m hoping for her to be caught between giving in and having moments of wanting-out, but remaining for whatever reason (inner and outer). Would be too early for her to have "found her place", it would probably get boring too soon. But I have no doubt davie knows how to delay any kind of boredom. xD
And I love how so many here share their thoughts and wishes, as sometimes it might help davie getting some ideas.
I havent even started 0.6 yet but I m already waiting in line for 0.7.
Thats how amazing it is
Please do!I will try this game
Yes. There has been a tonne of code restructuring.Hi, do I have to restart the game for this update?
Thank you so very much! I really, really appreciate you saying soGotta say. This is amazing work. The story is gripping and the characters are actually fun.
More invested than I thought I would be for a lewd game.
Wejit and Ooyum offer different strengths and weaknesses so please feel free to choose the one you personally prefer. Outside of some complaints, choosing Ooyum is not a drastic game-changing issue....i think about starting a new game to see some of the changes, but since i avoid dicks at all costs its more to see how panki speaks now. I just wonder if there is any relevant difference between sir wejit and ooyum. Sure, the first is a closeup fighter, the second a magician and the males in the group will be disappointed with my lacking sense of loyalty, but is there any story relevance? Somehow related question, will that stupid wannabe slaver also go over board if i pick ooyum or do i need to block his comeback to the group right away?
As dickhating lesbian i prefer topless green tits over a pantless green dick following me around and i honestly dont care what roopah thinks, never talked to him out of free will and the girls dont complain if i change the goblin. I know, i could read the WT, but first it is too long to find my answers without reading it all and second i dont want to see any details about the stuff i skip right away (like dick related routes, free use/sub/slave content and other stuff i avoid like acid)
Future question daviezwei : Will we meet lel IRL? Ingame IRL, dont expect her to ring the bell here ^^
Thanks very much! Honestly that's very nice to hear.Been eyeballing this game for a while and decided to give it a shot today. daviezwei good job so far man. I didn't expect to like this one but it's been very enjoyable so far.
That cunning little green filmosomer.Same as above
I came for the blonde, stayed for the love of wejit
Every other line he has is actual comedy gold
Example (paraphrased, actually better in game)
"wejit what about this guy we just killed?"
"I no remember him"
"We were just talking about them though?"
"No... No Remember him ......that worst fate of all"
10/10
I'm going to work on that. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.I just have one complaint so far about this game. Everything else is awesome but I'm just wondering....
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You're welcome! And thanks!Nice update
Thanks
Thank you!Choices with consequences, proves that the dev put their heart into the writing
Thank you for this. I've added a lot to my notes!I hadn't played this in a while, so I'd forgotten what a good game it is.
Lots of my enjoyment of it comes down to despite being transformed into a woman you can then choose to be some hung amazonian and go around fucking things so that's basically being a male MC. Very different from them HTML kinda games where you get transformed.
I'm also very thankful there's a Panki+Lel option (henceforth referred to as 'Panel', ha) as I wouldn't be able to choose between them... I wasn't that fussed about adding Skylark in there, honestly she was hotter as Laura, but that's better than Harmony I guess (who still creeps me out, and I guess I'd give a pity fuck to because I'd feel bad about rejecting her after making her, but I wouldn't really be into it).
I kinda want to fuck Leigh too, not because I want the MC to have a relationship with him, just to put that little sissy in his place, I've been growing increasingly pissed at the attitude that femboy is copping and anally hatefucking him seems like a good option... I'm hoping there'll be some kind of slave collar we can acquire later to mindbreak him into some sort of submissive freeuse whore... at times I've been tempted to have a do-over and just not invite him back and leave him to be bummed by slavers.
Roopah could get it too, but she seems more intent on doing the fucking and that's a no-go.
Kayden is likewise annoying me a fair bit, but I get he's supposed to... maybe by the end we'll get a spell to transform him into a hot little girl to plow and add to the harem, or something... I feel there's gotta be a reason he's being written to be a such a dick and that it's probably so we'll be able to enjoy bad stuff happening to him later.
Twig is a bit too little for my tastes, but I'm liking how her writing has changed, like when she's showing up Kayden when he's being a dick, she's less one-dimensional now.
One sign it's a well written game is that I obviously should have ditched Wejit for the girl goblin, that's a no brainer, a dude out and a girl in... even if I'm not particularly interested in Ooyum's personality or giant knockers, that'd still beat a guy character who's content I'm never going to interact with... buuuuut, he's such a bro I couldn't do it to him... hopefully I'll be able to offer up a future mindbroken slut Leigh to him for some relief and maybe transformed Kayden, haha (if that somehow is how things turns out).
I did encounter one error when trying out different stuff... on the ship if I sat next to Harmony, as there was some push towards me doing that, then after we were done talking it suddenly wanted me to serve everyone as if I was the loot-slave (which I wasn't) then if I did it anyway once it got to Kayden it just endlessly looped with no way to break out.
Only other one was that I wondered why her hair kept flicking back between red and blonde, turns out I'd activated the backup body option and there's no angry face or something for that one... and that's totally on me as I wasn't sure what that did and forgot about it... I prefer her blonde anyway.
