VN Ren'Py Heaven's Door [Ch.1 .01] [AlterWorlds]

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Oh I'm sure that he will fit in a lifetime's worth of fucking into the little time he has left with these girls. My main problem is why is he only seeing them once a week? He says himself that he's not working at the moment due to his condition, has limited time and seems to have plenty of money. I'm not saying to go to Heaven's Door every night, but why only a Thursday? What is he doing with the rest of his time? :LOL:
He passes by there on a weekly trip to and from somewhere. One side of that trip is probably New Orleans, just 'cause its mentioned as the nearest large city. It is implied in the hospital scene that he isn't receiving any treatment so its not for that. He stated he isn't currently working like you said. Maybe he's participating in a study because of his situation? Going into the city for scans or whatnot? He's just biding his time it seems like...
 

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Were you paying attention to anything that was going on?
'Course he didn't. Isn't this usually the case with some critics ??:whistle:

Nova explicitly tells you that she's looking for a way out as she's getting old, so her exploring options to settle down with someone wealthy and matches her vibe is a good reason for her to be flirty
Damn, forgot that important detail. And here I thought it was the MC's eyes, impeccable beard, or pecs that got her attention, well, one of the things after the obvious one situated lower from his abs area she already gave her ok for.;)

Gotta say, she's a great-looking woman, definitely love her sweet lips and am looking forward to seeing them work their magic on MC's dick, but sadly, she sounds exactly like every gold digger that ever existed IRL, and don't even get me started on her ridiculous expectations from the man she expects to marry her. A 35 yo single mom and stripper getting married to a young, attractive millionaire like the MC sounds as likely to happen as me saying I'll buy myself a damn Bugatti by working minimum wage... maybe in the next 100 or so years if I don't spend anything, an impossibility in the near future tho.:cry:

About Aurora... she was just doing her job and didn't seem too into it, IF at all. She's probably forced to do it, either by circumstances, to pay off her debts and/or to support her family or some lunatic/crazy (ex)BF forces her to strip so he can make money off her. Then she saw that hunk of a man, me ahem... the MC, walking in there and getting the attention of two gorgeous strippers while doing their thing on stage, and introduced herself to him. The rest is details, physical attraction and good chemistry. Stripper or not, there's no denying she's a smoke show. Hope she'll be a part of the harem, cuz dayum... girl's got all the curves in all the right places.:love:

consider the type of guy that the dancers likely have to interact with the vast majority of the time at work.
a successful, attractive, and charismatic guy that seems to respect them and when needed stands up for them must feel like a breath of fresh air.
Sounds exactly like the kinda guy every single attractive woman would fall for, not just the strippers in this game, but the MC's definitely a much-needed breath of fresh air for them, both from a romantical/strictly sexual and a business perspective.

Who is Darlene again?
Her, the gilf (for some players) taking care of the entry fee.

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My main problem is why is he only seeing them once a week? He says himself that he's not working at the moment due to his condition, has limited time and seems to have plenty of money.
What is he doing with the rest of his time? :LOL:
You make a good point. I think it's probably bcz of all the pain he's going through. The MC doesn't want anyone seeing him suffer, not even that Leroy guy, his business partner and friend or employee he trusts enough to let him make big business decisions on his own, and put himself in a position where he thinks ppl only help or talk to him out of pity.

It would explain why he broke off his engagement or got dumped by his fiancée. Simple speculation on my part and nothing more than this, but I agree, it's very weird he doesn't visit the club on the weekend, when all the fun's going down and he can forget his daily struggles, even if it's for a few minutes. Who knows ?? We'll just have to wait on the next update(s) to shed light on this question.:unsure:
 
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Oh I'm sure that he will fit in a lifetime's worth of fucking into the little time he has left with these girls. My main problem is why is he only seeing them once a week? He says himself that he's not working at the moment due to his condition, has limited time and seems to have plenty of money. I'm not saying to go to Heaven's Door every night, but why only a Thursday? What is he doing with the rest of his time? :LOL:
it doesn't really matter imo, rest of the time is a blank, probably drinking himself into a coma. And he probably doesn't want to come off as a creep showing up every day. With how the "empty" days are handled, it doesn't matter anyway. But maybe we'll get a glimpse later on about what he does.
 

