RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles Ch. 2 : The Law of the Tribe [Update 16] [N_taii]

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Pretentious Goblin

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Really great game ! The only thing I could say its that the game is way too much linear, too bad there isn't real exploration to trigger event and all, it's just go there then go there etc
Yeah, it's a walking simulator with puzzles here and there. Apparently some optional gameplay mechanics are planned for the next game, which is good.
 
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Magic! It's working! Thank you.

Edit: Yep, i sleept from morning to morning. That seems was my mistake.
Glad you got it working. Sorry for not making it clearer, I had actually forgotten about this part being tricky.

I just finished the update and as always I loved it, but with that said, I swear you better making that revenge route deliciously satisfying! I'm not talking about some "oh I won the fight and let them go" or "mc beat the his cousin and uncle off screen and now everyone lives in peace." I'm talking I want to see a full blown massacre of everyone by a demonically charged MC I want everyone to see and know it's Noah who is killing them and yo slowly understand why! Mother and sister included. I'm talking a completely broken mc here
I'll...uh...do my best to make sure Noah does his worst^^

Wtf now, seriously? Why do mention that revenge part to kill everybody... Just let Noah gtfo of that village into perma Fairy dream land in his room. Seems good enough for that childish elf.

Edit: Just finished v9. Nice update! :)
Thanks!
Update 10 just came out yesterday for patrons, it caps off Neve's + Thania's storylines. Update 11 will be the last one before the endings and will focus on the main quest (so Aywin + Celis).
Either I'll finish the main storyline (without the endings) on Update 11 and start with the endings right away, or I might do an extra update 12 mainly dedicated to adding new events/freeroams H scenes in Updates 1 to 5, which direly lacked some freeroams, and to add the reminiscence room.
 

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Can u play this game in android version?
I think there's an app called Joiplay that allows you to play RPGMaker games. However, it is prone to game-breaking bugs that don't exist in the original version of the game.
The save 117 the glass scene doesnt show anything
Tested it, and it works for me. Could you be a bit more precise please?
Would update 11 have the endings?
As was said, we might need 1-2 more updates before the endings. Once I get to them, I will publish smaller update with maybe 1-2 endings per update, so I can work on HC3 at the same time and reduce the time needed to publish the demo version after I am finished with HC2.
 

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Really great game ! The only thing I could say its that the game is way too much linear, too bad there isn't real exploration to trigger event and all, it's just go there then go there etc
There is actual some exploration in the form of freeroam events to be found around the map after clearing some conditions (all listed at the end of the walkthrough).
However, I agree that exploration is definitely not the main focus of the game. The whole concept was to create a kind of light novel that relies a lot on text. But at the same time, controlling the main character and making him move around the map helps players feel "closer to the action" and more involved in what's happening, thus giving more impact to the story. I added some minigames, but to be honest, I didn't feel they were popular enough to be worth putting a lot of time into developing them, so I kind of dropped them halfway through and focused more on story and sex scenes.
 

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Either I'll finish the main storyline (without the endings) on Update 11 and start with the endings right away, or I might do an extra update 12 mainly dedicated to adding new events/freeroams H scenes in Updates 1 to 5, which direly lacked some freeroams, and to add the reminiscence room.
hands up for an extra update with focus on freeroaming + reminiscence room ;)

btw, Update 10 was amazing!
 

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I hope more edwyr x aywin scene.
Great game by the way
also thought about a possible ending in which edwyr would ntr zeno and take celis + aywin for himself. Dont know why exactly, maybe because of edwyrs character but somehow edwyr x aywin is really hot. Beeing a small child in the beginning of the game Aywin once was like a mom for him and now he is corrupting and dominating her, which is really hot. WHat do you think N_Taii - is that enough substance for another ending :LOL: (no seriously, I would love it)

also story wise it could really make sense as zeno and edwyr are betraying everyone, how can they even trust each other. Evil in the end always eats up itself - that could be a great turn of events imho....
 
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My idea of a revenge ending is where the antagonists are humiliated or made to suffer the same way the MC’s women are rather than the MC burning everything in sight.

For instance they could be thrown in prison to be gang raped by thugs. Or given to a bunch of orcs who’d fuck anything with an orifice. Or paraded through the streets with everyone throwing garbage at them. Basically anything that crushes their pride.

What do you guys think?
 

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Excuse me, anyone knows how to get and load extra-scene file? I have been finding for 3 hours and i havent found them. If u know, plz help me. I'm really grateful for ur help. Here are all save files I have.
 

Pretentious Goblin

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Excuse me, anyone knows how to get and load extra-scene file? I have been finding for 3 hours and i havent found them. If u know, plz help me. I'm really grateful for ur help. Here are all save files I have.
You have the $5 version, you need to pledge $20 (in one month, which is stupid, but it is what it is), or at least find someone who'll send it to you. Those scenes are the only content that doesn't make it to F95, I think, or even lower-tier patrons.
 
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I think the one way mirror scene could have been improved a bit. I think the revelation should have been made in the cowgirl position just to have the female character stop express doubts and have the male encourage her using the pr-established rage as an excuse. then have some archetipical vow breaking statements. and include some leaning on the mirror stuff.

a bit of critique on the game overall. at the begining the game takes a very detailed way of writing the non H story. I remember at some point i got pretty into the bad guy's story. but then at around update 7-9 the writing beacame more expository with fade to black and scenes describing the passage of time. now I do prefer this because it makes things move faster (I remember it takes around 3 hours to get to the first H scene because I had a corrupted save the first time I played it so I was saving constantly the second time i played it) but the change in style is noticeable.

I really like the non h writing its pretty good.
 
