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RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles Ch. 2 : The Law of the Tribe [Update 16] [N_taii]

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Pretentious Goblin

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I agree but the revenge can be so delicious with this. I see a lot of people wanting Noah to kill everyone. I never believed in that but I do believe in some fucked up mind games. Imagine this,
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Personally I see Aywin & Celis as victims, they were deceived, blackmailed and more. I'm not clamoring for a revenge ending on them.
 

Anonikus

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I haven't played past q. 35 yet and will wait for update 11/12 before continuing. This game is just too good, just the fact that it has a sense of pacing, and you are far too good at updating N_tail.


We'll see^^ But as much as I know players hate the antagonists, I'd rather make an ending that's focused on the MC's victory rather than one the villain's defeat, althought they will still face what's coming to them.
Like Noah ditching everyone and hooking up with the mercenary that held him during the kidnapping for some sweet, sweet SS-esque action? wink wink*

I'd also be up for Noah becoming demonically possessed, raping Aywin & Celis pregnant, taking the kids and raising them as a sinister (demons after all) but happy and supporting family somewhere.

Whatever works for you. :D


Seriously, you've done a phenomenal work. From all the details in the world, like the critters around the tribe or opening dotting the edge forests, around the town and restraint you showed in letting the corruption slow-cook in the beginning (not just having him declare that all women belong to the chieftain or something) to the excellent work with a detailed questlog, hints and general UX (not only a skip button but also a dialogue log if one misclicks).
 
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Anonikus

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Personally I see Aywin & Celis as victims, they were deceived, blackmailed and more. I'm not clamoring for a revenge ending on them.
That is true but it feels hard for me to imagine them reconciling after all that has happened.

Would indeed be for the best if they all did and could live happily together though.
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There are so many possibilities!
 
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sfoMMA85

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Besides, I don't agree with you when you say it fits story-wise. Edwyr was brought up almost exclusively by Zeno, and was heavily influenced by him. All his life, he's been yearning for his father's attention, trying his best to make him proud. Someone who's entire personality has been shaped by his father won't suddenly up and betray him like that. Besides, Edwyr isn't entirely stupid, he understands that turning against his father would probably mean his downfall, as he's not much of a leader himself and couldn't take over what Zeno has built so far.
Thats true, still Anakin also was raised almost only by Obi-Wan-Kenobi and if the dark entity which isnt reaveld yet, instills something into Edwyrs mind maybe such a turn of events would still be possible... but its just a suggestion and you are the storyteller, so I leave it to you to make sense of the story ( ;

I kind of have the rough outline of all the endings in mind, and I'm not sure I could add yet another ending, especially one like the one you mentioned that's pretty close to an NTR ending, and I already have one -more standard - in mind. Sure, there's an extra-layer with the main NTR villain being NTR'd in turn, but not enough of a difference to warrant a whole new ending imo^^
so be it. But maybe thats an ending for one of your next games... I would love to see such a turn of events or as you called it an "extra layer".
 
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Any spoilers regarding what the relationships of protagonists will be that will be getting ntr'd? Will anyone be a wife/gf? Or will it remain indirect relationships (ie. mom, crush, sister, etc.)? If you don't intend to spoil yet, that's also fine.
 

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Any spoilers regarding what the relationships of protagonists will be that will be getting ntr'd? Will anyone be a wife/gf? Or will it remain indirect relationships (ie. mom, crush, sister, etc.)? If you don't intend to spoil yet, that's also fine.
Sure, here you go, if you wanna know. But actually who is into who and who gets NTR'ed by whom is quite obvious from the beginning.

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As hot as the main-quest scene in update 10 is, I gotta say, not a big fan of what happens towards the end of update 9, and between the end of update 9 and start of update 10. It's a pivotal moment for Aywin and Celis. From the player's perspective, it looks like they go from supportive of Noah and willing to flee with him, to pretty much giving up on him, and I feel like glossing over that transition with "they got tortured into submission" is a wasted opportunity. I get it, the resolve they show at that moment is a house of cards waiting to be knocked over, but still, I feel it could have been handled better. Hell, the scene in Update 10 it makes me want to see what would have happened if they had fled with Noah.
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I agree but the revenge can be so delicious with this. I see a lot of people wanting Noah to kill everyone. I never believed in that but I do believe in some fucked up mind games. Imagine this,
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That's...a tiny bit extreme^^ But one thing I realized is that I never really understood the amount of hatred players might have for some of the characters. For me, I made them from scratch, so no matter how bad they are, they remain kind of dear to me, so it makes it extra-hard too be too harsh on them during the endings^^
Still, I have a rough outline for the revenge ending that should be satisfying to players : )

I haven't played past q. 35 yet and will wait for update 11/12 before continuing. This game is just too good, just the fact that it has a sense of pacing, and you are far too good at updating N_tail.




