I'll check it out. Can't promise if I'll actually remember to verify what's changed or if I read the little bits of dialogue here and there... I refer mostly to the graphical content, but don't get me wrong I like dialogue too.I've uploaded the first 2 and a half Chapters of my Re-Write of the game already to the mod section if you want to give it a look over.
It doesn't really change the fundamentals of the story or anything, I've just written the characters with more personality? But it's still within the framework of who the developer intended them to be.
It is quite an extensive dialogue Re-Write though, there is a lot of empty space in this game that I felt just made for quite a vacuous reading experience.