RPGM Henteria Chronicles Ch. 3: The Peacekeepers [P2 Update 22] [N_taii]

[Varimir]

I already bought steam verison it) Is there patreon content here? If not, will it be like a dlc? Any differences from the patreon versions?

 

[Gnoomoos]

I already bought steam verison it) Is there patreon content here? If not, will it be like a dlc? Any differences from the patreon versions?

I would really like to know too, i remember we had a discussion and original plan for Steam version was

The steam version won't contain all the extra scenes, but about 60 to 65%~ of them, because I'd rather the 20$ version remains exclusive to Patreon

I don't want to buy and play a game version that has less content. Also there is no mentioning on a Steam anything about it having less scenes, i would imagine many people there will think that they are paying for full product without realizing that some content is missing.

Edit. If this is still the case im fine with waiting for some time when game is completed and all extra scenes will come out later as optional paid DLC.

 

[jess7979]

I bought the game on steam, congrats for the release. always love your work

 

[Komdot]

I bought this new RPG on Steam, I hope it's a wonderful adventure!!!

bro, but the details are the most important thing, at least that's how it is for me XD

Yep, they want big changes but don't want to go through the process to get there, so then it seems like it was abrupt or forced.
I agree that the game should have progressed further than it has so far, but I haven't reached the point of being tired of it. I always believe that corruption has no limits and I always expect more dirt.

 

[MioNTR]

HC3 Duke and Rose is going to be my Favorite NTR ending here hoping Duke is only one has sex with rose But I do Hope I’m HC4 if there is One we get a pairing just like Duke and Rose in HC4 but this time milf and son best friend Jazon in not Leto best friend the sprites will bigger and the female sprites will busty and curvy

 

[NTRSaikou]

HC3 Duke and Rose is going to be my Favorite NTR ending here hoping Duke is only one has sex with rose But I do Hope I’m HC4 if there is One we get a pairing just like Duke and Rose in HC4 but this time milf and son best friend Jazon in not Leto best friend the sprites will bigger and the female sprites will busty and curvy

Yea loving the Duke and Rose NTR so far. Hope there is at least 1 scene of Rose being fucked and used by other men.

 

[Jeferss12]

ok i must say that haylen saying of her own free will that she is one of jazon's bitches and even more so entering into conflict with his children due to the influence that jazon has had on her, and even more so defending him when she clearly recognized that jazon is the type of man who only likes to play with women, and even more so telling leto directly that she is taking jazon into consideration as a possible partner to have a child, it has been too much to take for me, I mean it was noticeable how low the character has fallen, from naevyr I can understand it, the chick took too big an emotional blow with the letter where the guy tells her that he bet money again and also ran away with a woman, even after everything she had to sacrifice to protect him, she needed emotional support because she was practically about to end her life and well the only thing she found or the only thing that was presented to her at the worst moment was jazon, so her decision is understandable. XD

 

[willmirandez]

ok i must say that haylen saying of her own free will that she is one of jazon's bitches and even more so entering into conflict with his children due to the influence that jazon has had on her, and even more so defending him when she clearly recognized that jazon is the type of man who only likes to play with women, and even more so telling leto directly that she is taking jazon into consideration as a possible partner to have a child, it has been too much to take for me, I mean it was noticeable how low the character has fallen, from naevyr I can understand it, the chick took too big an emotional blow with the letter where the guy tells her that he bet money again and also ran away with a woman, even after everything she had to sacrifice to protect him, she needed emotional support because she was practically about to end her life and well the only thing she found or the only thing that was presented to her at the worst moment was jazon, so her decision is understandable XD

Not a full-stop in sight.

 

[Stormen]

Constructive Criticism


I played the latest update, and this should’ve been a big one for me. I’m really into mom NTR—actually, that’s how I found you, through HC2’s mom NTR. And now, even though HC3 has light mom Ntr, Haylen was still my favorite… but this patch didn’t do anything for me.


