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Did the dev change writers or something? I liked Bare Witness, quite a lot even though it clearly wasn't Shakespeare, but this one is actually painful to read.
Agree to disagree. I'm normally very sensitive to bad writing and immediately drop games I find poorly written. This one is better written than 99% of the games here and is even a slight improvement over Bare witnesss.

I'm not talking about the story, because it's too early to tell, just the writing in general.
 
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I'm well aware. It is however surprising coming from a proven dev, just how much worse this game is to its predecessor.
tbh I still need to play the last chapter of BW but I found chapter 1 much better than the first 4 chapters of BW still need to play chapter 2 of this game. BW made me go from really invested into the story right away to not giving a shit about it
 
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Patricia is a goddamned Magician her glass is floating during diner she needs to make my glass do the same.
 

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Let me get this straight - none of you have an issue with the premise of "MC walks into a strip joint and every female in sight immediately falls in love with him"?
 

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Let me get this straight - none of you have an issue with the premise of "MC walks into a strip joint and every female in sight immediately falls in love with him"?
not really because it's a strip club for one and well I just find the interactions between really well done. Like I actually feel like the girls care for him and are really nice and friendly and not all of them are thinking about his dick , only some. To me this concept was done in a feel good kind of why instead of I love you and I live for dick kind of way. I honestly felt like the girls wanted to be friends with him because of how nice and how the MC was portrayed. Since unlike their other clients it didn't seem the MC was only after getting laid and tits / ass. Much better than if it was a college game tbh
 
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Let me get this straight - none of you have an issue with the premise of "MC walks into a strip joint and every female in sight immediately falls in love with him"?
Is that what you think happened? The bartender was immediately drawn to him, for whatever reason. Then he went in and sat down and Nikki approached. Maybe it was just curiosity - he wasn't local (remember it's a small town), he's good looking and probably at least vaguely smells like money, so she sat down and he was nice, and talked to her about things other than her tits. Then Patricia came, maybe out of the same curiosity - increased because Nikki seemed to like him. Patricia also almost said at dinner that she'd been looking for a man since her husband died - but cut herself off because it sounded bad. Mika showed up to sit with Nikki and Patricia, because they're sort of her guardians in the club - but she hasn't shown a ton of interest so far. After he'd been there a few times the four of them went for a late dinner together.

Now, those three clearly like him or at least consider him good company (remember nothing has happened with any of them yet except for lap dances which he paid for and IIRC a kiss on the cheek or two.) That alone is bound to make the others curios - especially Sylvanie who, when she body checks Aurora in Chapter 2, says it's "a little friendly competition" (and acts as if the whole club is a competition between the women). There are a few others who we haven't really had much interaction with, but - especially after the fight, the incident helping the bouncer, and the new revelation that he's a doctor - he's definitely generating some interest and (I assume) no small amount of gossip.

Is that what happened or did "every female in sight immediately fall in love with him"?

Edit: The most unrealistic part to me, so far, is that all of these women are model-hot and working at a small town strip club but you have to make some allowances for the fact that it's a porn game.
 
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Is that what you think happened? The bartender was immediately drawn to him, for whatever reason. Then he went in and sat down and Nikki approached. Maybe it was just curiosity - he wasn't local (remember it's a small town), he's good looking and probably at least vaguely smells like money, so she sat down and he was nice, and talked to her about things other than her tits. Then Patricia came, maybe out of the same curiosity - increased because Nikki seemed to like him. Patricia also almost said at dinner that she'd been looking for a man since her husband died - but cut herself off because it sounded bad. Mika showed up to sit with Nikki and Patricia, because they're sort of her guardians in the club - but she hasn't shown a ton of interest so far. After he'd been there a few times the four of them went for a late dinner together.

Now, those three clearly like him or at least consider him good company (remember nothing has happened with any of them yet except for lap dances which he paid for and IIRC a kiss on the cheek or two.) That alone is bound to make the others curios - especially Sylvanie who, when she body checks Aurora in Chapter 2, says it's "a little friendly competition" (and acts as if the whole club is a competition between the women). There are a few others who we haven't really had much interaction with, but - especially after the fight, the incident helping the bouncer, and the new revelation that he's a doctor - he's definitely generating some interest and (I assume) no small amount of gossip.

Is that what happened or did "every female in sight immediately fall in love with him"?

Edit: The most unrealistic part to me, so far, is that all of these women are model-hot and working at a small town strip club but you have to make some allowances for the fact that it's a porn game.
Porn game mate. Nothing makes sense
 

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OFC it does! But only in porn logic. :p
Not a ton of porn logic in this yet. I mean the attractiveness of the women for a small town strip club is because porn but if it were full on porn logic he'd be a lot further along the path with most of them at this point. So far he hasn't really started on the path with any of them - his two dinner guests ran away and Fawn blew him but mainly ( I think) because she thinks it's a competition and doesn't know it's a harem game yet. In full porn logic he would have at least gotten a bj from Nikki at the hospital.
 