Like Noah ditching everyone and hooking up with the mercenary that held him during the kidnapping for some sweet, sweet SS-esque action? wink wink*

I'd also be up for Noah becoming demonically possessed, raping Aywin & Celis pregnant, taking the kids and raising them as a sinister (demons after all) but happy and supporting family somewhere.

Whatever works for you. :D


Seriously, you've done a phenomenal work. From all the details in the world, like the critters around the tribe or opening dotting the edge forests, around the town and restraint you showed in letting the corruption slow-cook in the beginning (not just having him declare that all women belong to the chieftain or something) to the excellent work with a detailed questlog, hints and general UX (not only a skip button but also a dialogue log if one misclicks).
Thank you for the nice comment, it was really nice to read : D
I won't reveal too much about the endings, but I don't think the mercenary will make another apparition, I'm sorry^^
 

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Any spoilers regarding what the relationships of protagonists will be that will be getting ntr'd? Will anyone be a wife/gf? Or will it remain indirect relationships (ie. mom, crush, sister, etc.)? If you don't intend to spoil yet, that's also fine.
I can't say too much yet, as I haven't revealed much on my Patreon either, but let's just say that: the main love interest will be the MC's gf, although they are forced to keep their relationship a secret because of...reasons. The rest is still up for debate, although I already have a rough idea of the second main female char.
(Oh, and there will be 2 main chars and 2 side chars this time).
 

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That's...a tiny bit extreme^^ But one thing I realized is that I never really understood the amount of hatred players might have for some of the characters. For me, I made them from scratch, so no matter how bad they are, they remain kind of dear to me, so it makes it extra-hard too be too harsh on them during the endings^^
Still, I have a rough outline for the revenge ending that should be satisfying to players : )
It is extreme but, If I assume correctly what Noah will see, I don't see any other path then him beaten and continue seeing NTR stuff, gets himself killed or frees them but they're so corrupted that they are broken or the time travel thing again.
Also If i go by you're definition of what NTR is. The connection that being corrupted by a 3rd player does not effect just one but both parties. With Noah being innocent is subjected to this ... there's no way that he would remain the same.
 
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sfoMMA85

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what about the antagonists? Is it possible to make them a bit more unlikeable then Edwyr/Zeno or Ezekiel. They all had the looks and appeal. It would be also interesting to have like a fat king or noble man instead of a good looking young men. And dont get me wrong, I don't mean something like a Scars of Summer-style ugly hobo, but just not the typical regular good looking womanizer and rather a very intelligent and powerful but dislikeable character (in looks and behavior - eg someone who also sexually harasses a lot of women around him because he can).
Match this with a female main character that hates such chauvinists and has a strong will and character and then let her get NTR'ed by such a person she hates. Really I would love to see a roughly similar plotline.
 
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what about the antagonists? Is it possible to make them a bit more unlikeable then Edwyr/Zeno or Ezekiel. They all had the looks and appeal. It would be also interesting to have like a fat king or noble man instead of a good looking young men. And dont get me wrong, I don't mean something like a Scars of Summer-style ugly hobo, but just not the typical regular good looking womanizer and rather a very intelligent and powerful but dislikeable character (in looks and behavior - eg someone who also sexually harasses a lot of women around him because he can).
Match this with a female main character that hates such chauvinists and has a strong will and character and then let her get NTR'ed by such a person she hates. Really I would love to see a roughly similar plotline.
Couldn't have said it better, THAT WOULD BE GOOD AF. Those kinds of ntr hits different
 
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Anonikus

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That's...a tiny bit extreme^^ But one thing I realized is that I never really understood the amount of hatred players might have for some of the characters. For me, I made them from scratch, so no matter how bad they are, they remain kind of dear to me, so it makes it extra-hard too be too harsh on them during the endings^^
Still, I have a rough outline for the revenge ending that should be satisfying to players : )
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I won't reveal too much about the endings, but I don't think the mercenary will make another apparition, I'm sorry^^
I have the utmost confidence in you delivering a, multiple, enjoyable endings.
Again, thank you for your fantastic work.
 
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