RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles: Chapter 1 [Up.6 Fix 2] [N_taii]

[Sheria]

So I went through the first part. I don’t know, some vague feelings remained after passing ... The main character, in my opinion, is like a robot. He has no feelings and this does not manifest itself. From the new part, we learned that: 1- he is very weak in battle, 2- he is kind to everyone and tries to help. I don’t know, maybe after impressions about the completed NTRPG 2 I have this, but there the hero, although he didn’t speak, his feelings were felt. Yes, comedy is not inherent in this genre, as is an offshoot from the main plot. Just imagine, I'm sitting masturbating and then a scene with a cat appears ... my reaction? haha ... with regards to the characters, then I already have a favorite, the sister of the protagonist. Why she? Yes, because at least somehow approaches the genre of betrayal. With regards to the Valkyrie, it does not cause me any emotions. It is not known how old she is, it is not known what she feels towards the main character (relations of the type mother-son or girl-boyfriend). Everything turned out so that she first sucked, and then she wants to open her feelings to her beloved. I don’t see any logic here, it seemed that she quickly wanted to give him her first time and continue to have sex with Ezakiel ... Where is the place for "NTR"? With the sister of the protagonist, the situation is already a little better, and the beginning is pretty good. She, unlike him, is trying to get out of this temporary cocoon, where they have spent 10 years. I can’t say anything about the maid and the old butler, apparently they are already sleeping with each other. The maid could also be well introduced to the player and reveal more details about her (where she comes from, what happened in her life, what she decided to live in the mansion, how old she is). In general, I want to say that the game as a whole is still going in an incomprehensible way, but I hope that over time all inaccuracies will be eliminated and then it will become truly beautiful. My thanks to the developer for the provided game. I apologize in advance if I somehow offended.

 

[Crazygamer43]

OP: UPDATED

 

[Slaylife]

So what kind of NTR is this game?

Hard netorare where the MC is a super wimp who gets cucked to death?

Soft netorare where the MC can get some laid if he tries hard enough?

Netorase where the MC is the one to manipulate events to get willingly cucked?

Netori where the MC is the one to steal someone elses partner?

 

[N_taii]

So what kind of NTR is this game?

Hard netorare where the MC is a super wimp who gets cucked to death?

Soft netorare where the MC can get some laid if he tries hard enough?

Netorase where the MC is the one to manipulate events to get willingly cucked?

Netori where the MC is the one to steal someone elses partner?

Netorare, whether you want it hard or soft (pun kinda intended) will be up to you depending on the ending you choose (3 to choose from, canon, non-NTR, NTR).

 

[N_taii]

OP: UPDATED

Thank you!

 

[Crazygamer43]

Thank you!

np

 

[BK-Leo]

Why not making android app? must be popular one...

 

[AssGrim]

How do you trigger the event in last picture and before one?

 

[N_taii]

How do you trigger the event in last picture and before one?

Hmm, they shouldn't be hidden or anything. As long as you play through the game from the beginning of the demo you should be able to see them.
Or if you want, just extract the save files inside of the game files (if I'm not mistaken, it should be titled Save files update 1), put them into your save folder and load save number 4, it should do the trick : )
Edit: if you want to know what save file equals what cutscene, just look at the open the "save files" spoiler in the original game post and it should tell you everything you wanna know^^

 

[Sillnill]

The fact that the MC will never actually figure anything out is kinda, I dunno, boring? I really love when subtle hints are provided and the story takes the time it needs before revealing what is happening to both the MC and the player. However the actual reaction or rather realization of the MC is kinda important IMO. The realization of what has been going on and the fact that nothing was done to prevent it. Actual connections between the MC and the "targets" resulting in the feeling of betrayal.

Still very exited for this project tho.

 

[N_taii]

The fact that the MC will never actually figure anything out is kinda, I dunno, boring? I really love when subtle hints are provided and the story takes the time it needs before revealing what is happening to both the MC and the player. However the actual reaction or rather realization of the MC is kinda important IMO. The realization of what has been going on and the fact that nothing was done to prevent it. Actual connections between the MC and the "targets" resulting in the feeling of betrayal.

Still very exited for this project tho.

Yeah, about that, I might have changed a little bit how I'm going to develop this whole thing compared to when I first released the demo. Won't spoil too much but, long story short, he'll have to find out one way or another in order to trigger the "what ending do you wanna go for" kind of choice later on in the game.
However, the majority of the game will indeed be a NTR where the MC doesn't realize what's going on.

Thank you for your feedback btw : )

 

[Your Dad's Husband]

The fact that the MC will never actually figure anything out is kinda, I dunno, boring? I really love when subtle hints are provided and the story takes the time it needs before revealing what is happening to both the MC and the player. However the actual reaction or rather realization of the MC is kinda important IMO. The realization of what has been going on and the fact that nothing was done to prevent it. Actual connections between the MC and the "targets" resulting in the feeling of betrayal.

Still very exited for this project tho.

Usually the big reveal is saved for the end of the game. At the beginning the MC is oblivious but as the story progresses he notices changes in the people around him as well as clues as to what may be going on, why do I hear moaning? Whats this white stuff near my sister/moms room? Why does she look out of breath and dis-sheveled?

You build up the dread and cash out on the reveal, worked for NTRPG 1 and 2 as well as many NTR hentai/manga titles.

 

[shlangik]

So, you rly hit me in my heart, this is the best ntrpg , but i can't be your patron , because in my country is so hard with patreon, ty so much for this masterpiece. How long to wait for the next update?

