VN Ren'Py Heaven's Door [Ch. 2 v0.2] [AlterWorlds]

[Dessolos]

since in the very beginning you find out that at least 3 of the girls dislike Fawn [pity cause she's gorgeous] yes making choices that select her over someone else would very likely burn bridges.


unless this were a different dev who sucked at story telling.

yeah that's why im thinking before I play the update I might need to ctrl skip skip through Chapter 1 and make a few different saves

 

[SamualHand]

Fuck Hannah!!!!

I would do that for you!

 

[Look-see]

"no NTR"

so that was a lie.

shame Hannah's model was nice. sucks also, although she was quick to act on faulty information she got screwed over also.

 

[Assman_6969]

Really???
You want that cheap whore whom comes back after cheating on MC.
You really have a forgiving heart but not me.
Unless she's pregnant with MC's child then I think again.

Bitch better have had a paternity test done and have the results with her stupid slut ass! That is needed for court when I take her ass to court and get custody of my child cause ain't no kid of mine being raised by some stupid easily manipulated bitch that just buys what some creep is selling her with weak proof and then she just fucks his scumbag ass without even having enough respect for mc to even ask him and confront him to know for sure! Nope bitch you are crazy! How much of an idiot are you to just believe some retard and then just fuck him? Thanks really cause no way would I want that fora wife!

Now to wonder why the hell would a game be about a strip club and once you enter you find out the girls don't even strip!!! This is just a big wtf moment here, if this is a real thing and strip clubs don't have the chics nude then why even bother with such a ridiculous idea of them giving lap dances in their bikini or undies.... thankfully last time I was in one they were nude where I live at but for who is not as lucky, just go to the club for that and have way more options there!

Why the hell after giving us Nikki is she given the least screen time and so much forced interest into someone we made clear we were not interested in when given that choice and told her so and we were back to hope to see Nikki again which clearly means I am not into you only your blonde beautiful Nikki??? I was hoping for far more than the little bit gotten and really hope that the next update is far more time with her or what a waste of such a great character to spend time on not even close to her her. If not for Aurora this would have sucked and even still that was left off putting to feel great bout the update so heres to next time

 

[Adhdclassic]

I want the Coral shy adorable

 

[FatGiant]

actually, he would just like a little dosh for his time, effort and expertise in making the mods.
and he isn't asking a lot, unlike every EA game i can think of.

One for sure way to make absolutely IMPOSSIBLE for me to even consider giving him ANY money, is by annoying me.

I don't respond well to these tactics. No, not even if I had the money to do it, I don't.

About EA, I refuse to play their games, even for free. Why? For the same reason.

Peace

 

[HornyyPussy]

"no NTR"

so that was a lie.

No

 

[duclamle]

Bitch better have had a paternity test done and have the results with her stupid slut ass! That is needed for court when I take her ass to court and get custody of my child cause ain't no kid of mine being raised by some stupid easily manipulated bitch that just buys what some creep is selling her with weak proof and then she just fucks his scumbag ass without even having enough respect for mc to even ask him and confront him to know for sure! Nope bitch you are crazy! How much of an idiot are you to just believe some retard and then just fuck him? Thanks really cause no way would I want that fora wife!

Why the hell after giving us Nikki is she given the least screen time and so much forced interest into someone we made clear we were not interested in when given that choice and told her so and we were back to hope to see Nikki again which clearly means I am not into you only your blonde beautiful Nikki??? I was hoping for far more than the little bit gotten and really hope that the next update is far more time with her or what a waste of such a great character to spend time on not even close to her her. If not for Aurora this would have sucked and even still that was left off putting to feel great bout the update so heres to next time

if Dev wants to bring Hannah back, he should fix the story that she doesn't have sex with that bastard, and replacing it with her dating inside the restaurant would be better. Otherwise, goodbye Hannah and never see you again.
About Niki, I think Dev did it right with chapter 2. She got too much spotlight in chapter 1, so it's time for her to give the stage to the other girls. This is only chapter 2, so there's no need to rush, man.

 

[drifter139]

One for sure way to make absolutely IMPOSSIBLE for me to even consider giving him ANY money, is by annoying me.

I don't respond well to these tactics. No, not even if I had the money to do it, I don't.

About EA, I refuse to play their games, even for free. Why? For the same reason.

Peace

oh no. how will he ever survive without your $2? dude, you aren't nearly important enough to have this big of an ego. he'll be fine without your money

 

[NeoEros]

"no NTR"

so that was a lie.

shame Hannah's model was nice. sucks also, although she was quick to act on faulty information she got screwed over also.

no joke, poor guy got diagnosed with inoperable brain cancer, came home witnessing his so-called "harmless" colleague fucking your gf (or fiancee i don't remember that well), and discovered that she was a fucking idiot that got easily manipulated into cheating behind his back by some photoshopped evidence of her bf's infidelity. Well he did punch the shit out of that bastard and dumped her on the spot so he's alright i guess, but between that and the cascade of girls' sad backstory makes it feel like a misery porn compared with the devs' previous work.

