Akamari

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I refuse to believe that any character coming out of Notty's head could be anything less that multilayered with hidden depth and endearing side. I mean, look at what she did with "bimbo airhead cliche" Sarah!
I've never thought that of Sarah. She was my second favourite right from the start.

I'm sure Trisha is multilayered as well, but is she necessarily multilayered in a positive way? I won't love every character just because they have this super rare thing called depth. :)
 

Nottravis

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I've never thought that of Sarah. She was my second favourite right from the start.

I'm sure Trisha is multilayered as well, but is she necessarily multilayered in a positive way? I won't love every character just because they have this super rare thing called depth. :)
Oh you don't have to like them of course.

No obligation there and I'll be very surprised if by the end of this some of you dont hate some of them.

Hopefully, though, it's largely designed so characters you don't like you can practically avoid throughout your run through unless logic dictates otherwise. You are in the military with a mission to accomplish after all....
 

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I've never thought that of Sarah. She was my second favourite right from the start.

I'm sure Trisha is multilayered as well, but is she necessarily multilayered in a positive way? I won't love every character just because they have this super rare thing called depth. :)
I can get behind that (pun more or less intended). Regarding Sarah, I've said it before, she really didn't do anything for me in the first chapter, because I just saw her as another bimbo. Heavy Gods, was I wrong! :D By chapter 3, she became just another character whom I could die and kill for (in the game, boys, calm down). So I think that Trisha might very well go that way depending on the events to come in the subsequents chapters. I admit she put me off at first with her unbridled sexuality, and I think I wasn't the only one to feel so, but if I don't come to love the gal "because [she has] this super rare thing called depth", I'm sure learning to know her will be a hell of a ride anyway :)
 

Akamari

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So I think that Trisha might very well go that way depending on the events to come in the subsequents chapters. I admit she put me off at first with her unbridled sexuality, and I think I wasn't the only one to feel so, but if I don't come to love the gal "because [she has] this super rare thing called depth", I'm sure learning to know her will be a hell of a ride anyway :)
Or Trisha can become a character to be hated with a passion. What is certain is that it will go somewhere. For good or ill or neither. I fully agree with your last statement. :)
 

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No obligation there and I'll be very surprised if by the end of this some of you dont hate some of them.
Or Trisha can become a character to be hated with a passion. What is certain is that it will go somewhere.
I hope so! A good story needs a good villain(s). It doesn't matter what emotion a character invokes, as long as it's something, and the stronger the better. The worst thing a villain can be is easily forgotten.
 
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Can't wait to see how this shakes out by the end!
Information overload you say hmm? Not there yet:

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She just wants to get properly railed because beta Marcus can't do it right.
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She needs MC to do something for her and is using sex to make him do her a favor.
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She wants information from MC and is hoping for juicy pillow talk.
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She wants revenge on Marcus for something he said or did and is looking to piss him off by fucking MC.
 

I'm Not Thea Lundgren!

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Took me a while to finally try out this game and I must say I love it - everything from silly inserts, plot, interactions with characters and especially Rebecca narrating between chapters, so keep up the good work. ;)
Rebecca now is it? Don't be giving her ideas above her station ;)
*wiggles eyebrows* All things are possible! ;)
Oh, do tell :devilish:
Also, please do feel free to peek in now and again - although we do tend to get a bit silly on this thread :)
Speak for yourself; the rest of us are all upstanding pillars of the community :whistle: we still love you though

*reads and thinks!* You bunch of horn-dogs! What's up with the ones you have? :)

What happened to all that "Oooo, isn't Sarah lovely"? stuff from a week ago! *is shocked!*
We still love Rah Rah! At least I do! I'm not sure about some of the degenerates around here :whistle::unsure:
Well, you know, we like to complicate things over here.

Officer ranks are the same for Army, Air Force and Marines, different from the Naval Ranks used in the Navy and Coast Guard.

Enlisted ranks are different across all the services except for Navy and Coast Guard are the same (I think).

And Marine Corps is under Department of the Navy, while the Air Force was part of the Army until after WWII.
Oh yes, of course, the USAAF and USAAC before that.:cool:

*is proud for knowing something about the subject*
You're all talking like this is the US Marines... what if she's part of the Royal Marines? Although isn't it all Space Marines now?
Wait, are you telling me that a large number of patrons of this fine pirate site dedicated to smut could be *gasp* perverts?

No, no this can't be right!
:eek::eek::eek: Say it isn't so! :eek::eek::eek:
 

DA22

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Well, all they have to do is make one 10 dollar pledge near the end. Definitely a bargain for those who haven't supported you. And making one higher pledge for those of lower tier doesn't make much difference.

It's the best bonus I've seen anyone do.(y)
That was the plan indeed for the latest episode of the game, in the mean time feel more comfortable supporting for 5 USD per month for as long as the game takes to complete. Now id Notty is really 10 USD short new render machine might do it once faster:p
 
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