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I'm ok if they do, but they haven't yet. Two of them ran away crying when he took them on dates.
that's why I like this one alot so far. Gonna play Chapter 2 in next day or 2. To me I really felt like they were just being friendly , having a nice conversations acting kind of like friends / making a new one. It really didn't feel like neither of them was really trying to have sex. ( tho I think at least 1 of them did) To me if a game is gonna have a cast of characters "fall" for the MC quickly this feels like a great way to do it. Cause honestly with all the attention he was getting it was done in a feels good kind of why and not he has a magical dick kind of way alot of other games do it. So even when some porn logic does eventually show up I don't think it's gonna be that bad or much of it.
 
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Not a ton of porn logic in this yet. I mean the attractiveness of the women for a small town strip club is because porn but if it were full on porn logic he'd be a lot further along the path with most of them at this point. So far he hasn't really started on the path with any of them - his two dinner guests ran away and Fawn blew him but mainly ( I think) because she thinks it's a competition and doesn't know it's a harem game yet. In full porn logic he would have at least gotten a bj from Nikki at the hospital.
Fawn also takes MC back to her place and fucks him, if you make the right (wrong?) choices.
 
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that's why I like this one alot so far. Gonna play Chapter 2 in next day or 2. To me I really felt like they were just being friendly , having a nice conversations acting kind of like friends / making a new one. It really didn't feel like neither of them was really trying to have sex. ( tho I think at least 1 of them did) To me if a game is gonna have a cast of characters "fall" for the MC quickly this feels like a great way to do it. Cause honestly with all the attention he was getting it was done in a feels good kind of why and not he has a magical dick kind of way alot of other games do it. So even when some porn logic does eventually show up I don't think it's gonna be that bad or much of it.
There's also a question now of how they're going to react and what kind of people they are. The fact that he's dying is going to get around sooner rather than later. These are not successful women (though some of them are just paying for school.) They are strippers in a small town in Louisiana. A young, attractive doctor is a golden ticket all on his own. The fact that he's going to die in two years will be a big negative for some, but could be a plus for others (marry a young, attractive doctor for two years and then inherit everything.) With all of the x factors, his relationships going forward are going to be complicated at the very least. I mean yeah, he probably survives somehow but the characters don't know that yet.
 

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Fawn also takes MC back to her place and fucks him, if you make the right (wrong?) choices.
Never got that far. I tried both paths but so far I like Aurora better than Fawn so that's the one I saved. (And only got as far as the BJ - apparently I made a "wrong" choice at some point.)
 
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Let me get this straight - none of you have an issue with the premise of "MC walks into a strip joint and every female in sight immediately falls in love with him"?
Almost all these games have an unrealistic premise to some degree. No normal person gets pussy thrown at them IRL like they do in AVNs. So I don't personally factor that in much compared to renders and characters. I am liking this one so far.
 
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Given the new release, I'll give my random thoughts. I'll put them under spoilers for space.
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The story is too good, but it still has a few choices for player to decide to affect the story. It's more like a kinetic novel.
I much prefer a game with few choices where the choices actually mean something over a story that stops every couple of paragraphs to offer choices that have absolutely no impact whatsoever.

To those asking if this is a harem game or more like Bare Witness, the devs have said it is a harem game; however, the player can reject any characters they like. So, you can have every character in the harem or you can have only one. It was also stated that half or less of the characters are bisexual or bi-curious therefore depending on your choices, group sex combos might be limited or unavailable.
 
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I feel some of the people here have never played a single game or watched a single movie/show/anime in their lives.

when you play a AAA game, is the MC the chosen one or the village baker whose sole contribution to society is baking bread everyday? What would be more interesting to play for the general normie audience?

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I feel some of the people here have never played a single game or watched a single movie/show/anime in their lives.

when you play a AAA game, is the MC the chosen one or the village baker whose sole contribution to society is baking bread everyday? What would be more interesting to play for the general normie audience?

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Oh oh is the guy/gal you never see in any show/anime or whatever :ROFLMAO:
Now seriously, I think you might be right tho or better say they watch or play games without even paying attention to the story, character development etc. And I mean this in general, not really related to a particular topic or anything. I know a lot of ppl that do that.

About the update, short but with quite a few questions left unanswered, thing that i hope will change in the new update whenever that will be. And about the now i guess famous, beginning scene... yeah you know witch one...I have no idea what the heck ppl saw in it that made them crazy... I see it more on the cheating aspect then ntr, beside we have nothing to do anymore with her and hope we won't in the future either, tho I can sense a "plot twist" in the future.
 
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