VN Ren'Py Heaven's Door [Ch. 2 v0.2] [AlterWorlds]

[boraborat]

This game is by far one of the worstbest I’ve ever played. There’s nothingso much interesting about it and the main character has no charisma at some point, his arrogance even makes him unpleasant. The game’s premise is too limitedgreat and the story nevercan really develops beyond that.

here, youre welcome!
though you should work on your writing, perhaps in future there wont be such kind souls to correct all your mistakes and misspellings...at the end this is a public place, and proper communication is MUST, so properly articulating your thoughts is of the utmost importance. good luck and cheers!

 

[Rehwyn]

... the story never really develops beyond that.

Must be useful to be able to read chapters from the future, considering we're at Chapter 2 of a planned 12-15 chapters. Otherwise, how could you know the story never develops beyond the initial premise?

Unless of course you judge every story from the intro Act.

 

[MiltonPowers]

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[Razzier]

This game is by far one of the worst I’ve ever played. There’s nothing interesting about it and the main character has no charisma at some point, his arrogance even makes him unpleasant. The game’s premise is too limited and the story never really develops beyond that.

'main character has no charisma at some point, his arrogance even makes him unpleasant.'

A guy short on time, can be a bit of a cunt if you play him as one. More news at 11. He's interesting, -because- of the fact that he isn't some macho, ultra-charismatic guy but someone who is obviously trying to cope with his situation and using the strip-club as a moment of normalcy. (Which is absurdist, given that a strip-club isn't normal, but given his day to day, and what is currently going on, it very much is 'normal'.)

'The game’s premise is too limited and the story never really develops beyond that.'

The game barely started, how can it develop beyond it's premise when the premise is still being established as of Chapter 2? Big words, without any of the critical thinking.

 

[Lord Volt]

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Oh fuck yeah, can't wait for the update!

 

[e6mill]

given that a strip-club isn't normal

Sorry for you.

 

[Assman_6969]

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"CAN SOMEONE GET THIS GUY WITH NO CHARISMA A GOSH DAMN SUIT TO WHERE ON A DATE WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN WHO DESREVES A NIGHT THAT WILL END WITH THIS GUY GOING 100 & MAKING SURE HER BACK GETS BLOWN OUT AND SHE WALKS A BIT FUNNY FOR A DAY OR 2 JUST FOR LOOKING SO FUCKING DELICIOUSLY SEXXXY AND GOING OUT TO HELP HIM FORGET HE IS DYING WITH NOT MUCH TIME LEFT!! WITH THIS BABE, SHE IS ONE OF THEM GREAT GALS THAT WON'T HAVE ANY THINKING ABOUT THAT SITUATION AT ALL ONLY THINKING BOUT HER & WHAT TROUBLE THE 2 OF YOU CAN MAKE TOGETHER"

GOOD QUALITY WRITING......... AGAIN & NO BLUEBALLS UNTIL ABANDONED APPEARS
For sure been ready for her to get more time! She was my 1st chic I was interested in and she hasn't had near enough focus so I hope this update is well spent time with her and we get a very NICE time after the date with her actually strippin for us and then we get to smash. As good as she is looking here it'd be a complete waste if this ends with some underwhelming jerk off or eating her pussy. Let's just hope from number of animations we are in for a hell of a great time with no disappointment anywhere in sight! I was glad their first game didn't do the idea so many do and drag out sex like it has levels to get to. When we meet Val(my fav girl by far) she has no issue or game to play, she's down to fuck and that turns into something I was all about in an avn! The writer knew how to keep it interesting and to not rely on having to keep geeting to a certain level with a woman and you get a reward like some of these games seem to think this is how fucking works or something on that level which is wrong and very ridiculous to think you have to attain certain objectives that lead up a level of sexual acts between you and a woman.

SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT DUMB SHIT & NEVER THE GOOD IDEAS
Do you really think pussy has a leveling system cause try again. If this is how you think than virgins should not make avn's cause you ruin them with the stupid blueballing ideas. If you are one of the many who have a very popular female, a very fan fav or the hot ass milf that is the one everyone wants and all you do is repeating the same blue balling tease bullshit you just cannot write actual quality material that wouldn't had mattered if the 2nd sex scene with the milf had went all the way and yet still the same popularity contuinues for those who can write quality characters otherwise you get update after update with the same slow walk until the ending of the horrible game itself is ending and then you get some very weak and overall bullshit sex scene that is not good and never worth the build up that is a sign to drop that game cause it's a milker who just steals $ and will abandon the game cause they can't think how to come up with more bullshit to where they have to keep answering the same questions they never answer!