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Kow1

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Excuse me, anyone knows how to get and load extra-scene file? I have been finding for 3 hours and i havent found them. If u know, plz help me. I'm really grateful for ur help. Here are all save files I have.
N_tai
You have the $5 version, you need to pledge $20 (in one month, which is stupid, but it is what it is), or at least find someone who'll send it to you. Those scenes are the only content that doesn't make it to F95, I think, or even lower-tier patrons.
:v Ok thank you , bro
 

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You have the $5 version, you need to pledge $20 (in one month, which is stupid, but it is what it is), or at least find someone who'll send it to you. Those scenes are the only content that doesn't make it to F95, I think, or even lower-tier patrons.
Do u know s.o can share these file?
 

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For some reason the confession quest (quest 36) is not showing or triggering when I have the prerequisites.
 
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N_taii

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also thought about a possible ending in which edwyr would ntr zeno and take celis + aywin for himself. Dont know why exactly, maybe because of edwyrs character but somehow edwyr x aywin is really hot. Beeing a small child in the beginning of the game Aywin once was like a mom for him and now he is corrupting and dominating her, which is really hot. WHat do you think N_Taii - is that enough substance for another ending :LOL: (no seriously, I would love it)

also story wise it could really make sense as zeno and edwyr are betraying everyone, how can they even trust each other. Evil in the end always eats up itself - that could be a great turn of events imho....
I kind of have the rough outline of all the endings in mind, and I'm not sure I could add yet another ending, especially one like the one you mentioned that's pretty close to an NTR ending, and I already have one -more standard - in mind. Sure, there's an extra-layer with the main NTR villain being NTR'd in turn, but not enough of a difference to warrant a whole new ending imo^^

Besides, I don't agree with you when you say it fits story-wise. Edwyr was brought up almost exclusively by Zeno, and was heavily influenced by him. All his life, he's been yearning for his father's attention, trying his best to make him proud. Someone who's entire personality has been shaped by his father won't suddenly up and betray him like that. Besides, Edwyr isn't entirely stupid, he understands that turning against his father would probably mean his downfall, as he's not much of a leader himself and couldn't take over what Zeno has built so far.

My idea of a revenge ending is where the antagonists are humiliated or made to suffer the same way the MC’s women are rather than the MC burning everything in sight.

For instance they could be thrown in prison to be gang raped by thugs. Or given to a bunch of orcs who’d fuck anything with an orifice. Or paraded through the streets with everyone throwing garbage at them. Basically anything that crushes their pride.

What do you guys think?
We'll see^^ But as much as I know players hate the antagonists, I'd rather make an ending that's focused on the MC's victory rather than one the villain's defeat, althought they will still face what's coming to them.

I think the one way mirror scene could have been improved a bit. I think the revelation should have been made in the cowgirl position just to have the female character stop express doubts and have the male encourage her using the pr-established rage as an excuse. then have some archetipical vow breaking statements. and include some leaning on the mirror stuff.

a bit of critique on the game overall. at the begining the game takes a very detailed way of writing the non H story. I remember at some point i got pretty into the bad guy's story. but then at around update 7-9 the writing beacame more expository with fade to black and scenes describing the passage of time. now I do prefer this because it makes things move faster (I remember it takes around 3 hours to get to the first H scene because I had a corrupted save the first time I played it so I was saving constantly the second time i played it) but the change in style is noticeable.

I really like the non h writing its pretty good.
Thanks!

For the scene itself, I guess a lot of it is up to personal preferences, although I've got to admit that leaning on the mirror could have been pretty hot. Unfortunately, I'm not enough of a good artist to be able to portray the boobs pressing on the glass and bouncing with each penetration. The artist was already working on something else at the time, so I went with some animations that were a little bit easier to implement^^
For the rest, you're absolutely right. I think Update 7 was when I decided to add a "filler" update, with little to no story progression but more emphasis on sex scenes. Since people loved it, I decided to keep going in subsequent updates and give slightly less importance to the way the story was told (as you mentioned, by using fade in/fade out screens) which would in turn give me more time to focus on the H content.
 

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For some reason the confession quest (quest 36) is not showing or triggering when I have the prerequisites.
Did you manage to make it work? Does Merith not show up above his house (near the lake/pond) on the designed day?
 

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Did you manage to make it work? Does Merith not show up above his house (near the lake/pond) on the designed day?
I don't know why but, the game needed to be reset for him to be there but got it to work. Btw congrats on setting Noah for the biggest heart/soul crushing experience (next update I assume).
 
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Pretentious Goblin

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As hot as the main-quest scene in update 10 is, I gotta say, not a big fan of what happens towards the end of update 9, and between the end of update 9 and start of update 10. It's a pivotal moment for Aywin and Celis. From the player's perspective, it looks like they go from supportive of Noah and willing to flee with him, to pretty much giving up on him, and I feel like glossing over that transition with "they got tortured into submission" is a wasted opportunity. I get it, the resolve they show at that moment is a house of cards waiting to be knocked over, but still, I feel it could have been handled better. Hell, the scene in Update 10 it makes me want to see what would have happened if they had fled with Noah.
 
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As hot as the main-quest scene in update 10 is, I gotta say, not a big fan of what happens towards the end of update 9, and between the end of update 9 and start of update 10. It's a pivotal moment for Aywin and Celis. From the player's perspective, it looks like they go from supportive of Noah and willing to flee with him, to pretty much giving up on him, and it feels like a wasted opportunity to gloss it over with a torture scene . I get it, the resolve they show at that moment is a house of cards waiting to be knocked over, but still, I feel it could have been handled better.
I agree but the revenge can be so delicious with this. I see a lot of people wanting Noah to kill everyone. I never believed in that but I do believe in some fucked up mind games. Imagine this,
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