VN Ren'Py Heaven's Door [Ch.1 .01] [AlterWorlds]

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Justaphase

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This game looks very promising and I am a massive fan of stripping! In fact I do it every night before bed! Just saying..
 
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Maviarab

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I was really itching to be quite rude to that user :ROFLMAO:
You itch...that's why I'm here...in all my evil, arrogant, opinionated, shiny helmetedness!

Need someone dealing with? Tell peeps to stop whining and crying? Put someone in their place? I'm your helmet :WeSmart:
 
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El bacca Del Chew

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I really enjoyed that first chapter/release

Such a cool VN so far, good renders and the story and chars are very entertaining
If i were able to give my 2cts : i would have give a slightly different approach at first, the girls being too easy to talk to too fast IMO.
But this is just a very minor detail as the way i would have seen it, would have been a bit more longer, yet sexier.
Meaning, the dancers feels attracted by the MC a bit too fast and when you know the type of guy you can cross path with in those clubs, the girls feel a bit too easy to convince than MC is a good guy, in a very short period.
I would have seen first a MC spending much more money on private dances = more sexier scenes, and then the girls would have seen that MC is not the usual guy and way more decent than most = interest picked and more eager to know him.

So a bit slower approach and more "credible" one to my eyes.
As they are dancers and not in a social club, they are here for the money, not making "friends". Thus, first contact is via money, and then they are maybe willing to really know this unusual customer.

As said just my 2 cents and anyway, the game is really cool as it is.
 

Maviarab

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*sighs*...

the girls being too easy to talk to too fast IMO.
See third quote of yours below...
MC spending much more money on private dances
So being a typical strip club goer then? Which he isn't...and they instantly recognise that. You know, full time...they can spot people easily.
they are here for the money
See above...

helmetedness? seriously?
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So the rest was fine....just not that bit? :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 
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El bacca Del Chew

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So being a typoical strip club goer then? Which he isn't...and they instantly recognise that. You know, full time...they can spot people easily.
Very valid point indeed

Yet it felt to me, and might be just me, so not a big deal... it felt a bit too fast.
But you know, it is really just a minor detail because i really recognize how well the script is written and chars built is well made.
Thus just a personal feeling.
 
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Rehwyn

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I really enjoyed that first chapter/release

Such a cool VN so far, good renders and the story and chars are very entertaining
If i were able to give my 2cts : i would have give a slightly different approach at first, the girls being too easy to talk to too fast IMO.
But this is just a very minor detail as the way i would have seen it, would have been a bit more longer, yet sexier.
Meaning, the dancers feels attracted by the MC a bit too fast and when you know the type of guy you can cross path with in those clubs, the girls feel a bit too easy to convince than MC is a good guy, in a very short period.
I would have seen first a MC spending much more money on private dances = more sexier scenes, and then the girls would have seen that MC is not the usual guy and way more decent than most = interest picked and more eager to know him.

So a bit slower approach and more "credible" one to my eyes.
As they are dancers and not in a social club, they are here for the money, not making "friends". Thus, first contact is via money, and then they are maybe willing to really know this unusual customer.

As said just my 2 cents and anyway, the game is really cool as it is.
*sighs*...


See third quote of yours below...

So being a typical strip club goer then? Which he isn't...and they instantly recognise that. You know, full time...they can spot people easily.

See above...


So the rest was fine....just not that bit? :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
In addition to what Maviarab said, keep in mind that only some of the LIs warmed up to MC so far. Your perspective is probably slightly skewed because they're obviously the ones with the most screen time. I'm sure some of the other strippers will take a little longer to open up.

The other thing to consider is what your type of guys the strippers typically have to deal with. I'm sure they very quickly could tell MC is not their typical customer. I can imagine that an attractive, charismatic, respectful, and apparently successful guy that isn't afraid to stand up for them against other assholes might feel like a breath of fresh air they'd like to be around, at least on slow nights like Thursday when they probably aren't earning much anyways.
 
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