- Oct 23, 2019
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I'm rather conflicted about the newest update. Putting aside my personal preference for main characters over side adventures, the writing has changed and not entirely for the best.
The art has massively improved, that nobody can deny. It's often weird seeing old and good art together, it's interesting how fast Nitro has improved. Alain next to Yvet looks ridiculous. Mars still changes skincolors to give "contrast" but eh. Animations are much better this time around.
But the writing is kind of offputting. This game was gripping at first because it was actually interesting to see Mars quasi-realistically getting into people's minds slowly but surely. The game defied porn logic, it actually took time and effort to bring down character's walls and it happened in a convincing manner.
This update though, everyone who hates us just instantly becomes cock addicted and changes their worldview in a flash because Mars is just that good at fucking apparently. Imagine if Cecille immediately gave up the moment Mars showed his dick. It's so lazy and frankly completely unrelatable that it becomes impossible to suspend your sense of disbelief. Not that you can relate to any of the characters in the series. I use that phrase as in it's difficult to see any of the characters as human in this update. They just become caricaturized, flanderized porn characters again, which is a massive downgrade from where the game started.
Gwyndolin especially was the biggest example of that to me. Her "fall" is unfinished, but what's available still sucks. Elena's latest batch of content is also stretching the scope of her character to tearing. She has a lot of content and a lot of development, yet I still cannot see this Elena from the first Elena that Nitro shows, and that's not just because she wasn't fucked at that point. It's obvious plans for her were changed midway and that change is straining the initial character that was shown. She's so fucking dumb atm and so comically "opposite" of her "original self" in the name of cheap irony I can't take anything about her seriously. Yvet's family furthermore just...kind of sucks. Mars goes and does this family therapy 101 bullshit with the dad and the dad just suddenly thanks Mars for cucking him and...becomes fine with it??? Like sure, the village is full of weirdo fucks and the game states that constantly, but if you're gonna use that as a crux for every stupid 180 in writing that's just shoddy.
I understand that mere NPC characters cannot enjoy the same amount of depth that Cecille, Sera and Erin do and that character development for them needs to happen on a faster pace. But then that just means you have to keep the scope for these NPCs small rather than turn Mars into some actual godlike being who has entire cults around his dick with everyone ever just immediately getting brainwashed from precum. It genuinely makes the story have 0 weight or sense otherwise and it just becomes yet another porn game on the list rather than something special.
Also less Erin POV's please? This is a "pure Netori game" in Nitro's own words from discord, not a netorare game.
The art has massively improved, that nobody can deny. It's often weird seeing old and good art together, it's interesting how fast Nitro has improved. Alain next to Yvet looks ridiculous. Mars still changes skincolors to give "contrast" but eh. Animations are much better this time around.
But the writing is kind of offputting. This game was gripping at first because it was actually interesting to see Mars quasi-realistically getting into people's minds slowly but surely. The game defied porn logic, it actually took time and effort to bring down character's walls and it happened in a convincing manner.
This update though, everyone who hates us just instantly becomes cock addicted and changes their worldview in a flash because Mars is just that good at fucking apparently. Imagine if Cecille immediately gave up the moment Mars showed his dick. It's so lazy and frankly completely unrelatable that it becomes impossible to suspend your sense of disbelief. Not that you can relate to any of the characters in the series. I use that phrase as in it's difficult to see any of the characters as human in this update. They just become caricaturized, flanderized porn characters again, which is a massive downgrade from where the game started.
Gwyndolin especially was the biggest example of that to me. Her "fall" is unfinished, but what's available still sucks. Elena's latest batch of content is also stretching the scope of her character to tearing. She has a lot of content and a lot of development, yet I still cannot see this Elena from the first Elena that Nitro shows, and that's not just because she wasn't fucked at that point. It's obvious plans for her were changed midway and that change is straining the initial character that was shown. She's so fucking dumb atm and so comically "opposite" of her "original self" in the name of cheap irony I can't take anything about her seriously. Yvet's family furthermore just...kind of sucks. Mars goes and does this family therapy 101 bullshit with the dad and the dad just suddenly thanks Mars for cucking him and...becomes fine with it??? Like sure, the village is full of weirdo fucks and the game states that constantly, but if you're gonna use that as a crux for every stupid 180 in writing that's just shoddy.
I understand that mere NPC characters cannot enjoy the same amount of depth that Cecille, Sera and Erin do and that character development for them needs to happen on a faster pace. But then that just means you have to keep the scope for these NPCs small rather than turn Mars into some actual godlike being who has entire cults around his dick with everyone ever just immediately getting brainwashed from precum. It genuinely makes the story have 0 weight or sense otherwise and it just becomes yet another porn game on the list rather than something special.
Also less Erin POV's please? This is a "pure Netori game" in Nitro's own words from discord, not a netorare game.
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