Yeah, the "criticism" is just more like whining smh. Aside from MC being a dormant vampire, Gretchen literally states that her dad is a cop —like people can't tell there might be a chance ... that she's stronger than she looks?
I think at the very least Helanie not being the actual sister of MC is by design, otherwise the dev wouldn't be that confident to set up Patreon while letting one of the main girls being the actual sibling in his game. Even in the prologue, there are quite a few strong hints suggesting that she knows about MC's secret nature and they're not biologically related, and after the first conversation between MC and her in chapter 1, I already draw that conclusion about her not being the actual sibling.
Nah, it's not about that, I'm fine with the mc not being OP or going from weak to strong, but this whole thing really reminds me of something like a dm wanting to railroad players into following one intended storyline - the moment someone steps off the beaten path an npc with a baseball bat shows up and sets you straight. That's not "media literacy being low", this whole scene could be cut and nothing would be lost, but I guess the author has to make a point.
Someones dad being a police officer automatically makes them proficient in martial arts and having super strength? lolYeah, the "criticism" is just more like whining smh. Aside from MC being a dormant vampire, Gretchen literally states that her dad is a cop —like people can't tell there might be a chance ... that she's stronger than she looks?
What do you mean by super strength lol? This is literally a display of proper self-defense skills toward a guy who doesn't know anything about fighting except brute force. My point is that we literally don't really know Gretchen aside from her being a bitch and something weird is going on with her, so her being a woman with competent fighting skills is not impossible.
Ok, I'm trying hard to give you the benefit of the doubt on the media literacy. I replayed the scene with the baseball bat ) since I didn't get in my playthrough) and it makes perfect sense to me. Sirius tried to prevent the MC from killing and draining those poor idiots, which would have put the MC fully on an irreversible mistake early on. Which was her way of repaying him for saving her. If Sirius doesn't stop him there and the scene is cut (as per your suggestion) it would have probably be a game ending choice, since he would go on a rampage (he can't control his power yet) and could have gotten him killed by a response force (whatever their name is, I forgot).So yeah... the DM should correct you if you go off rails or the game ends.
I'd bet that a police officer having a daughter means that he'd train her in some form of self defense. And super strength...besides the fact that she's definitely not normal, she wouldn't need that much strength to subdue the MC, who is basically on the same power scale as a human at this point in the story. Also bear in mind that the MC is in no way trying to fight her in that scene, so him getting pinned down is pretty legit.
Yeah you're probably right about the sister thing with Patreon.
And at the same time, I'm not sure the dev would involve something that big with a LI.
Damn, now I just want the next update to see what will be the big reveal
actually I showed the dialogue to a brit friend and they told me it was more like someone trying to pretend they were british but having no real clueHaha proper Brit stuff uh?
Inches and Feet, almost miffed they didn't add stones next to the lbs?
The dialogue is forced for sure, but I've never seen a game or AVN adding inches next to height measured in feet, it usually goes for the metric system.
I'd have to agree with that but at the same time considering there are 2 types of cliff hangers
I don't think you needed to add the theory on the part about what happened at Chloe's bar, that part was pretty obvious. Regarding the confusion, I can only put that down to both Chloe and Helaine being friends with mc's sister which is how they probably knew. Their conflict with each other probably stems from that and I can only assume that it has something to do with the friend she invited somewhere that she spoke about previously in her bedroom and Chloe probably wasn't part of that.
I'm wondering if Chloe isn't a blood bag or thrall, but instead she's a lesser Vampire from an extinguished bloodline and wants to 'Ally' (Or bond or pledge, whatever) to MC - she says that she'd try not to master it, but to serve.