 

[FatGiant]

oh no. how will he ever survive without your $2? dude, you aren't nearly important enough to have this big of an ego. he'll be fine without your money

 

[Assman_6969]

is she Zenda from Bare Witness? View attachment 4870255

Nope It's Ayanna from Heaven's Door!

 

[United Critics]

Very good game, can't wait for more.

 

[United Critics]

Made a multi mod for this game

Features:

• Added hints/colored text to dialogue options
• Added the two lapdances to the gallery
• The gallery uses your name instead of default

Download:

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PIXELDRAIN MEGA

I hope you update this
Thanks for the mod.

 

[duclamle]

no joke, poor guy got diagnosed with inoperable brain cancer, came home witnessing his so-called "harmless" colleague fucking your gf (or fiancee i don't remember that well), and discovered that she was a fucking idiot that got easily manipulated into cheating behind his back by some photoshopped evidence of her bf's infidelity. Well he did punch the shit out of that bastard and dumped her on the spot so he's alright i guess, but between that and the cascade of girls' sad backstory makes it feel like a misery porn compared with the devs' previous work.

Yeah, adding in the betrayal of his girlfriend (or fiancee) makes sense for MC to come to this city but it complicates the story with more plot twists. Dev is really trying to make things difficult for himself.

 

[J.R.]

I hope you update this
Thanks for the mod.

He already has, but so far only for patrons available

 

[TonyMurray]

Yeah, adding in the betrayal of his girlfriend (or fiancee) makes sense for MC to come to this city but it complicates the story with more plot twists. Dev is really trying to make things difficult for himself.

Not really. It hits the first part - giving the reason for him "living" in that hotel room, but I don't see where the second part comes in. If it's just a bit of backstory, how does it make things more complicated? Unless you're expecting Hannah to turn up now and start trying to get in the way of the girls as she tries to win him back?

 

[NeoEros]

if Dev wants to bring Hannah back, he should fix the story that she doesn't have sex with that bastard, and replacing it with her dating inside the restaurant would be better. Otherwise, goodbye Hannah and never see you again.
About Niki, I think Dev did it right with chapter 2. She got too much spotlight in chapter 1, so it's time for her to give the stage to the other girls. This is only chapter 2, so there's no need to rush, man.

nah bringing Hannah back will be a huge mistake since her arc is complete: stupid bitch got easily manipulated into cheating on you and you dumped her on the spot with no hesitation. Just as simple as that. Adding her back only creates some forced drama and disgusts a lot of players like me since she proved her "worth" with her action.
Agree with your Nikki take: we're playing a harem (or so I have been told) game, so we're meant to spend time with at least most of the LIs as time goes on, so it makes sense she takes a backseat and lets others be in the spotlight. The only problem for me tho is the weird content split between Fawn and Aurora: you can have gentle kind Aurora but she's another girl with complicated issues, or you can have Fawn and enjoy a passionate sex scene but she's bitchy and unfriendly towards her colleagues. In the end I chose the Aurora route (although I did keep two saves) since it seems to be the most logical one, but still the choice seems counterintuitive.

 

[duclamle]

Not really. It hits the first part - giving the reason for him "living" in that hotel room, but I don't see where the second part comes in. If it's just a bit of backstory, how does it make things more complicated? Unless you're expecting Hannah to turn up now and start trying to get in the way of the girls as she tries to win him back?

I think MC has a problem with his family, in chapter 2, he hesitated to answer Niki about his family. If Dev adds a problem, he must add a solution. It seems that his writing skills have improved.

 

[duclamle]

nah bringing Hannah back will be a huge mistake since her arc is complete: stupid bitch got easily manipulated into cheating on you and you dumped her on the spot with no hesitation. Just as simple as that. Adding her back only creates some forced drama and disgusts a lot of players like me since she proved her "worth" with her action.
Agree with your Nikki take: we're playing a harem (or so I have been told) game, so we're meant to spend time with at least most of the LIs as time goes on, so it makes sense she takes a backseat and lets others be in the spotlight. The only problem for me tho is the weird content split between Fawn and Aurora: you can have gentle kind Aurora but she's another girl with complicated issues, or you can have Fawn and enjoy a passionate sex scene but she's bitchy and unfriendly towards her colleagues. In the end I chose the Aurora route (although I did keep two saves) since it seems to be the most logical one, but still the choice seems counterintuitive.

Like I said that the Dev wants bring her back, he must fix the story.
About Fawn and Aurora, Dev will have a solution because this game is a harem (I heard that but am not sure if it's really a harem or a partial harem).