Rozhok

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Jun 29, 2017
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Needs a proofreader / editor, as it's pretty clear english is not the dev's main language. Other than that I quite liked it. Hot ladies, big tiddies and good renders.
 

hitmanbhi

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Aug 2, 2017
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brother really chose to base his game off arguably one of the worst korean pornhwas out there. korean Manhwas have terrible writing already whether its porn or not. They don't know how to actually develop an arc, hopefully this isnt a 1 for 1 copy of the plot.
But you cannot deny that they also have the best art (being coloured). ;)

Agree with writing part, although it's still not worst than Manhua with cultivation crap they throw at nearly plot.
 

Harem Trooper

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Oct 4, 2017
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bruh... Queen Bee...Andrew & Active Volcano, aka one is a self proclaimed mega ultra cuck while the other is just a cuck with some weird mom-ntr fetish. I already know what will happen with MC mom, so people should be prepared that there will come a big amount of NTR here, even if its not on the main love interest but on almost all female characters. At least lets have this developer will make the "revenge" towards the landlord statisfying unlike the orginal pornhwa.
 

MrBenny

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Jul 20, 2021
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Well, I tried and could not complete this title...I'm just not a fan of the content. And with how this project has been received so far, as well seeing how much efforts had gone into creating decent looking renders...I feel it might have been better to see a story reversal (parody), instead of following the Korean Queen Bee beta cuck story to a tee. The story could have gone the opposite direction as a parody, where MC turns the tables on the cuck story that this title was adapted from.

Then maybe there would be more interest with a much larger fanbase that prefers to see a positive MC story. Instead of one that makes the reader feel uncomfortable following the life of a beta loser being shit on by everyone. This is just an out there suggestion for content that might develop a larger fanbase, as well something I might be more interested in seeing.

Well I hope the story progresses soon for the developers sake...where it's becomes more interesting and gains more support. Though I could be wrong, but at the beginning of September I thought I saw 31 subscribers on this developer's Patreon, but checking now it's dropped to 24. :unsure:

Anyway good luck with your future endeavor.

Regards.
 
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