RPGM Henteria Chronicles Ch. 3 : The Peacekeepers [Update 13] [N_taii]

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sfoMMA85

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Yupp, that's exactly what we discussed about before. I would have much preferred to see Tavros corrupt Lily as well. And I can only repeat myself;
But I would also want to add that I really like the other NTR plotlines (Rose, Haylen and Cyanna). They are very diverse and offer us very different takes on a good NTR story. There is something for every NTR fan within the plotlines of these three NTR targets.

Haylen acts as a great mother NTR plot with an antagonist who behaves like a spoiled, rich and lazy brat who acts only like Letos friend to get what he wants - he also knows how to act as a gentleman while he just uses this bluntly to corrupt the ladies. I love how he is pictured and how his schemes as a con-artist are told in the short corruption stories before (when he is corrupting the barmaid for example). Also Haylen is the perfect mother character, a little naive and very caring but also experienced and straight.

Cyanna has this great romance approach on a NTR story going on. A thing I am usually not a fan of, but a lot of people are and I think N_taii did great with telling this story so far. It's believable and a very interesting twist on NTR. And I am sure there will be a lot back and forth as Cy will be very undecisive slowly falling for him but struggeling with her feeling, then realizing that Brutus has become somewhat a bad person, so then she will push him back again but maybe she already went to far with him and her corruption makes her weak again and so on... I am very excited for this plotline to develop.

Rose's NTR story is the one with the dirty bastard claiming the pure and righteous soul of the lady. Its the story of the chauvinist corrupting the emancipated strong-willed woman. And its finally a real girlfriend NTR story (its the first in any installment of the HC series). And we really get to witness that Leto and Rose are together as they share kisses, they hold hands (I would love to see them becoming more intimate and then getting disrupted by the duke or stuff like that).

All of the ladies have very different character traits and reasons. All of the antagonists are very different as well. From genius and sophisticated to lazy and cunning. From lovestruck to just horny and only interested in sex itself.

Only the Lily storyline is where I think a little potential was wasted. Lily has a great character and stands out as well and Tavros would have been a great match and a great different take on an antagonist. Tavros could have been the ultimate lazy, non-planning kind of guy, who is also kind of unlikeable and disgusting. And Lily and him could have had this contesting kind of relationship. Lily who would have always bossed Tavros around and Tavros who only wants to get laid and be left alone apart from that. From this dispute sexual tension could have developed. E.g. Tavros wants to establish control over Lily by corrupting her and controlling her sexual needs. And also he just wants to fuck her cause he is the lady that is closest to him but he never got laid. These all were great premises for a great NTR plotline and they all fell short now sadly...
 

GodTier

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Update 2 with Cyanna and that voice acting is too f***ing good. Really enjoying the pacing with this one.

I do share everyone's fear with lily though. Was looking forward to her being corrupted slowly in the tavern by the citizens with Tavros instigating it.
But I trust N_taii knows what he's doing so looking foward to her update.
 

lkjhgfdfghjkl

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Having Lily obliviously fall into the same history she spends her whole life attempting to escape is pure sadism. I don't think Tavros would fit that role
 

ViihX

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Only the Lily storyline is where I think a little potential was wasted. Lily has a great character and stands out as well and Tavros would have been a great match and a great different take on an antagonist. Tavros could have been the ultimate lazy, non-planning kind of guy, who is also kind of unlikeable and disgusting. And Lily and him could have had this contesting kind of relationship. Lily who would have always bossed Tavros around and Tavros who only wants to get laid and be left alone apart from that. From this dispute sexual tension could have developed. E.g. Tavros wants to establish control over Lily by corrupting her and controlling her sexual needs. And also he just wants to fuck her cause he is the lady that is closest to him but he never got laid. These all were great premises for a great NTR plotline and they all fell short now sadly...
This basically sums up most of my feelings about Lily's story. Things with Lily and Tavros were building towards a scenario that made me so "YES YES THIS WILL BE GOOD :love::love::love:", and then in the new update things were changed to the old man and I just got ":confused::confused::confused:". I probably will still end up enjoying it, but not as much as I would have enjoyed a LilyxTavros narrative. That scenario with Tavros was just REALLY good, it's a shame see it being wasted here :(
 

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I must say that I really liked it, I've been looking for a game like NTRPG for a long time and I finally found one that seems to be a worthy successor to that saga. To catch up with your saga I played the previous games and I loved them.

