RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles: Chapter 1 [Up.6 Fix 2] [N_taii]

[N_taii]

To be honest ...

Yeah, that's kind of the problem with those mini-puzzles games is that their whole purpose is to serve as some kind of breather before going right back into the action. Some people have told me they enjoyed it instead of having constantly something happening.
I do understand that some of them feel too disconnected from the story, and that's something I've been trying to fix.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep it in mind : )

 

[Pelican!]

Yeah, that's kind of the problem with those mini-puzzles games is that their whole purpose is to serve as some kind of breather before going right back into the action. Some people have told me they enjoyed it instead of having constantly something happening.
I do understand that some of them feel too disconnected from the story, and that's something I've been trying to fix.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep it in mind : )

I think speed is also important, some enjoy taking things slow and some enjoy just getting to the meat. If you can add a dialogue skip button at the very least that'd be an appreciated feature.

 

[N_taii]

I think speed is also important, some enjoy taking things slow and some enjoy just getting to the meat. If you can add a dialogue skip button at the very least that'd be an appreciated feature.

Skip text is a feature that's actually already been added, it can be achieved by pressing CTRL. Thing is, no matter how many scripts I tried, all of them will wait until the full message's appeared on the dialogue box, which means that it isn't really all that fast in the end.

 

[TheMagister]

That is one thing I would look into more. It's also a lot of the "cutscenes" where people are walking or the screen is moving and it goes quite slow, and there are other games where CTRL serves as a speed-up/fast-forward for the entire game almost. I felt especially the tracking of Nestia was probably a bit too slow, not necessarily from a writing perspective but just in game perspective, if you get what I mean.

 

[SavageKing]

I really would like to have rpg where, the MC is a villian who might have been defeated over and over by Heroes. So to get his revange he cucks all the heroes by stealing their wives an daughters.

 

[N_taii]

That is one thing I would look into more. It's also a lot of the "cutscenes" where people are walking or the screen is moving and it goes quite slow, and there are other games where CTRL serves as a speed-up/fast-forward for the entire game almost. I felt especially the tracking of Nestia was probably a bit too slow, not necessarily from a writing perspective but just in game perspective, if you get what I mean.

I tried my best to get rid of those long moments where nothing was happening in the last updates. Instead of showing them walking, it just cuts with a blackscreen and teleports the chars to their destination instantly. However, this should have been implemented in update 1 (starting right after Ezekiel reads the book in his room). Is that what you meant ?

I really would like to have rpg where, the MC is a villian who might have been defeated over and over by Heroes. So to get his revange he cucks all the heroes by stealing their wives an daughters.

That might be an interesting idea for a netori game, actually^^. However, a bit more variation than just mother-daugther would seem nicer. Like a young hero's mom, some hero's sister who also happened to be a hero herself, and so on.

 

[AssGrim]

I really would like to have rpg where, the MC is a villian who might have been defeated over and over by Heroes. So to get his revange he cucks all the heroes by stealing their wives an daughters.

There was one with a similar plot called "Overwhored".
In that, you are literally the demon lord resurrected and get revenge on the heroes by corrupting them.
That was one of the best I played.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Ok, Lets do this...
First and formost I don't hate or love NTR, porn is porn so its whatever for me.

What I did like, The sprite animation, I don't know why but even rpg maker sprites having sex is cute to me So I thought it was cool. Thats also what I liked about the NTRPG series. Now what I didn't like was how in some scenes we didn't see sprite sex, instead it went into this 16 bit sprite animation instead of just using the regular sprites and letting our imagination do the rest.

The story so far, Honestly I really liked the early part of the game where i was running around and trying to watch the woodcutter get fucked, even though what is going on with her makes little to no sense. IF the apprentice obviously shows no interest or willingness to work, regardless of actual potential, the master would've just gotten rid of them and found someone else. Not after hearing he has sex in to and then tries to use that to convince him.

The second half with the demons... honestly just seems eh, I kinda was kinda looking forward to seeing the old good which i did assume was somekinda even demon be friend and it start cucking the dude or even taking the guys place from time to time and forcing his way onto the girls, playing with their feelings and emotions while the real him was forced to watch as the old god in his form was taking his place in his form. Or even have the succubus NTR him, which would've been a very interesting since you never see any ntr where its the woman getting cucked lmaoo.

