RPGM Henteria Chronicles Ch. 3 : The Peacekeepers [Update 13] [N_taii]

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kgirlffx

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Completed all the current content. My take, pure gold. I think pacing is a bit better than the last two games, and I find that you built up the heroines much stronger than previously as well. Taking the time to go through several stages of the MC's life, meeting each out, building those connections, really makes the taking of them better.

The limited PoV. In some ways I think you do not do far enough with it. Generally people would do this option because they want to view the game as the MC. Some scenes we need to know about for context, but I think every scene involving any of the heroines with the bad guys or sexual in nature should be hidden. Let us only find out about them via the room of remembrance or by seeing in action. This does limit our understanding of events, but if it's limited PoV we should have limited understanding.

A good example of this is Rose's current scenes with You Know Who. As a limited PoV, we should have zero clue anything at all is happening yet.

Only issue so far is that I wish it was done. Looking forward to more in the future.
 
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Completed all the current content. My take, pure gold. I think pacing is a bit better than the last two games, and I find that you built up the heroines much stronger than previously as well. Taking the time to go through several stages of the MC's life, meeting each out, building those connections, really makes the taking of them better.

The limited PoV. In some ways I think you do not do far enough with it. Generally people would do this option because they want to view the game as the MC. Some scenes we need to know about for context, but I think every scene involving any of the heroines with the bad guys or sexual in nature should be hidden. Let us only find out about them via the room of remembrance or by seeing in action. This does limit our understanding of events, but if it's limited PoV we should have limited understanding.

A good example of this is Rose's current scenes with You Know Who. As a limited PoV, we should have zero clue anything at all is happening yet.

Only issue so far is that I wish it was done. Looking forward to more in the future.
Thanks!

My main issue with the Partial PoV was that I wanted to leave as much as possible to the imagination, without it feeling confusing. I want people to really understand what sparked the beginning of the corruption, the how and why. That's why the Partial PoV leaves less to the imagination early on. But as we progress with the game and the trigger for each corruption storyline has been already set up and explained, the PoV should be showing less and less during the scenes (unless they contain important story elements).
 

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I've observed many important characters are nowhere to be seen on the map during the day or evening while free roaming. Would be nice to locate those favorite characters at any point in time.
 

kgirlffx

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Thanks!

My main issue with the Partial PoV was that I wanted to leave as much as possible to the imagination, without it feeling confusing. I want people to really understand what sparked the beginning of the corruption, the how and why. That's why the Partial PoV leaves less to the imagination early on. But as we progress with the game and the trigger for each corruption storyline has been already set up and explained, the PoV should be showing less and less during the scenes (unless they contain important story elements).
That's fair. We're pretty early stages. If you intend to dial it back and show less and less then that is fine. Just my two cents that in the limited PoV I personally would rather only see the super important plot details, not the corruption things, unless I find it with the MC himself or via the room.

A stat indicator of corruption would be fun as well. I've seen that in a few NTR games and loved it. Like just us an affection bar or some such that we can see go up even if we do not witness the event.

Anyway, loved it so far. And I think the art is a step up too, so seems like you're putting your best foot forward on this one.
 

kgirlffx

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I've observed many important characters are nowhere to be seen on the map during the day or evening while free roaming. Would be nice to locate those favorite characters at any point in time.
I've found most wandering. They do not have any special icon or anything, so you just need to spot the sprite.
 

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I've observed many important characters are nowhere to be seen on the map during the day or evening while free roaming. Would be nice to locate those favorite characters at any point in time.
I've found most wandering. They do not have any special icon or anything, so you just need to spot the sprite.
Yo can find a guide telling you where to encounter the 4 female MCs at which time here: Guide
 

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I finally played the update, here are my thoughts:

- Mommy: I'm LOVING what you're doing here with the mom's NTR narrative. I think friend/bully as a villain, when it comes to mom NTR, feels a lot more personal and close to the MC than what we had in the second game, it feels more like the villain is stealing the MC's spot (that NTR plot involving the MC's uncle and mom in the second game really didn't do it for me). I don't know what else to say other than that I'm loving this and that I look forward to seeing this narrative develop in the future.

