So the game has a really good story and, if you are more into story than images, the sprite-sex will do just fine (especially paired with the face portraits). But I've always had a beef with 2 points.
If I remember correctly, Edwyr must be the younger guy of the two and Zeno the older one.
1. When Zeno becomes chief, he mentions that he can alter the villagers' dresscode, so I was expecting that to happen right after. I've never seen it happen though. I was actually expecting that that was the way to start their corruption, but instead Aywin is blackmailed (so there's no agency on her part) and Celis' very first scene is imagining herself blowing Edwyr, which yes, she would have imagined blowing someone after seeing a blowjob, but most probably the MC. In any case, then her first actual corruption is what, that the MC won't like her if she's not "trained" so she goes with the guy MC has a beef with to train her? It seemed a bit weird to me. Actually, I think my beef with this was that it happened too abruptly, although up to that point it was building up at a much slower pace and hinting at a different kind of corruption "plan" (For example, we see Awyin helping Zeno with his laundry, coming closer to him, etc.)
2. What I was expecting in earlier scenes - and especially after they got shared in an update - was to start having scenes with Celis x Zeno and Aywin x Edwyr. I can't really see the reason behind the non-existence of such scenes. I mean, the NTR happens through "non-agency" like I said, for Aywin, so it could just as well continue on to Edwyr. As for Celis, the NTR happens through her training to be better for the MC, so Zeno could be viewed as more experienced than Edwyr, therefore Celis has no real reason to not "train" with him too.
I was actually expecting these scenes to start really early on, ever since Edwyr first had sex with Aywin, or ever since Celis was deepthroating Zeno behind the MC's back. I mean they were already corrupt enough for that to happen at that point.
Those were just my thoughts, it really looks like a game where a ton of thought and work was put into, so I'm not trying to bash it in any way - I really respect devs like that. But yeah, those 2 points put me off a bit.