Either way, overall I did like the game.

 

[Ironnitro]

Hi I normally don't post in the comments but I have to say my peace .Like the other guys you started off strong then I notice the double blackmail u have running basically the same story one with the woodcutters blackmail do this or I leave.Then theres the one with the demons whats that?? more blackmail do this or your bf dies its to cookie cutter .Its like one of those hmangas do this or I tell about X about the person you love.Not that those stories are bad they don't last long an are pretty short .I like this game an want to see a lot more chapters seems like its going to end in chapter 3 .Eleonora look like she has given up an its only one chapter in she don't say no to anything .Theres no rules he says "suck my dick" an she just goes "OK" i know its blackmail but its just to easy there no fight from her .I hope there a twist coming cause it seems pretty cut and dry .

 

[elwingo]

You know, i never read the story in this kind of games and only watch the scenes but your premise sounded interesting so i gave it a shot and read everything... i liked it, it didin't blow my mind but i liked it, but there's one big problem.

It gets really annoying!!!! i don't mind the ntr at all trust me but the MC being interrupted every-single-fucking-time gets boring because i thought "ok, let's see what she has to say" but no, the stupid demon interrupts with stupid orders, if that demon is going to fuck the lady fine i don't care but don't cut a scene or dialogue because of some stupid interruption, let the MC walk into the "action" accidentaly i don't mind but please if the MC has some important dialogue with the lady, the sister or the maid please finish it before going for the ntr

sorry for the rant but i actually enjoy this story.

 

[SavageKing]

I tried my best to get rid of those long moments where nothing was happening in the last updates. Instead of showing them walking, it just cuts with a blackscreen and teleports the chars to their destination instantly. However, this should have been implemented in update 1 (starting right after Ezekiel reads the book in his room). Is that what you meant ?


That might be an interesting idea for a netori game, actually^^. However, a bit more variation than just mother-daugther would seem nicer. Like a young hero's mom, some hero's sister who also happened to be a hero herself, and so on.

Well of course! That was what I was basicly talking about, wives, daughters, sisters, female heroines Rookies, Female adventures and so on. make it to the point where Impregnating them and doing your biding would be awesome! Though, the rp would have to be more darker than the heroes point of view so it be very mature, rape, violance, potions to transform male heros to females to make them your slaves. stuff like that.

 

[SavageKing]

There was one with a similar plot called "Overwhored".
In that, you are literally the demon lord resurrected and get revenge on the heroes by corrupting them.
That was one of the best I played.

I will give that game a try.

 

[Kulman]

Great work N_taii, became a patron for pretty much the first time for you (though not high ranking for now). My little feedback:
1) You did great with the buildup (pretty much the demo) - you need to form some bond with the characters that will end up being corrupted and changed (change has no meaning if you did not have a starting point set)

2)RPGMaker sprites sex is great in many ways - it leaves enough for imagination while anchoring the scene enough (those cuts into the sprited models where we could control the speed I felt were not really needed - I guess they took some time to make, so not sure if worth it)
Another great point is that it probably saves you a lot of time making scenes (not having to render every shot like any other game) - thus giving you time to write great story a put more scenes in (I feel this genre does not need any CG, maybe just a set of faces for happy, angry, horny, ahegao etc. next to the text box)

You mentioned maybe making a change into different rpgmaker in the future - I hope the sprites would stay

3) This point I am not sure on. You always show what happened behind closed doors after letting us guessing as MC. I do not know how hard to implement or if it would be really good, but maybe give the option not to view it - or view it in some magic ball on your behest after? The part of not really being sure what happened and how far they went (and again, imagination working) is really good.

4) Great writing. Both ntrmas and this are interesting and funny when you want them to be. Some might like NTRmas more, but I felt it was just a bite sized snack. This game with the buildup etc is great, I am sure with more updates it will become impeccable.

 

[Masterofpuppets]

Hope you don't mind if I piggyback off your comment to add some of my own thoughts for N_Taii.

