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Mod Ren'Py Heart Problems [Xenorav] [English] Dialogue Re-Write ver. 0.30 (CH1 to 3)

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Do you want to see a Chapter 2 Re-Write or is the original Dialogue fine as it is?

  • Yes, I'd like to see this continue.

    Votes: 932 86.7%
  • No, the Original script is fine as it is.

    Votes: 143 13.3%

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Chinwiskers

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Quick Update:

I've decided to make the relationship points visible on positive (and negative) dialogue choice options to make the system more transparent.

Some of the characters I've noticed don't have a fully fleshed out set of consequences for this system yet but for now I will at least make it clear which points you gain and how many of them for a particular conversation choice:

Screenshot Example:
Screenshot 2024-09-14 161848.png
 
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kazama09

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Please add some MILF acronym conversion between MC and Amelie. It will make conversion really hot.
Let MC tell Amelie that What a hot MILF she is.
 
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M0narh

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Hi Chinwiskers . I wanted to ask, will you keep updating until the game is completed, or is it a one-time event(judging by the tag “completed”)?

I, for example, don't really need drastic changes, the main thing that instead of aunt was mom, and instead of cousins sisters.
 
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Chinwiskers

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Hi Chinwiskers . I wanted to ask, will you keep updating until the game is completed, or is it a one-time event(judging by the tag “completed”)?
Sorry for the confusion! I have removed the "Completed" tag from this post, it is indeed ongoing! I'm finalizing the v0.40 release, filtering through from Chapter 1 up to Chapter 4 to make sure all is well!


I, for example, don't really need drastic changes, the main thing that instead of aunt was mom, and instead of cousins sisters.
That was indeed my initial focus alongside fleshing out the dialogue more (the original script does, I feel, seem very bare bones in conversations between characters) and I certainly will continue with that effort going forward!

Thanks for taking an interest!
 

Een Vieze Vent

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I never played heart attack problems, but your mod surely seems toptier. I will wait for you to finish up your very appreciated work to finally start playing it. Everyone knows mom + sisters is the ultimate wincest combo (y)
 
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Bobsalec

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Nov 17, 2022
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Quick Update!:

Decided to try a new main menu theme song, let me know if it's a bust or not it's a quick job to reverse it!

Personally I like the music, but the "throbbing" in and out isn't in sync with the music. IDK how hard it would be to fix that, so if you can't then maybe just remove the throbbing
 
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Bobsalec

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I can try tweak it, I'm not that great with musical stuff though haha. But I can try!
No worries, I was just trying to give some feedback. But, I might have a bug rn, I'm not sure. Is there supposed to be a walkthrough in the game? I don't see one with my game, plus I think I'm missing an option for a scene in chapter 2, when Amelie is over at the apartment, she leaves after I kiss her. Does it just end like that? I looked in the old game walkthrough, and it seems to suggest another scene. I might just be wrong though

here is where I looked, I know you changed dialogue, but I feel like it's skipped something. Specifically I'm referring to the "Apartment with Amelie" section in chapter 2.


I also attached my recent save in case it's any help. Honestly I just hope I'm being an idiot here lol
 
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Chinwiskers

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No worries, I was just trying to give some feedback. But, I might have a bug rn, I'm not sure.
All feedback is always welcome! I appreciate you taking the time to share whatever concerns, ideas or criticisms you have as it's not always easy to observe them from a creative perspective. So thanks !

here is where I looked, I know you changed dialogue, but I feel like it's skipped something. Specifically I'm referring to the "Apartment with Amelie" section in chapter 2.

I also attached my recent save in case it's any help. Honestly I just hope I'm being an idiot here lol
I downloaded and checked out your save file, thanks for that convenience! And no you are NOT being an idiot! These sorts of things absolutely should be looked at and rectified to avoid confusion!

Is there supposed to be a walkthrough in the game? I don't see one with my game.
The version 0.40 that I'm currently working on contains the walkthrough elements that will make the written ones redundant:

Screenshot 2024-09-28 073414.png

plus I think I'm missing an option for a scene in chapter 2, when Amelie is over at the apartment, she leaves after I kiss her. Does it just end like that? I looked in the old game walkthrough, and it seems to suggest another scene. I might just be wrong though
Regarding that particular scene, I believe that part of the story is before the moment the guide is referencing.

There is a scene further in that chapter where Amelie returns with you and I suspect that is where the walkthrough is focusing the guide.
 
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Bobsalec

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All feedback is always welcome! I appreciate you taking the time to share whatever concerns, ideas or criticisms you have as it's not always easy to observe them from a creative perspective. So thanks !


I downloaded and checked out your save file, thanks for that convenience! And no you are NOT being an idiot! These sorts of things absolutely should be looked at and rectified to avoid confusion!


The version 0.40 that I'm currently working on contains the walkthrough elements that will make the written ones redundant:


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Regarding that particular scene, I believe that part of the story is before the moment the guide is referencing.

There is a scene further in that chapter where Amelie returns with you and I suspect that is where the walkthrough is focusing the guide.
Thank you so much for the reply; I couldn't tell if I had messed up and misinterpreted the guide or if there was a bug. This rewrite has been great so far, can't wait for V0.40, and yea I was a dingus and didn't see the part of your earlier post saying the walkthrough was in the upcoming V0.40 release
 
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