YOU WILL BE IN FOR VARIETY AND NO GIMICS
This dev wasn't like that with his previous game and delivered great quality updates no matter if the li hadalready had sex with mc or not the story kept moving forward and not some dumb game being played trying to reach levels to get sex scenes they just went with the way the story flowed which is a huge positive with these types of games so I assume with the way things seem to have jumped off here in the follow after ythe first great FINISHED GAME THIS SHOULD NOT DISAPPOINT IN ANY OF THE WAYS SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT AND FAIL AT DELIVERING GREAT CONTENT AND EXPLAINS WHY SO MUCH HAS ABANDONED BESIDE THE TITLES OF SO MANY GAMES THAT SUDDENLY DISAPPEAR OR WILL BE HOT FOR A SHORT TIME THEN SUDDENLY....ABANDONED.

TOO MANY TO NAME ANYMORE
Way to many of the same old ball busters just with the same same same. What is it with how the majority of these all have one or 2 females that are very popular and you have to gain some bullshit points and attain levels for pussy like some dumb virgin thinks is the way to have sex. Keep trying chumps or take notes from a game that fucking isn't some grand prize for going above and beyond reality to get pussy from a woman! You can give the players pussy and still have them keep supporting your work and I would dare say the more sex with those favorites you give the better the game you will have which means more support from the people who want to see more of that and not the little support for some wasted time and waiting game for what will maybe come but not looking forward to good scenes with the girls liked since they will be one and story ends like the 59 same dumb endings! THIS ONE HERE IS SHAPING UP TO BE GOOD SO FAR AND LOOKS TO TAKE IT FROM GOOD TO WHO KNOWS AFTER THE SNEAK PIC!!! NIKKI IS BOUT TO GO BIG ONE CAN HOPE

 

[ohhiimfox]

 

[Dessolos]

"CAN SOMEONE GET THIS GUY WITH NO CHARISMA A GOSH DAMN SUIT TO WHERE ON A DATE WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN WHO DESREVES A NIGHT THAT WILL END WITH THIS GUY GOING 100 & MAKING SURE HER BACK GETS BLOWN OUT AND SHE WALKS A BIT FUNNY FOR A DAY OR 2 JUST FOR LOOKING SO FUCKING DELICIOUSLY SEXXXY AND GOING OUT TO HELP HIM FORGET HE IS DYING WITH NOT MUCH TIME LEFT!! WITH THIS BABE, SHE IS ONE OF THEM GREAT GALS THAT WON'T HAVE ANY THINKING ABOUT THAT SITUATION AT ALL ONLY THINKING BOUT HER & WHAT TROUBLE THE 2 OF YOU CAN MAKE TOGETHER"

GOOD QUALITY WRITING......... AGAIN & NO BLUEBALLS UNTIL ABANDONED APPEARS
For sure been ready for her to get more time! She was my 1st chic I was interested in and she hasn't had near enough focus so I hope this update is well spent time with her and we get a very NICE time after the date with her actually strippin for us and then we get to smash. As good as she is looking here it'd be a complete waste if this ends with some underwhelming jerk off or eating her pussy. Let's just hope from number of animations we are in for a hell of a great time with no disappointment anywhere in sight! I was glad their first game didn't do the idea so many do and drag out sex like it has levels to get to. When we meet Val(my fav girl by far) she has no issue or game to play, she's down to fuck and that turns into something I was all about in an avn! The writer knew how to keep it interesting and to not rely on having to keep geeting to a certain level with a woman and you get a reward like some of these games seem to think this is how fucking works or something on that level which is wrong and very ridiculous to think you have to attain certain objectives that lead up a level of sexual acts between you and a woman.

SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT DUMB SHIT & NEVER THE GOOD IDEAS
Do you really think pussy has a leveling system cause try again. If this is how you think than virgins should not make avn's cause you ruin them with the stupid blueballing ideas. If you are one of the many who have a very popular female, a very fan fav or the hot ass milf that is the one everyone wants and all you do is repeating the same blue balling tease bullshit you just cannot write actual quality material that wouldn't had mattered if the 2nd sex scene with the milf had went all the way and yet still the same popularity contuinues for those who can write quality characters otherwise you get update after update with the same slow walk until the ending of the horrible game itself is ending and then you get some very weak and overall bullshit sex scene that is not good and never worth the build up that is a sign to drop that game cause it's a milker who just steals $ and will abandon the game cause they can't think how to come up with more bullshit to where they have to keep answering the same questions they never answer!

YOU WILL BE IN FOR VARIETY AND NO GIMICS
This dev wasn't like that with his previous game and delivered great quality updates no matter if the li hadalready had sex with mc or not the story kept moving forward and not some dumb game being played trying to reach levels to get sex scenes they just went with the way the story flowed which is a huge positive with these types of games so I assume with the way things seem to have jumped off here in the follow after ythe first great FINISHED GAME THIS SHOULD NOT DISAPPOINT IN ANY OF THE WAYS SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT AND FAIL AT DELIVERING GREAT CONTENT AND EXPLAINS WHY SO MUCH HAS ABANDONED BESIDE THE TITLES OF SO MANY GAMES THAT SUDDENLY DISAPPEAR OR WILL BE HOT FOR A SHORT TIME THEN SUDDENLY....ABANDONED.

TOO MANY TO NAME ANYMORE
Way to many of the same old ball busters just with the same same same. What is it with how the majority of these all have one or 2 females that are very popular and you have to gain some bullshit points and attain levels for pussy like some dumb virgin thinks is the way to have sex. Keep trying chumps or take notes from a game that fucking isn't some grand prize for going above and beyond reality to get pussy from a woman! You can give the players pussy and still have them keep supporting your work and I would dare say the more sex with those favorites you give the better the game you will have which means more support from the people who want to see more of that and not the little support for some wasted time and waiting game for what will maybe come but not looking forward to good scenes with the girls liked since they will be one and story ends like the 59 same dumb endings! THIS ONE HERE IS SHAPING UP TO BE GOOD SO FAR AND LOOKS TO TAKE IT FROM GOOD TO WHO KNOWS AFTER THE SNEAK PIC!!! NIKKI IS BOUT TO GO BIG ONE CAN HOPE

 

[MiltonPowers]

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[MorallyLucky]

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...who? Looks great though

 

[MiltonPowers]

...who? Looks great though

Stage name is kitten. She hurt herself dancing the first night MC was there.

 

[MorallyLucky]

Stage name is kitten. She hurt herself dancing the first night MC was there.

Oh right, didn't catch her real name.

 

[hoshin0119]

Personally, this is the Early Access game on Steam that I’m looking forward to the most.
I’m really curious when the next update will be.
Since you’re still developing the early parts of the game, I honestly thought it might come out within this year…

 

[DirtyMario]

"CAN SOMEONE GET THIS GUY WITH NO CHARISMA A GOSH DAMN SUIT TO WHERE ON A DATE WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN WHO DESREVES A NIGHT THAT WILL END WITH THIS GUY GOING 100 & MAKING SURE HER BACK GETS BLOWN OUT AND SHE WALKS A BIT FUNNY FOR A DAY OR 2 JUST FOR LOOKING SO FUCKING DELICIOUSLY SEXXXY AND GOING OUT TO HELP HIM FORGET HE IS DYING WITH NOT MUCH TIME LEFT!! WITH THIS BABE, SHE IS ONE OF THEM GREAT GALS THAT WON'T HAVE ANY THINKING ABOUT THAT SITUATION AT ALL ONLY THINKING BOUT HER & WHAT TROUBLE THE 2 OF YOU CAN MAKE TOGETHER"

GOOD QUALITY WRITING......... AGAIN & NO BLUEBALLS UNTIL ABANDONED APPEARS
For sure been ready for her to get more time! She was my 1st chic I was interested in and she hasn't had near enough focus so I hope this update is well spent time with her and we get a very NICE time after the date with her actually strippin for us and then we get to smash. As good as she is looking here it'd be a complete waste if this ends with some underwhelming jerk off or eating her pussy. Let's just hope from number of animations we are in for a hell of a great time with no disappointment anywhere in sight! I was glad their first game didn't do the idea so many do and drag out sex like it has levels to get to. When we meet Val(my fav girl by far) she has no issue or game to play, she's down to fuck and that turns into something I was all about in an avn! The writer knew how to keep it interesting and to not rely on having to keep geeting to a certain level with a woman and you get a reward like some of these games seem to think this is how fucking works or something on that level which is wrong and very ridiculous to think you have to attain certain objectives that lead up a level of sexual acts between you and a woman.

SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT DUMB SHIT & NEVER THE GOOD IDEAS
Do you really think pussy has a leveling system cause try again. If this is how you think than virgins should not make avn's cause you ruin them with the stupid blueballing ideas. If you are one of the many who have a very popular female, a very fan fav or the hot ass milf that is the one everyone wants and all you do is repeating the same blue balling tease bullshit you just cannot write actual quality material that wouldn't had mattered if the 2nd sex scene with the milf had went all the way and yet still the same popularity contuinues for those who can write quality characters otherwise you get update after update with the same slow walk until the ending of the horrible game itself is ending and then you get some very weak and overall bullshit sex scene that is not good and never worth the build up that is a sign to drop that game cause it's a milker who just steals $ and will abandon the game cause they can't think how to come up with more bullshit to where they have to keep answering the same questions they never answer!

YOU WILL BE IN FOR VARIETY AND NO GIMICS
This dev wasn't like that with his previous game and delivered great quality updates no matter if the li hadalready had sex with mc or not the story kept moving forward and not some dumb game being played trying to reach levels to get sex scenes they just went with the way the story flowed which is a huge positive with these types of games so I assume with the way things seem to have jumped off here in the follow after ythe first great FINISHED GAME THIS SHOULD NOT DISAPPOINT IN ANY OF THE WAYS SO MANY OTHERS COPYCAT AND FAIL AT DELIVERING GREAT CONTENT AND EXPLAINS WHY SO MUCH HAS ABANDONED BESIDE THE TITLES OF SO MANY GAMES THAT SUDDENLY DISAPPEAR OR WILL BE HOT FOR A SHORT TIME THEN SUDDENLY....ABANDONED.

TOO MANY TO NAME ANYMORE
Way to many of the same old ball busters just with the same same same. What is it with how the majority of these all have one or 2 females that are very popular and you have to gain some bullshit points and attain levels for pussy like some dumb virgin thinks is the way to have sex. Keep trying chumps or take notes from a game that fucking isn't some grand prize for going above and beyond reality to get pussy from a woman! You can give the players pussy and still have them keep supporting your work and I would dare say the more sex with those favorites you give the better the game you will have which means more support from the people who want to see more of that and not the little support for some wasted time and waiting game for what will maybe come but not looking forward to good scenes with the girls liked since they will be one and story ends like the 59 same dumb endings! THIS ONE HERE IS SHAPING UP TO BE GOOD SO FAR AND LOOKS TO TAKE IT FROM GOOD TO WHO KNOWS AFTER THE SNEAK PIC!!! NIKKI IS BOUT TO GO BIG ONE CAN HOPE

I hope you are okay my guy.

In other news, next to Summer Heat and Artemis this has quickly become my most anticipated update. Great work from these guys.

 

[Elduriel]

I hope you are okay my guy.

probably just some mild stroke

 

[608xperience]

Personally, this is the Early Access game on Steam that I’m looking forward to the most.
I’m really curious when the next update will be.
Since you’re still developing the early parts of the game, I honestly thought it might come out within this year…

We're going into beta testing any day now. It won't be much longer.

 

[MiltonPowers]

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Hello AlterNauts! Storm here. Just wanted to give you guys a heads up that we're running a sale along with the other games in the Work and Play bundle on Steam. Until November 30th, you can not only get every game in the bundle at a 15% discount, but you'll get a discount on top of that from each developer! Also, this particular bundle is a "complete the set," so if you already own one or more games in the bundle, you'll still get the full discount for those you don't own yet.

In addition to Heaven's Door, you'll be able to pick up the following games:

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by Amomynous Games,

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by The Impious Monk, and

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from Story Machine Studios. Check the links for more details on these fantastic AVNs!

Also, we're very close to starting beta for chapter 3, so keep an eye out for our release schedule announcement!

Thank you for being here and for supporting us as we tell this story. We can't wait for you to all to play the next chapter of Heaven's Door!

 

[SamualHand]

in the Work and Play bundle on Steam.

Work & Play, should talk more with my boss about this....