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it doesn't really matter imo, rest of the time is a blank, probably drinking himself into a coma. And he probably doesn't want to come off as a creep showing up every day. With how the "empty" days are handled, it doesn't matter anyway. But maybe we'll get a glimpse later on about what he does.
I would just like to see him doing a bit more with the time that he has left, but I'm sure that we will get to that. Especially once he starts spending more one on one time with the girls.
 
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it doesn't really matter imo, rest of the time is a blank, probably drinking himself into a coma. And he probably doesn't want to come off as a creep showing up every day. With how the "empty" days are handled, it doesn't matter anyway. But maybe we'll get a glimpse later on about what he does.
I would just like to see him doing a bit more with the time that he has left, but I'm sure that we will get to that. Especially once he starts spending more one on one time with the girls.
Going on Fridays or Saturdays (the busy nights) would be no good, the girls would have extra work and he wouldn't be able to just hang with them.
 

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I would just like to see him doing a bit more with the time that he has left, but I'm sure that we will get to that. Especially once he starts spending more one on one time with the girls.
we'll get to that for sure, for now his life seems to be quite empty by choice, but once the relationships start developing we'll get content with the girls outside the club setting (and Thursdays)
 

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Don't get me wrong, it weren't criticism. Again, just my opinion, that this game won't be for me. Nothing about game itself that is bad. I'm not target audience for this game and I just wanted something little similar like BW. Sadly for me, I'm not interested in harem and strip club setting. But still there is ton of games I will enjoy.



And about what I liked and didn't like in this game - I liked MC, liked girls, story could be interesting, nothing against it, but there are those two exact things I don't like - harem routes and strip club setting with strippers as LIs. That's it. And I ofc know there were harem routes in BW, but I didn't play them.
You know, the game is optionally harem. You can just follow one romance route at a time if that's what you really want, though obviously you'll miss quite a bit of content (but that's really no different than games that force branching and replays).
You really think some of the dingbats around here will see a difference? ;)

LOVE the start of this, some very interesting potential LI's (I'm gonna switch it up and go for EVERYONE!) and the story has me hooked, I wanna know more NOW damn it!
What? Going for everyone?!

My brain just can't take this sudden shift from the norm from you...

P.S. I'm right there with you. ;)
 

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That would be simply too stupid and kinda heartbreaking of him to do, if it turned out it's true. The guy has money, he can do a lot of good things to help other ppl and put some positivity out into the world, instead of drinking himself to sleep and spending all his hard-earned money on strippers and more drinks.

Judging by what we've seen so far, it seems like the MC really lost his will to fight for his survival and is only speeding up the inevitable without giving too many fucks about what he leaves behind and how many ppl his death will affect, and I do hope at least one of the girls will somehow manage to convince him to change his mind about this.:cautious:
I would just like to see him doing a bit more with the time that he has left, but I'm sure that we will get to that. Especially once he starts spending more one on one time with the girls.
Something to understand about patients that receive a terminal illness diagnosis, is that it's incredibly common to experience anticipatory grief. The fact that MC is a doctor and knows exactly what is likely in his future often makes that worse.

MC has clearly been dealing with that poorly for months by isolating himself, ignoring treatment options, and getting blackout drunk. I'm quite certain that a lot of the plot (regardless of if we get a happy ending or not) will be him working through this grief and learning to "live again" with the help of the LIs.
 
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Something to understand about patients that receive a terminal illness diagnosis, is that it's incredibly common to experience anticipatory grief. MC has clearly been dealing with that for months by isolating himself, ignoring treatment options, and getting blackout drunk. I'm quite certain that a lot of the plot (regardless of if we get a happy ending or not) will be him working through this grief and learning to "live again" with the help of the LIs.
Oh, there will be MANY happy endings.......
 

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I kinda got the idea that the MC was going to end up running/buying the club from the gist of the overview.
But all in all I'm really liking the story so far !
Great work!
 
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