I actually really like that you can swap your transformation freely like that, it's really hand to see how different bits would go (even if I'm playing it as the futa one), and definitely keeps me from having a bajillion saves which'd then get jumbled and confusing.
I also appreciate that you're not super punished for stuff, like I made the mushroom deal but didn't actually have to do anything with the barkeep, or kept Wejit but still got Laura in the game. Only things that I get a little worried about will be if those skill choices end up causing me hassle at some point.
I also hope some stuff comes back around, like looking at the walkthrough I see the troll semen stuff was just for a fish bribe, which I got around a different way... and so it'll be cool if later on I can still use it if someone is in peril (seems like a waste of something so powerful just to use on a bribe anyhoo).
Ah! I see...But Lel is #1 Girl in our Hearts so daviezwei If there's some sort of scene where we have toYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
TL;DR for the spoiler: if you do this everyone will see it coming but nobody with a brain will dislike it
Hmm... for the fairy stuff...I just thought of somethng. Sex scene with Lel and Sparkle...in chubby fairy form. Eh? It's gotta happen. Pretty please, Mr. Zwei!
Btw can anyone here tell me why Lel had a 180 personality change from the ship onward? From whipped dog to all-smiles manic pixie?
Thank you so very much!Holy Shit. This is funny as fuck so far. I'm only to the first break from the server but I've been totally lmao. I hope it stays this good.
Thank you!i just recently downloaded the game and played through it in a couple days. It was really enjoyable and i hope more updates will come out soon
He is indeed.Daamn, Wejit is a MAN of HONOR. Nice. I was a bit unsure about screens and starting tone of game, but daaamn Wejit conquered my heart. Truly, sir.
No pants!He's a fucking bro, right? A true friend. Did you see his convo with the orc girl on the ship?
I just wish he wore pants sometimes
Yes, admittedly, a lot of that is shortcuts and compromises. If someone wants to go down the free-use path, it is deterimental to the gameplay experience to cut out the romance options of Panki and/or Lel. I do intend to add much more to the interactions between Panki and Lel so that the change is much less jarring.I'm wondering if some of the character personality shifts are going to be addressed in-story - like, Panki and Lel's personalities are completely different on the free-use route, even if you were in a relationship with them beforehand. They suddenly start treating Sparkle like absolute garbage, actively enjoying degrading her - and it seems like it completely nullifies any relationship you were in with them.
Part of that could be explained as the game rewriting them, DDLC-style, but that doesn't work for one of those two characters, for spoiler reasons.
This is entirely due to the renders required for the sexytimes scenes. I fully intend to remedy this when I have time to go back through the earlier scenes and add more dialog and images.One other thing that I'm finding a pretty silly, is Sparkle's habit of uncontrollably falling asleep after one orgasm, which really cuts off sexual encounters partway through a lot of the time, especially when there's more than two people involved - and also is something that's inconsistent, since it didn't happen with the earlier sex scenes, or those where she uses her spells
Not so. When you choose degredation that's what you get. In the future it will be more clear and less blunt but still choosing to be at the bottom will have like consequences.What I'm getting from that though, is that underneath the surface they're all terrible people, and even the ones who say they care about Sparkle...don't - which is depressing
In an upcoming update free-use Sparkle won't confront Kayden. It would be out-of-character at that point. But otherwise, yes, there is certainly an influence to the perception of Sparkle and her value/use.I wonder how much things are going to change with the group dynamics after the events of the last update, since even on the free-use route Sparkle tells Kayden to go fuck himself and shows that she's fully aware that the group would fall apart without her.
Would make sense that she could leverage that to demand better treatment.
Mind you, I already think it's pretty stupid that they aren't grateful for what she does for them, rather than treating her as trash for it - is Kayden's super-toxic influence responsible for that? The game's influence? Or are they just a bunch of losers?
Hmm... Panki does not override free-use but her attitude certainly does change on that route. I'm not sure what you're read/run into here?Did something change ?
Last time i played, i started a relation with panki and by curiosity i tried the free use route which got rejected by panki because i was hers alone.
She still treated sparkle in a worse way than usual, but it wasn't that bad you know, it was more like "you're at the bottom, you will obey, but you are mine, you obey me first".
The super zoomed-in was a suggestion to cut down on renders and, while it certainly does work, it feels more like a shortcut than a final decision. I'll definitely go back and add more images and dialog later.It's a shame, really; I would've liked to keep the bites in the harem route.
So far the harem route sex scenes are visually quite short, less intimate, and at least half black-screen-with-text - especially the second one, the one following the baths, which is mainly just Sparkle getting her clit rubbed (or a handjob depending on her form) and passing out followed by a blank screen describing the others having much more involved and intimate sex, and is super zoomed-in for some reason
Hmm... I'll figure out a way to handle a hetero "owner" outside of the lesbian stuff. And Sparkle will soon have the opportunity to restore her hairI really doesn't like one aspect, I tired to play one route to playing a submissive, more and more corrupted into a slut who getting used and getting used to it, slowly transformed into a sex slave/ heal slut. But all characters apart from panki are real duche and relates to some weird bizarre fetishes, and I'm not into lesbian stuff. I miss some nice male owner for my sex slave.