Regarding this third part, it has a lot of potential to surpass the other two games. The first thing I liked are the sprites, being so detailed they make the animations better.

It is a pity that of the characters there are not yet many scenes that I understand because it is still in development.

I liked the theme of exploring the city and looking for events in freeroam a lot (I spent many hours exploring the city just for that haha)

But without a doubt what I liked the most was the event that takes place in the military camp after the battle when they take advantage of the women after the death of the general. I would like to see more about Sgt. Alys and Eddie in the future, see how they go from honorable soldiers to whores is something I want to see, you could also add freeroam events of them (it was the most I searched around the city and I did not find anything ).

I also really liked the sprites that you used in Leto's dream, as it seems that they are dancing in the future if you plan to expand the city you could include a brothel or a dance hall with those sprites.

Without further ado, I say goodbye and wait for future updates, I'm thinking of supporting you on Patreon so I don't have to wait for you to publish the updates in public hahaha
 

YesBoss

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I have to give it to you, you are pretty smart. You posted the game on a piracy website yourself for the free marketing and somehow managed to trick people into not pirating your paid version by saying it would be fair to wait a month (on a pirate forum). How is it fair for other creators whose games are posted on this forum without their consent? And all of the bonus content that they create is given on this website free. I'm not batman I don't care that much to be honest, I was just passing by. Anyway I think Lily and Oldman is pretty good, better than the tavernkeeper.
 

N_taii

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So, I've wanted to write this for a while, but I got kind of caught up in the holidays, and developing the game (about to wrap up Lily's 2nd side-quest).

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I have to give it to you, you are pretty smart. You posted the game on a piracy website yourself for the free marketing and somehow managed to trick people into not pirating your paid version by saying it would be fair to wait a month (on a pirate forum). How is it fair for other creators whose games are posted on this forum without their consent? And all of the bonus content that they create is given on this website free. I'm not batman I don't care that much to be honest, I was just passing by. Anyway I think Lily and Oldman is pretty good, better than the tavernkeeper.
Not exactly sure what's the logic behind your comment. Since other creators are having bad things done to them, it is unfair for me to ask that they're not done to me? In pretty much every context, this would make little sense. Personally, I'm always happy when dev have their early access period respected.
Even if it comes out later here, people can always enjoy the game for free, and early access translates into more revenue that I can invest back into the game, providing them with better games - still for free. It's a win-win situation for everyone, those who support the game, and those who don't.
 

slim-kr

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I thought Lily would become interested in sex while working with Tavros, watch and hear lewd things every single day. It's weird to introduce him first and more than that, as a 'sex guy' in contact with Lily from a very long time and not try to go further, and introducing a new character for Lily's corruption.
 

slim-kr

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When you introduce a situation a certain way it's harder for people to think someone else will come and take her. I was like damn Tavros can fuck cheap whores but how is he gonna get Lily, the girl he's been living and working with for so long.
 
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slim-kr

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I really didn't like or believe Lily's first quest tbh. Feels very forced. All the girls have great paths except her to me.

Nezar was introduced before Tavros with Lily and the first thing she says about him is that he sometimes looks at her strangely
That's not even true, Tavros is introduced when she was still very young and spent more time with her than anyone else.
 