Even though the storyline wasn’t bad, the whole fetish of Haylen wanting Jason’s baby and making her say it is a classic NTR trope—one that usually works. But here, it just didn’t hit. I think it’s because you’re dragging the game out too much. The story feels burnt out.


Now that I’ve taken time to reflect, all the characters kind of feel the same (dragged out). Maybe it’s just me—I'm a writer—but I started to feel it at the end of HC2, and even more so in HC3 right now.


(I understand the reason why you’re dragging this out, by the way, but let’s focus on the writing aspect.)


You really excel at writing the beginnings of NTR stories: the buildup, the plot, the characters, the villains. Take Lily, for example—tsundere loli with an old man? $$ Fuckboy and a nun mom? $$ You get the idea. But it feels like, again, dragged out at some point.


Lily’s story, in my opinion, just doesn’t work—even though the concept had potential. The overall storyline doesn’t feel like NTR at all. (Some examples have already been mentioned by others: a girl who’d do anything for power, but you want us to feel like she wouldn’t? It doesn’t land.)


But the other three stories were on point—high-quality NTR, honestly. That said, again, the story is just too dragged out. Once the girls fully become sluts who enjoy sleeping with the villains, that’s it. The only thing left is to have them fully reject the MC in favor of the villains (in the endings), and that should’ve happened at least three patches ago.


That’s my two—or maybe three—cents as both a writer and a fan. I honestly don’t care about how much “sluttier” the characters get. Rose’s impregnation arc isn’t interesting to me because at this point she’s already doing everything and anything for the Duke—and not just him. Same goes for the other three.


I guess the only thing that could still work for me is if all four girls became public sluts and admitted it openly in front of the MC. For example: Rose marrying the Duke, and then having public sex in the throne room with everyone, including the MC, watching. That could actually be good. But that won’t happen until the ending, and based on what I’ve read in the forums, the ending is still not that close. Until then, I might burn out a little. (Or maybe it’s just me—played too many NTR games)

It is interesting how you say it's constructive criticism and you're a writer and you want it to head in a bog standard low quality generic NTR fashion. Public slut stuff with the princess? Just no.

I think most is generally ok, but i'd like some more variety with Rose. Most scenes feel the same. Make them increasingly more perverted and use pixelart to enhance the visuals. Missionary for the umpteenth time isn't interesting, but still make sure to remember her station. Anal scene where the maid was servicing Rose was more in the right direction, more of that.

 

[Komdot]

It is interesting how you say it's constructive criticism and you're a writer and you want it to head in a bog standard low quality generic NTR fashion. Public slut stuff with the princess? Just no.

I think most is generally ok, but i'd like some more variety with Rose. Most scenes feel the same. Make them increasingly more perverted and use pixelart to enhance the visuals. Missionary for the umpteenth time isn't interesting, but still make sure to remember her station. Anal scene where the maid was servicing Rose was more in the right direction, more of that.

Yep, I'm not really into Cyanna's NTR, but her scenes are way better than Rose's, bro. They're more varied and end up being hotter. Rose's scenes have the advantage of being a little heavier on the plot because of Leto, but sometimes I just hit CTRL.

ok i must say that haylen saying of her own free will that she is one of jazon's bitches and even more so entering into conflict with his children due to the influence that jazon has had on her, and even more so defending him when she clearly recognized that jazon is the type of man who only likes to play with women, and even more so telling leto directly that she is taking jazon into consideration as a possible partner to have a child, it has been too much to take for me, I mean it was noticeable how low the character has fallen, from naevyr I can understand it, the chick took too big an emotional blow with the letter where the guy tells her that he bet money again and also ran away with a woman, even after everything she had to sacrifice to protect him, she needed emotional support because she was practically about to end her life and well the only thing she found or the only thing that was presented to her at the worst moment was jazon, so her decision is understandable. XD

That was incredible, the chill that ran down my spine was what I missed in Henteria. Even though I hated Haylen at first because she wasn't biological and so on, she made me feel the same way I did about Aywin. We'll see how Leto's revenge turns out...