Something completely different I loved the milk slave getting big tits, but why had to cut her hair , I don't like short hair woman. I wish there would be a path for regrow the hair for the milk slave.
Thank you so very much!Excelente game great writing so great that I don't care to much about the sex scenes Wejit is the best can't wait to give this game my money
Yup. 100%Yeah, I feel like the sex scenes in the sparkle harem and the solo Panki route are much smaller than the free use route. I mean I understand why, but I would prefer them to be a bit longer, with more renders and text.
Maybe they can be revisited later?
I have some notes on this already that align with your wishes.Loot puppy route = BEST. I just wish there was even more cruelty to Sparkle and the choices made a little more impactful in that role. For example (minor spoiler) if you are a loot puppy and you have the opportunity to tell Kayden off for his shit he cuts you off after a few lines and just gags you.
Yeah WTF happened to him? He's not acting like himself at all.Uh, did I missed something in the early story or does Leigh really has an utter garbage of a character arc? I mean, he started as a nice likable character, with some friendly cuddling and warm attitude towards the MC, and then suddenly he turns into some crazy yandere piece of shit with an ultimate punchable face and behaviour, who's jealous of MC and utterly hates their guts. I assume that it is supposed to be some sort of "reveal" (like, everything isn't what it seems), but in reality it just looks as if the author decided that doesn't like that character anymore and decided to completely change him (both visually and personality-wise). Really breaks the immersion, which is a great shame, since both the story and characters in this game (for the most part) are interesting and nicely-written (compared to the other similar games)...
You can turn off "foreshadowing" and "backpedaling" in the options and Sparkle will not get these warnings or second chances to change her mind.I must say, i'm a bit unhappy for this change. I personally like being reluctant and being forced into free-use situations. So I did not see this as a bug at all. Because while i may object openly and pretend I don't like it, I most certainly want to be taken without permission as often, and as violently, as possible. But playing as sparkle, I would never admit that in the game. But I would still purposefully put myself into situations where that would happen, and I would piss people off as much as possible so they would be rougher with me.
(also I still don't think it's fair to say 'here it is!' when it's not available in this thread to download. It would be more appropriate to say, these are the patch notes for the private version which you can only currently access by paying for it.)
Thank you so much! As I mentioned to a friend on Discord, "Well I'm trying to keep that feeling going by riding the line between outright objection and begrudging acceptance on that particular "slow corruption" route. The point where Sparkle eventually "leans in to it" will likely be near the very end of the game for people with this sort of coy playstyle. With a less reluctant playstyle the compliance and deepening degradation will occur much faster since Sparkle is not acting bashful."
Please do!
Yes. There has been a tonne of code restructuring.
Thank you so very much! I really, really appreciate you saying so
Wejit and Ooyum offer different strengths and weaknesses so please feel free to choose the one you personally prefer. Outside of some complaints, choosing Ooyum is not a drastic game-changing issue.
Yes to your question concerning Lel.
Thanks very much! Honestly that's very nice to hear.
That cunning little green filmosomer.
I'm going to work on that. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
You're welcome! And thanks!
Thank you!
Thank you for this. I've added a lot to my notes!
Ah! I see...
Hmm... for the fairy stuff...
Have you met an introvert? Have you truly "gotten to know" an introvert whom was comfortable with you? They can be weird. And I know... I am one.
Thank you so very much!
Thank you!
He is indeed.
No pants!
Yes, admittedly, a lot of that is shortcuts and compromises. If someone wants to go down the free-use path, it is deterimental to the gameplay experience to cut out the romance options of Panki and/or Lel. I do intend to add much more to the interactions between Panki and Lel so that the change is much less jarring.
This is entirely due to the renders required for the sexytimes scenes. I fully intend to remedy this when I have time to go back through the earlier scenes and add more dialog and images.
Not so. When you choose degredation that's what you get. In the future it will be more clear and less blunt but still choosing to be at the bottom will have like consequences.
In an upcoming update free-use Sparkle won't confront Kayden. It would be out-of-character at that point. But otherwise, yes, there is certainly an influence to the perception of Sparkle and her value/use.
Hmm... Panki does not override free-use but her attitude certainly does change on that route. I'm not sure what you're read/run into here?
The super zoomed-in was a suggestion to cut down on renders and, while it certainly does work, it feels more like a shortcut than a final decision. I'll definitely go back and add more images and dialog later.
Hmm... I'll figure out a way to handle a hetero "owner" outside of the lesbian stuff. And Sparkle will soon have the opportunity to restore her hair
Thank you so very much!
Yup. 100%
I have some notes on this already that align with your wishes.
Yeah WTF happened to him? He's not acting like himself at all.
You can turn off "foreshadowing" and "backpedaling" in the options and Sparkle will not get these warnings or second chances to change her mind.