 

[N_taii]

So I went through the first part. I don’t know, some vague feelings remained after passing ... The main character, in my opinion, is like a robot. He has no feelings and this does not manifest itself. From the new part, we learned that: 1- he is very weak in battle, 2- he is kind to everyone and tries to help. I don’t know, maybe after impressions about the completed NTRPG 2 I have this, but there the hero, although he didn’t speak, his feelings were felt. Yes, comedy is not inherent in this genre, as is an offshoot from the main plot. Just imagine, I'm sitting masturbating and then a scene with a cat appears ... my reaction? haha ... with regards to the characters, then I already have a favorite, the sister of the protagonist. Why she? Yes, because at least somehow approaches the genre of betrayal. With regards to the Valkyrie, it does not cause me any emotions. It is not known how old she is, it is not known what she feels towards the main character (relations of the type mother-son or girl-boyfriend). Everything turned out so that she first sucked, and then she wants to open her feelings to her beloved. I don’t see any logic here, it seemed that she quickly wanted to give him her first time and continue to have sex with Ezakiel ... Where is the place for "NTR"? With the sister of the protagonist, the situation is already a little better, and the beginning is pretty good. She, unlike him, is trying to get out of this temporary cocoon, where they have spent 10 years. I can’t say anything about the maid and the old butler, apparently they are already sleeping with each other. The maid could also be well introduced to the player and reveal more details about her (where she comes from, what happened in her life, what she decided to live in the mansion, how old she is). In general, I want to say that the game as a whole is still going in an incomprehensible way, but I hope that over time all inaccuracies will be eliminated and then it will become truly beautiful. My thanks to the developer for the provided game. I apologize in advance if I somehow offended.

No offense in giving honest feedback, and sorry I took so long to answer. : )
I see, I think the game's main shortcoming is trying to introduce too many characters with too many different storylines, and some end up having more background story than others.
I think giving a bit more backstory would be better to better grasp each character's personality. I'll try to do that in the future, maybe continuing Eleonora's dream sequence we saw in this public update. I'll se how I can do that.

In my defense, as far as I remember, I didn't feel like the MC of NTRPG2 did show more emotions. He remained pretty passive through the whole ordeal, but showed a side of his personality at the end of the game, and that might be what stuck with you. Just a guess : )

 

[N_taii]

So, you rly hit me in my heart, this is the best ntrpg , but i can't be your patron , because in my country is so hard with patreon, ty so much for this masterpiece. How long to wait for the next update?

Hey, thank you for your comment, I'm really happy you liked it : )
Public updates usually come out 1 day after I released the following patreon update. So update 3 will be released 20th of February, which means update 2 will be made public on the 21st, if everything goes well^^.

 

[AssGrim]

Hmm, they shouldn't be hidden or anything. As long as you play through the game from the beginning of the demo you should be able to see them.
Or if you want, just extract the save files inside of the game files (if I'm not mistaken, it should be titled Save files update 1), put them into your save folder and load save number 4, it should do the trick : )
Edit: if you want to know what save file equals what cutscene, just look at the open the "save files" spoiler in the original game post and it should tell you everything you wanna know^^

Thank you, followed the instructions and found every scene.
This is a great game, one of the few ntrpgs that I actually enjoy.
Love the fact you keep the mc not bonding to the player so that when ntr happens it doesn't leave much guilt.
Looking forward to the next update.

 

[LilitoKun]

thanks my brooooo xD

 

[Fargoon]

A NTRPG inspired game. Well...... Sign me up !!!

I will definitely give this game a try but from reading the description I don't like maid/butler stuff.

Even before downloading the game I already hope you find great success and make more games in the same style.
A game mix of NTRPG 2 + Thug Hero Party( only the pink hair girl part) + Scale Garden Games.

Great Find for Me!

 

[N_taii]

A NTRPG inspired game. Well...... Sign me up !!!

I will definitely give this game a try but from reading the description I don't like maid/butler stuff.

Even before downloading the game I already hope you find great success and make more games in the same style.
A game mix of NTRPG 2 + Thug Hero Party( only the pink hair girl part) + Scale Garden Games.

Great Find for Me!

Well, if I remember well, the pink haired girl was the main heroine in THP, right? If so, then we might like the same stuff in terms of NTR, because I didn't really like the sister part nor the dragon warrior (or whatever she was) one either.
Anyway, hope you'll like it : )

 

[Pelican!]

To be honest I feel like Merry H-Mas was way better than this game even if it was way smaller, in that game I knew the characters well enough for it to be enjoyable but not too well that I'd spend a stupidly long time going through dialogue. And the process for getting H scenes in Merry H-Mas was much simpler and to the point and was both relevant and helpful for the erotic background of the H scenes unlike in Henteria where I feel like im doing mindless minial chores that are irrelevant to the H scenes to come serving no purpose but to have filler time inbetween Henteria so I don't speedrun the game, these monotinous chores are uninteresting and disconnected from the main narrative enough to where you feel unsattisfied doing them and they require enough attention doing them to where you cant just doze off while doing them waiting for the next H scene


I hope this doesn't come off as hate cause I really enjoyed the H scenes, I think it'd be a good idea to incorporate the minial tasks inbetween cutscenes to said cutscenes like how in Merry H-Mas searching for the bathroom key and having it always slip out of sight was engaging because NTR was happening right behind my back while I was doing it and the longer it took the more NTR was happening.