 

[MioNTR]

I hope rose and Duke get hotter sex scene where they both at it Rose starting to admit she wants duke she really might leave Leto for him and she starts cosplay like wearing a bunny girl outfit

 

[Jeferss12]

Yep, I'm not really into Cyanna's NTR, but her scenes are way better than Rose's, bro. They're more varied and end up being hotter. Rose's scenes have the advantage of being a little heavier on the plot because of Leto, but sometimes I just hit CTRL.

That was incredible, the chill that ran down my spine was what I missed in Henteria. Even though I hated Haylen at first because she wasn't biological and so on, she made me feel the same way I did about Aywin. We'll see how Leto's revenge turns out...

Yes, I feel the same, but you have to admit that Aywin didn't fall as low or go as far as Haylen did, this is on another level. XD

I hope rose and Duke get hotter sex scene where they both at it Rose starting to admit she wants duke she really might leave Leto for him and she starts cosplay like wearing a bunny girl outfit

again although the idea is not bad, the fact that rose admits that she loves the duke or that she falls in love with the duke in a twisted love is counterproductive, maybe she becomes a female version of the duke and starts using others as simple objects that can be discarded, or that she becomes a simple sexual slave for the duke like naevyr did with jazon, but the line that she "falls in love" with the duke I really don't feel that it fits at all XD, I feel that I am repeating myself and I already said all this before XD

 

[MioNTR]

Yes, I feel the same, but you have to admit that Aywin didn't fall as low or go as far as Haylen did, this is on another level. XD




again although the idea is not bad, the fact that rose admits that she loves the duke or that she falls in love with the duke in a twisted love is counterproductive, maybe she becomes a female version of the duke and starts using others as simple objects that can be discarded, or that she becomes a simple sexual slave for the duke like naevyr did with jazon, but the line that she "falls in love" with the duke I really don't feel that it fits at all XD, I feel that I am repeating myself and I already said all this before XD

Fair enough but I still want a bunny cosplay or sexy belly dancer cosplay

 

[maroder]

finally started to play game. i'm still at the start when you kill ant queen. il be giving my first impressions.

first i must say that i really like choice we get to make. I do know that they have no impact until ending but its still very good roleplay tool and makes game story much more cohesive i hope they are here to stay in next game.

i have played 2 rounds of card game i did enjoy it will be interesting to see how it develops,

i also like all of heroines, Rose is currently my favourite but will see how it develops. i think relationship development between mc and all characters was well done and im looking forward to there corruption

main story, and setting also all sound interesting including letos backstory and his character development.
game also has decent amount of sex scene before real corruption of heroines start which is always plus.

only thing i would really wish at these point is that if some of male nameless soldiers got names(basically same content but they are recurring characters/ally's? ). captains death will be remembered but i have feeling that having 1 or 2 named soldiers (for example 1 that leto saved from queen ant) who are not joining in corruption would make revenge and love endings better? at least these is currently how i feel. it would make me feel so that not only leto is against duke and would create kind of power base that can be used during endings. also not hating every character that is on screen(i think nothing good will happen to remaining named characters) will make me want to fight for better ending and not just burn it all to ground or at least have some people with whom i can watch fires .

as for NTR ending i think game sets up everything well at these point.

 

[Jeferss12]

is it just me or does it feel like N_taii is going to give us a pregnancy in each of the corruptions of the 4 female characters closest to Leto, I say because there is already a pregnancy with Lyly, one with Haylen, the one of Lyly's corruption was not precisely caused by the instigator of her corruption as well as it happened with Haylen's which was Jazon who impregnated Naevyr but count, the most likely thing would be that in Cyanna's one or more of the female guards end up getting pregnant, and as for Rose the truth is I wouldn't know how to say Rose is not very close to many female characters other than Lily, Cyanna or Haylen, unless N_taii makes the Duke recover the queen from the village where she and the king are hiding and the Duke impregnates Rose's mother, a little brother or sister for Rose XD.

