Going to compile some notes here:
-Picking up girls at the park progresses time, hypnotising girls doesn't.
-Chatting to Ava in the living room doesn't give any affection, and for some reason the dialogue says +10 affection here too. Also, "chatting togheter" is spelt incorrectly.
-Levelling up your progress with the girls doesn't have any in-game indicators. Should definitely include that (or just change the affection to be capped at 100 instead of 5x100 and lower the gains appropriately)
-I attempted to flirt with Ava while she was in the living room instead of the kitchen, and it deleted the stored variables for time/day.
-If you pass time by chatting with Ava in the living room, the time will increment by 1 hour (and can go past 24 hours) but it won't update what time of day it is or anything like that.
-Typo talking to Skylar "wondering if yuo needed help."
-Talking to Skylar after her nudes get leaked as the message " I think I'll go talk to Reyna, she should be at the College>> " with the unnecessary ">>" showing.
-Looking at the girl's you've hypnotised, having a button for each that says "Fuck" before immediately moving to a scene of them giving a blowjob, with a separate button in this area labelled "Fuck" again that only does vaginal scenes seems weird. The first button should be labelled "Sex" to be both different and work as an umbrella for the following options, and the order of the Fuck and Blowjob buttons should be switched around to fit how porn scenes normally progress.
-Having your hypnotized girls have two gifs for each scene is good, but having it randomly 50/50 between what to use when you're trying to see them both is frustrating. Even if you don't end up expanding on these options, you should at least not have it repeat the same gif that is already playing.
-Picking up random girls at the park with the same name as the core characters is kinda weird. Should probably take "Ava" out of the possible options here.
-One of Reyna's cum gifs seems to be disjointed. It starts with a freeze frame of her with cum on her face, switches to 30 seconds of dick sucking, then switches to 30 seconds of a facial that should end with that initial freeze frame.
-While in your room, you can access your regular or special girls, then hit return when you're done. Hitting return after fucking a regular girl sends you back to the page for your regular girls, but hitting return after fucking a special girl either sends you back to the list of your regular girls or to your bedroom, depending on which passage you entered the special girl selection from. This should be more consistent across options.
-Choosing to fuck Ava in the living room has a minor typo, saying "backq" instead of "back" at the end of the passage.
-Fucking Ava in the living room only progresses time by 1 hour if you finished by cumming, and won't re-check the time of day it should be after the scene ends. Same as the issues with chatting with her in the living room more or less.
-Victoria being a girl you specifically encounter while out jogging, having her own scene, then getting lumped in with the regular girls instead of the special ones feels weird.