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lkjhgfdfghjkl

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That's not even true, Tavros is introduced when she was still very young and spent more time with her than anyone else.
If its the city tour then Nezar is introduced first with Lily i think. They also explain that she does various jobs for Nezar, so they must've interacted a lot. Gave me the impression that he has been creeping on her for a while... maybe because she's an Ailin (he said later on that his tastes were specific)
 
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I thought Lily would become interested in sex while working with Tavros, watch and hear lewd things every single day. It's weird to introduce him first and more than that, as a 'sex guy' in contact with Lily from a very long time and not try to go further, and introducing a new character for Lily's corruption.
The question is how to make it realistic. It wouldn't be realistic for her to go straight for the greasy, dumb guy. Handling it via another character who can turn her in another way is more interesting and more realistic. As N_taii hinted, the barowner might reappear in the story later when he can realistically do something.
 

Matoga

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First of all, I had already a good idea of the kind of dynamic I wanted to have for Lily. She's straightforward, headstrong, independant, crude, and shows no regard for conventions, and I wanted her corruption to completely overwrite that character of hers to become a lot tamer and submissive (for those who have played HC2, something along the lines of the high elf Neve and the medicine man).
I hope these similarities end with the nature of the corruption, i really don't want to see Nezar turn Lily into a pet or do BDSM stuff on her. Even though i tried, i just couldn't be bothered with Neve in CH2, whenever she had any screentime i just spammed ctrl to be done with it and it would be a shame if i had to do the same with Lily because her corruption was the one that i was looking forward to the most.
 
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Queen_Nothing

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I hope these similarities end with the nature of the corruption, i really don't want to see Nezar turn Lily into a pet or do BDSM stuff on her. Even though i tried, i just couldn't be bothered with Neve in CH2, whenever she had any screentime i just spammed ctrl to be done with it and it would be a shame if i had to do the same with Lily because her corruption was the one that i was looking forward the most.
The Neve line was also my least favorite, but I don't envy N_Tai for having to come up with dozens of scenes for multiple girls. So I understand if one or two of them lean into more niche fetishes, to set them apart from other girls progressions that don't involve them at all.
 
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Regarding Cyanna (the guard sister), my personal desire would be for her to slut it out for the entire guard armory except for MC. Maybe the guards keep it a loosely guarded secret from him since they all know they have a relation.

I'm thinking something like Prison Battleship and 8+ people gangbangs but this might be too hardcore for HC. It'd be awesome for my tastes though.
 

Queen_Nothing

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Regarding Cyanna (the guard sister), my personal desire would be for her to slut it out for the entire guard armory except for MC. Maybe the guards keep it a loosely guarded secret from him since they all know they have a relation.

I'm thinking something like Prison Battleship and 8+ people gangbangs but this might be too hardcore for HC. It'd be awesome for my tastes though.
Kangoku Senkan was so good. Using Mind Control/Brainwashing to sluttify uppity girls is such a fun kink, that works well in a 30 minute corruption story with visible sex scenes. But would be less satisfying as a game plotline, unless it was far more gradual.
 

haywire_hero

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So, I've wanted to write this for a while, but I got kind of caught up in the holidays, and developing the game (about to wrap up Lily's 2nd side-quest).

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I'm gonna echo the same sentiment as a couple others regarding Neve's BDSM story being far and away the least interesting in 2.

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Arsministrator

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I don't know how but I missed this, I guess I thought it would take a lot more time for you to release HC3 so this is a nice surprise, good luck with the game N_Taii

I like the improvements made to the game like the PoVs, sprites and the mapping, I can tell there was a lot of work put into making HC3 better compared to HC2 so props for that. The characters are all neat and interesting so I'm looking forward to future updates

On a more negative note I can see why people are a bit bummed about the direction of Lily's scenario after playing this version as I expected something different too, I'll wait to see how her character develops but like others here I did not enjoy the BDSM stuff in past games, it always felt like the weakest point of HC1 and HC2 (though it was slightly better in HC1 I guess) so I can't say I'm that interested in Lily's scenario compared to the other characters
 
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