 

[Benton Tarantella]

is it just me or does it feel like N_taii is going to give us a pregnancy in each of the corruptions of the 4 female characters closest to Leto, I say because there is already a pregnancy with Lyly, one with Haylen, the one of Lyly's corruption was not precisely caused by the instigator of her corruption as well as it happened with Haylen's which was Jazon who impregnated Naevyr but count, the most likely thing would be that in Cyanna's one or more of the female guards end up getting pregnant, and as for Rose the truth is I wouldn't know how to say Rose is not very close to many female characters other than Lily, Cyanna or Haylen, unless N_taii makes the Duke recover the queen from the village where she and the king are hiding and the Duke impregnates Rose's mother, a little brother or sister for Rose XD.

Damn, that last part is so twisted it might actually work.
Though I'm curious to hear an expert’s opinion on the matter.
MioNTR what do you think?

 

[Goriel]

is it just me or does it feel like N_taii is going to give us a pregnancy in each of the corruptions of the 4 female characters closest to Leto, I say because there is already a pregnancy with Lyly, one with Haylen, the one of Lyly's corruption was not precisely caused by the instigator of her corruption as well as it happened with Haylen's which was Jazon who impregnated Naevyr but count, the most likely thing would be that in Cyanna's one or more of the female guards end up getting pregnant, and as for Rose the truth is I wouldn't know how to say Rose is not very close to many female characters other than Lily, Cyanna or Haylen, unless N_taii makes the Duke recover the queen from the village where she and the king are hiding and the Duke impregnates Rose's mother, a little brother or sister for Rose XD.

I agree on the last part.

For the Duke's total victory in the worst ending of the story, SHE is the most important piece for him to capture and could send Rose down twisting pretty hard.

I have been waiting for that ever since that reveal and i'm surprised Ntaii has held back on bringing her to the main plotso far.

 

[Benton Tarantella]

is it just me or does it feel like N_taii is going to give us a pregnancy in each of the corruptions of the 4 female characters closest to Leto, I say because there is already a pregnancy with Lyly, one with Haylen, the one of Lyly's corruption was not precisely caused by the instigator of her corruption as well as it happened with Haylen's which was Jazon who impregnated Naevyr but count, the most likely thing would be that in Cyanna's one or more of the female guards end up getting pregnant, and as for Rose the truth is I wouldn't know how to say Rose is not very close to many female characters other than Lily, Cyanna or Haylen, unless N_taii makes the Duke recover the queen from the village where she and the king are hiding and the Duke impregnates Rose's mother, a little brother or sister for Rose XD.

"Sorry... I'm a bit lost with the story or maybe I didn't quite understand your comment, but what do you mean by "there is already a pregnancy with Lyly"?... Is there a dialogue I missed?... f*ck I hope so.

 

[Jeferss12]

"Sorry... I'm a bit lost with the story or maybe I didn't quite understand your comment, but what do you mean by "there is already a pregnancy with Lyly"?... Is there a dialogue I missed?... f*ck I hope so.

I meant that in the story line involving her corruption someone got pregnant, I wasn't referring to Lyly specifically but to someone who is involved in the development of her story line, and well I'm talking about Anna, who didn't get pregnant by the antagonist who instigated Lyly's corruption, but by her brother, which is different in the story line from Haylen's corruption, since as I said it is Jazon, the instigator of Haylen's corruption who impregnates Naevyr.

 

[MioNTR]

Damn, that last part is so twisted it might actually work.
Though I'm curious to hear an expert’s opinion on the matter.
MioNTR what do you think?

Not entirely impossible I’ve seen and a few hentai anime and manga done before there was this hentai we’re the antagonist did that before fuck the daughter and then the mother and they have his kids