- Lily: I'm also really interested in Lily's Character, but I'm a little unsure about some things and personally I think I would prefer better if her NTR narrative involved Tavros back in the Inn, not his brother. I know you commented that so far Tavros hasn't shown interest in Lily, but that's something it could be changed in my view. I mean, while playing the first demo I always saw Tavros still not showing interest in Lily as simply a matter of him being too used to seeing her as a kid (since he met Lily as a child and spent some years living with her, until she finally grew up and become what she is now). Now that she's grown up and also seems to have developed a bit of a sassy/naughty personality, I thought it was only a matter of time before he realized that and started paying attention to Lily, her body and her teasing, and start to sexually desire and dominate her. I mean, we have a middle-aged man, who is obviously a "sex addict", who lived with this girl who grew up into an attractive cutie one with a bit of naughty and provocative personality (At least with the MC), but at the same time she is rude and bossy with this middle-aged man (We know she has her reasons, but he clearly doesn't think so. Especially because he was the one supossed to act as her boss, not the other way around). I just think this whole situation was a really good, compelling setting for a narrative where Tavros would develop a strong sexual desire for Lily, make advances on her, and be the antagonist of the MC here. If you allow me to be honest here, having it all changed to the old man after was kind of "weird" and a let down.

I also feel a little confused about Lily's NTR path because I remember you saying in the past that you didn't want to make her NTR narrative a "blackmail situation", but what happened in the last update with the old man kind seems to fit a blackmail situation to me. I mean, he created that situation where he had something to use against Lily and make her go work with him, otherwise she would be arrested and her family would be totally doomed. If you want to give your thoughts on this situation I'm all ears, but don't that kind of already fit into a blackmail situation?

(I still really like her character and will for sure be keeping an eye on how her narrative will develops from here, but I wanted to give my honest opinion on this all)

Rose: So far I haven't been very interested in Rose's NTR narrative with Duke. Not saying I see a problem or anything like that, I think it's just personal taste here. Still haven't seen something to sell me into it.

The other sister, the one who is part of the army along with the MC(sorry I forgot the name, I haven't recorded the names of all the characters yet): Well, I don't think we've had any clues as to what her NTR narrative will be, so I'm kind of "neutral" here yet. But I really like her character, so I'm looking forward to that. I just hope the villain here is going to be a good antagonist that will make a good NTR narrative with her.

Having said all that, I just wanted to end by complimenting the pixel arts of the characters. They are really good and attractive, especially the mom's (you can see very well how thick she is). I can see the evolution compared to the previous games, really good work here.
 
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I do have to agree with a lot of others when it comes to Lily, the Tavern keeper seem llike the perfect path. Still excited to see where it goes, maybe one the old man starts training her the tavern keeper starts to take notice and helps in her corruption with or without his brother's knowledge. Still ready to see where it goes.

Rose is what Im most waiting to see, as the fat bastard angle is top notch in my opinion. As stated from the guy above, were later during her more corrupted phase coming across her in a back alley or somthing where people dont recognize her but. Maybe seeing people watchin and for the MC POV people, they only get someone saying, oh its some hore getting fuck in the back alley. And they dont see it till they go to the remembrance room. BUt Rose and the Duke is what im most excited for from the main girls.

The nun mom is moving along perfectly too, cant wait for more of that arc.

The only one Ive really lost any interest in for the main girls is the sister.
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But I dont expect everything to fit my tastes perfectly, with how many main girls we have and all the fun side stuff we can stumble into, im really excited to see where it all goes. Awesome work man.
 

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Sister is called Cyanna, and I am looking forward a lot to her NTR content. Im really hoping it is going to be good. Brutus might be a candidate for that, although it could also go in a different direction. Either way, her character (being ambitious and strong and also reserved) lends itself perfectly for being dommed imo. Really hoping for something good here.

I also agree with you on Lily and Rose so far. Not sure about Lily's path and Rose needs more for me to really get properly interested, the parts I have seen haven't really gripped me so far.

Also, I second what Bombadil0321 said, "under the desk blowjob" is a must as a scene. That is a really good classic, esp. if you manage to get a good perspective. Ik you don't make CGs, but that would be a prime CG. Even without the CG tho, the scenario is a really good one for NTR.
 
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Loved it so much that I decided to go create a patreon account just to support this project. I've never felt so compelled to support someone's work as much as N_Taii's. Cannot wait for the next update, I need moreeee. :D
 

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Loved it so much that I decided to go create a patreon account just to support this project. I've never felt so compelled to support someone's work as much as N_Taii's. Cannot wait for the next update, I need moreeee. :D
Is the current update the newest or is there a newer one for patrons?
 

