mandragoora

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How spastic can you be to not even read the fucking game before commenting ? Mars is not sigma chungus patric bateman and he is NOT a demon he is half breed him being half demon half human is the whole point of the fucking game's story. Mars being half breed makes him think for both humans and demons even tho neither humanity or demons want him and that creates interesting points and plot all together. If you want edgelord MC go watch some garbage isekai.
I always find amusing people who want to make porn story more than anything that enhances and fulfill their kinks. You'll have your time way better spent reading a book or watching a TV series/movie for a decent plot and story.

That being said, i couldn't care less how the story really is, if someone doesn't take a "complex" hentai story and make it their own is doing it wrong and is wasting a chance to make of it something you enjoy personally, we've several people who complain about stuff here that could easily be avoided by making the story their own.

Sometimes when the story is short i even go coding and change the dialogues to fit best my visions/interpretations about it. This is porn, there's no poetry here.
 
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Sewyoba

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I always find amusing people who want to make porn story more than anything that enhances and fulfill their kinks. You'll have your time way better spent reading a book or watching a TV series/movie for a decent plot and story.
This one has a really good story, though
 

SaddamHussein

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I always find amusing people who want to make porn story more than anything that enhances and fulfill their kinks. You'll have your time way better spent reading a book or watching a TV series/movie for a decent plot and story.

That being said, i couldn't care less how the story really is, if someone doesn't take a "complex" hentai story and make it their own is doing it wrong and is wasting a chance to make of it something you enjoy personally, we've several people who complain about stuff here that could easily be avoided by making the story their own.

Sometimes when the story is short i even go coding and change the dialogues to fit best my visions/interpretations about it. This is porn, there's no poetry here.
There is difference between eroge(or nukige) and adult themed visual novels now just because there is sex in it it doesn't mean porn game for example Fate/stay night,the shell,devils g string and many that is considered masterpieces by many all this problem could've solved easily if you can read but guess you don't have that ability
 

Virtual_Insanity

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i'm insane if i say that the gallery is useless? i think the game has a lot more of scenes than the gallery is showing you, a lot of chats have very good scenes that are not in the gallery i assume it's because there are a lot? but most of them are good so i really don't know if it's intended or not.
 
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gargamel44

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There is difference between eroge(or nukige) and adult themed visual novels now just because there is sex in it it doesn't mean porn game for example Fate/stay night,the shell,devils g string and many that is considered masterpieces by many all this problem could've solved easily if you can read but guess you don't have that ability
The problem is looking at tags/names and not observing the nature of those scenes. I'm not talking about fate or anything alike, but there's a clear distinction between erotism and pornography. Most VNs could do without the pornography and the story wouldn't change, for example. While erotism is as important as tragedy would be in a drama, but it still clearly differenciates from pornography even if they share the same importance in the story. It's commonly accepted there're limits to how explicit can a sexual scene be. Most agree that if the erotism is perverted into fully shown and indulgent sex, it becomes pornography.

Madame Bovary is a novel that uses erotism as one of its strongest themes, while Hero Party must Falls is a pornographic visual novel, which is very erotic.

Obviously there are no rules to how well-written it can be, absolutely a porn novel can be better than a regular novel, even if it's less transcendent, after all porn satisfies a short and intense emotion that doesn't stay with you once you've had your fill.

And the main problem will always be (at least for me) that the writing needs to be dumbed down in order to make things work in a pornographic setting. It becomes too shallow and the purpose is too insignificant. But well, that's the point.

And I'll bet people appreciates fate's art and writing, but only is interested in the sex scenes once they're horny. This won't happen with erotism, since it builds sexual tension in a complete different way, in a way that stays with you and can be relived without the need of any urge, just like you would fondly remember how snow white and her prince shared their first kiss.

In the end, pornography does change completely the nature of a work, we can't deny it whether you call it adult novel or whatever.
 
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Treefur

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i'm insane if i say that the gallery is useless? i think the game has a lot more of scenes than the gallery is showing you, a lot of chats have very good scenes that are not in the gallery i assume it's because there are a lot? but most of them are good so i really don't know if it's intended or not.
I completely agree, none of the brothel scenes are there at all for example, and it has that weird glitch where the other options disappear when you click off Cecille's tag. Btw does anyone happen to have a full save for this update, I recently changed computers and I'd really like not having to do everything again.
 

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Sera timeskip design - draft

any actual critiques other than "looks like shit" will actually help them here. its a draft
she looks great besides the color of her clothes, I personally think blue as a main color is not that fitting for darker skins. and specially that tone, not saturated enough to blend with the skin and not vivid enough to contrast with it. for example the blue in her sash is great as a single piece. but the bra and skirt. could use a tone shift, also the cheetah pattern but that is just a minor personal taste thing. otherwise 9/10 desing.
 

gargamel44

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Sera timeskip design - draft

any actual critiques other than "looks like shit" will actually help them here. its a draft
Personally I don't even think that's her. I wouldn't have recognised her without the eye detail. Maybe I'm wrong but skin looks darker and obviously the black hair looks weird when it should be blue. Face looks straight up different. The body is completely different too, that might have logic because she has stopped being a warrior or because of the curse but it adds to the pile of things that make this design look like something radically different.

Basically it feels like you took Sera from us and replaced her with someone who shares the same quirk.

And it might be a stretch but it almost feels like Nitro murdered her whole vibe to turn her into Elena 2.0. I personally think it would be ass if he rewired her personality to express how Mars changed her, it would be like if all the build up was for nothing since in the end we just don't see the character we loved anymore.
 
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Sewyoba

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Personally I don't even think that's her. I wouldn't have recognised her without the eye detail. Maybe I'm wrong but skin looks darker and obviously the black hair looks weird when it should be blue. Face looks straight up different. The body is completely different too, that might have logic because she has stopped being a warrior or because of the curse but it adds to the pile of things that make this design look like something radically different.
Sera's hair is black, it's blue because of magic. That's not a final design anyway

what do i need to do to trigger the event ?
Lavinia should come offer to femdom Erin, and then those events will happen at midday, I think? After you make Cecille to date Erin a couple of times from her training (not sex) menu. There's also an event where Lavinia dresses Erin up as Erica
 

gargamel44

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Sera's hair is black, it's blue because of magic. That's not a final design anyway
Eh, in her kid design she has blue hair. The other dude from her tribe has blueish hair. I see no reason to strip that away from her? It's part of her charm. I could understand it for Erin because of his mother but I just don't see why would you destroy Sera's hair.
 
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