2)RPGMaker sprites sex is great in many ways - it leaves enough for imagination while anchoring the scene enough (those cuts into the sprited models where we could control the speed I felt were not really needed - I guess they took some time to make, so not sure if worth it)

Don't know if I mentioned this in any of my prior comments, but I agree with this. The larger sprites are a bit... Rough, to say the least. At least for me they take me out of the moment a little bit when I'm into the moment and then I suddenly have the awkward controlled animation. I don't know how it is for other people, but in NTR, the enjoyment I get comes from the situation as a whole. The immorality, the story, the characters, the secrecy. And thus I actually prefer to just witness the moment. That's what was amazing in the NTRPG games. The sex scenes played out and you couldn't do anything about it, because its NTR. Having control over what is supposed to be NTR feels a little odd to me. But then again, that applies more to NTR where you are meant to empathize heavily with the POV character and this game is a little more detached.

3) This point I am not sure on. You always show what happened behind closed doors after letting us guessing as MC. I do not know how hard to implement or if it would be really good, but maybe give the option not to view it - or view it in some magic ball on your behest after? The part of not really being sure what happened and how far they went (and again, imagination working) is really good.

I agree with this as well. Sometimes having just that little hint at something happening behind locked doors or just out of sight can work wonders to build that delicious NTR atmosphere. The NTRMas game was really good with that. Or, well. It was pretty clear as well, but it had a lot of those really nice "Whats going ooooon?" moments. Though that was pretty much the whole premise. Blind and deaf MC stumbling around. It was great!

In closing, I really liked the update for the most part and I believe the future events will put my worries to rest since this update was mostly buildup and the real corruption is just beginning.

 

[N_taii]

Okay, a lot of people to answer to, let's go^^

Ok, Lets do this...
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Well, some of what you wrote is personal opinion, so there's not much I can do about that^^ Fortunately, even if you don't exactly like the bigger sprites, I make a point to keep the smaller sprite animations before the big ones show up : )
For the woodcutter storyline, I did try to make it more "believable" in update 2, dunno if that worked out though.

Hi I normally don't post in the comments but I have to say my peace.....

I tried to create 4 reasons for 4 types of NTR in the game, I'll add a spoiler because there actually are some slight spoiler:

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You know, i never read the story in this kind of games and only watch the scenes but your premise sounded interesting so i gave it a shot and read everything... i liked it, it didin't blow my mind but i liked it, but there's one big problem.
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Possible spoilers in my answer below : )

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Great work N_taii, became a patron for pretty much the first time for you (though not high ranking for now). My little feedback:
1) You did great with the buildup (pretty much the demo) - you need to form some bond with the characters that will end up being corrupted and changed (change has no meaning if you did not have a starting point set)
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Thank you : )
answering point 2: those bigger scenes are actually comissioned, so they take me a bit of time to implement in-game, but not to draw. This, along with the puzzles, was a way for me to take some distance with the original NTRPG games, because I didn't want to make a carbon copy of them. Also, people get to have monthly votes on something on Patreon: )
I hesitated if I should have faces added next to the dialogue box, but I decided not to, because I felt it was better to have a rough idea of the characters' appearance with the sprite, but leave the rest to imagination.

Also, yes, the sprites will definitely stay, but I'll commission a pixel artist to make them, because I want to use a version of RPGM that has slightly more detailed sprites, which is above my skills as a beginner pixel artist^^

point 3: I wanted to show most of the scenes at the start, just to make sure that everyone could fully grasp what was going on. From now on, I'm planning on adding more suggestive NTR scenes (dunno if you've seen my last patreon post, but the gif is part of it).
4: once again, thank you!^^

Hope you don't mind if I piggyback off your comment to add some of my own thoughts for N_Taii.
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I hope I have answered most of your worries/comment with the answer I have given Kulman ^^

Thank you everyone for the feedback !

 

[hentaixia]

the new update are awesome !
keep up the good work !
i really like the Eleonora's story line

 

[N_taii]

the new update are awesome !
keep up the good work !
i really like the Eleonora's story line

Thanks ! : )

 

[drevilbob]

feels kind of bad to share. sorry man...
update 2:

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[Lith]

I really like this game. I Normally don't like games with unavoidable NTR as i prefer games with multiple choices/endings but due to the how much i like the pixel art i honestly have to say its good. also love the character designs.

 

[FearInCube]

feels kind of bad to share. sorry man...
update 2: Mega

I knew someone would link update 2 eventually XD