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Is the current update the newest or is there a newer one for patrons?
The free public version in this thread is Update 1, but Patreon has Update 2 for the $5 supporters and up. The public version tends to be released one month after people on Patreon get it.
 
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Ion.TemUS

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The free public version in this thread is Update 1, but Patreon has Update 2 for the $5 supporters and up. The public version tends to be released one month after people on Patreon get it.
Ah yes, I remember now. Thanks.
 
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- Lily: I'm also really interested in Lily's Character, but I'm a little unsure about some things and personally I think I would prefer better if her NTR narrative involved Tavros back in the Inn, not his brother. I know you commented that so far Tavros hasn't shown interest in Lily, but that's something it could be changed in my view. I mean, while playing the first demo I always saw Tavros still not showing interest in Lily as simply a matter of him being too used to seeing her as a kid (since he met Lily as a child and spent some years living with her, until she finally grew up and become what she is now). Now that she's grown up and also seems to have developed a bit of a sassy/naughty personality, I thought it was only a matter of time before he realized that and started paying attention to Lily, her body and her teasing, and start to sexually desire and dominate her. I mean, we have a middle-aged man, who is obviously a "sex addict", who lived with this girl who grew up into an attractive cutie one with a bit of naughty and provocative personality (At least with the MC), but at the same time she is rude and bossy with this middle-aged man (We know she has her reasons, but he clearly doesn't think so. Especially because he was the one supossed to act as her boss, not the other way around). I just think this whole situation was a really good, compelling setting for a narrative where Tavros would develop a strong sexual desire for Lily, make advances on her, and be the antagonist of the MC here. If you allow me to be honest here, having it all changed to the old man after was kind of "weird" and a let down.

I also feel a little confused about Lily's NTR path because I remember you saying in the past that you didn't want to make her NTR narrative a "blackmail situation", but what happened in the last update with the old man kind seems to fit a blackmail situation to me. I mean, he created that situation where he had something to use against Lily and make her go work with him, otherwise she would be arrested and her family would be totally doomed. If you want to give your thoughts on this situation I'm all ears, but don't that kind of already fit into a blackmail situation?

(I still really like her character and will for sure be keeping an eye on how her narrative will develops from here, but I wanted to give my honest opinion on this all)
Yeah, I agree about Lily. I was totally hyped waiting for the Innkeeper to be the guy who would be fucking Lily here and stealing her from the MC. It was the perfect situation to do something happen there. And to be honest, when it comes to NTR, I usually like a lot more those villains who are just big perverts and sexually wild guys, who can only think about perverted things most of the time (like the Innkeeper) than those villains who are some "supermind dude" with a complex plan to get the girl (like the old man).
 

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Yeah, I agree about Lily. I was totally hyped waiting for the Innkeeper to be the guy who would be fucking Lily here and stealing her from the MC. It was the perfect situation to do something happen there. And to be honest, when it comes to NTR, I usually like a lot more those villains who are just big perverts and sexually wild guys, who can only think about perverted things most of the time (like the Innkeeper) than those villains who are some "supermind dude" with a complex plan to get the girl (like the old man).
I do have to agree with a lot of others when it comes to Lily, the Tavern keeper seem llike the perfect path. Still excited to see where it goes, maybe one the old man starts training her the tavern keeper starts to take notice and helps in her corruption with or without his brother's knowledge. Still ready to see where it goes.
- Lily: I'm also really interested in Lily's Character, but I'm a little unsure about some things and personally I think I would prefer better if her NTR narrative involved Tavros back in the Inn, not his brother. I know you commented that so far Tavros hasn't shown interest in Lily, but that's something it could be changed in my view. I mean, while playing the first demo I always saw Tavros still not showing interest in Lily as simply a matter of him being too used to seeing her as a kid (since he met Lily as a child and spent some years living with her, until she finally grew up and become what she is now). Now that she's grown up and also seems to have developed a bit of a sassy/naughty personality, I thought it was only a matter of time before he realized that and started paying attention to Lily, her body and her teasing, and start to sexually desire and dominate her. I mean, we have a middle-aged man, who is obviously a "sex addict", who lived with this girl who grew up into an attractive cutie one with a bit of naughty and provocative personality (At least with the MC), but at the same time she is rude and bossy with this middle-aged man (We know she has her reasons, but he clearly doesn't think so. Especially because he was the one supossed to act as her boss, not the other way around). I just think this whole situation was a really good, compelling setting for a narrative where Tavros would develop a strong sexual desire for Lily, make advances on her, and be the antagonist of the MC here. If you allow me to be honest here, having it all changed to the old man after was kind of "weird" and a let down.

I also feel a little confused about Lily's NTR path because I remember you saying in the past that you didn't want to make her NTR narrative a "blackmail situation", but what happened in the last update with the old man kind seems to fit a blackmail situation to me. I mean, he created that situation where he had something to use against Lily and make her go work with him, otherwise she would be arrested and her family would be totally doomed. If you want to give your thoughts on this situation I'm all ears, but don't that kind of already fit into a blackmail situation?

(I still really like her character and will for sure be keeping an eye on how her narrative will develops from here, but I wanted to give my honest opinion on this all)
Yupp, that's exactly what we discussed about before. I would have much preferred to see Tavros corrupt Lily as well. And I can only repeat myself;

I understand you, actually I was also disappointed that Lily wont be corrupted by the innkeeper. Somehow I guess I was too much hoping for a NTR story where its not a genius masterplan but just the simple, bored-out innkeeper who over time finds lily more and more attractive (also maybe because she bosses him around and he develops an urge to dominate her). For no other reason but his animal instincts ;)

I think it was all in all a good twist but yeah for me it also lacked something and I also cant even say what. It felt as if the twist was implement for no other reason but the twist itself a bit.
Yeah I guess what I wanted to say was, that there was like a lot of scenes and text happening only to show that Lily now stays at Nezar's place and it was revealed that she will be corrupted by him instead of Tavros, when all I was looking and waiting for was the first corruption event. It felt like a lot of text and scenes only to make this "twist" or change happen and to explain why. And it made all the stories with tavros look unimprotant and I really liked the pace of Tavros sexual "blunt"ness and how forward he was.

And yes it might have not been the genius NTR plot, as with the duke or Nezar. But I would have loved to witness just a simple NTR sidestoryline happening somewhere in the tavern where Lily gets more and more "accidentally" harassed by Tavros until it would get normal and Lily somehow learns to live with this reality and somehow starts enjoying it until Tavros catches her doing something or whatever and they start their sexual activities.

I love that you strive for perfectism and realistic corruption and NTR plotlines. But in the end NTR also is a fantasy happening very rarely IRL. And as much as I likely genius plots and ambitions to stay realistic, I from time to time love to see just some simple animalistic NTR be it with good ol' blackmail or catching her while masturbating, anything to get the show going. Its refreshing for achange and I had hopes that lily would serve this purpose in HC3. But as always I am open to see what is going to happen now.

Lastly I want to add a little constructive criticism: This whole Lily-plotline we are talking about is IMO a good example for a non-concise storyline (remembering the bucket list). It feels text-heavy and too much changes and things happening while I dont get to see the important stuff. Its a lot up and down, a lot of changes, which make a lot of the earlier story unimportant, thus I feel drenched with Lily's story. Maybe thats something you still can do better and work on - to be more concise and really think about which story is useful to add and which isnt as important (cause it gets rearranged again and again) and thus be more up to the point. ;)
 
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desmosome

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Yeah, they shared them in the dev forum looking for feedback back in early November. They'll be open for feedback from the wider community later on. Here's how the current draft for ntr-related tags looks like (take into account this could be changed later on):
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If you got some clout, please advocate for "non-MC sex" tag as a catch all for situations that are not NTR/NTRS. I swear, that would pull the rug out from anyone complaining about supposed "NTR."
 

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Yeah, they shared them in the dev forum looking for feedback back in early November. They'll be open for feedback from the wider community later on. Here's how the current draft for ntr-related tags looks like (take into account this could be changed later on):
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shit I missed this comment, this would be great. I don't really have any meaninful input on how it could be improved further. This seems like a good middle ground between a single ntr tag and having a million ntr tags, something that fans of the genre might be likely to want.

I'd personally find a "mystery-netorare" tag to be very helpful, but then we really start getting into tag-bloat if everyones favorite ntr flavour has to be catered to. I'm happy with this.
 
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