VN Ren'Py Hero [v0.1 The awakening] [A Mob]

[Incognito^]

I don't say these things to be a dick. rather I'm highlighting issues you can fix going forward to make a more successful VN and hopefully it leads into you making other games that people enjoy. again, not saying it to be a dick but rather just a bit of honest criticism

nah I always support people who are civil you came here and said nah not for me. I respect you for that
not everybody need to like what I make but teling lies and calling me names. not a good thing for new guy like me

Yes I want money and I want your money too but I don't wnat to be a sucker who suck everyone for money

I hope get what i'm aiming good night dude

 

[Incognito^]

so why do you think the player wants to see cuck stuff then?

well mr active member
I'm not telling you watch a sex scene of Tyrant fucking queen
. I'm telling you I make a snippet a pic of what fuck is happening around her life

that won't make you cuck that makes know something about her.

How many fucking times I need to tell you all

 

[th3n]

well mr active member
I'm not telling you watch a sex scene of Tyrant fucking queen
. I'm telling you I make a snippet a pic of what fuck is happening around her life

that won't make you cuck that makes know something about her.

How many fucking times I need to tell you all

Then im going to ask you the question that is going to make you understand how people of the no-ntr or harem crowd think. Why should i care about what is happening around her life? If she is not a li and have nothing to do with us in terms of relationship is not necesary to see her take 5 dicks at the same time, is renders, time and efforts wasted because, for example, im not interested in seeing her getting railed. The thins is that is not ntr, but if you play a tipically harem or mc centric game you spect the game to resolve on the protagonist, his girls (Future or present). We are not interested in knowing what mr. big dick junior is doing in a different country with mr not the LI of the mc. I don't know if what i said was clear. But to summaryze if you expect an harem game you are looking for an adventure in the skin of the mc, the girls that he is going to fuck and all that, and if you came to a game that is supposed to be somewhere close to that and you see a bangang party you are not going to react well. You will react even worse if you consider that ntr and the tag is not there.

Your game is your game, do what you want to do, i just wanted to tell you this so you can understand a little how the people i think you are trying to make money with works. I personally don't think im going to play this, probably on ignore it goes because im not interested in seing other people fucking but that's me, i recommend you to put something refering that you are not the only one that have action and put the voyeur tag or something like that. Good luck with your game!.

 

[Testing21]

On occasion, you may wish to try using "their" or "they're".

 

[th3n]

On occasion, you may wish to try using "their" or "they're".

English is not my first lenguage and i'm still learning, i try to not use translators so i can learn. Thanks for the pointers!

 

[drifter139]

I am going to say this so people coming here can understand. there is no need to be overly harsh with the developer of this game. you can suggest what they work on in a civilized manner, offer help in some way, or just help them by explaining what some terms mean such as what ntr is. again, all of this can be done without the need for insults

 

[Incognito^]

Then im going to ask you the question that is going to make you understand how people of the no-ntr or harem crowd think. Why should i care about what is happening around her life? If she is not a li and have nothing to do with us in terms of relationship is not necesary to see her take 5 dicks at the same time, is renders, time and efforts wasted because, for example, im not interested in seeing her getting railed. The thins is that is not ntr, but if you play a tipically harem or mc centric game you spect the game to resolve on the protagonist, his girls (Future or present). We are not interested in knowing what mr. big dick junior is doing in a different country with mr not the LI of the mc. I don't know if what i said was clear. But to summaryze if you expect an harem game you are looking for an adventure in the skin of the mc, the girls that he is going to fuck and all that, and if you came to a game that is supposed to be somewhere close to that and you see a bangang party you are not going to react well. You will react even worse if you consider that ntr and the tag is not there.

Your game is your game, do what you want to do, i just wanted to tell you this so you can understand a little how the people i think you are trying to make money with works. I personally don't think im going to play this, probably on ignore it goes because im not interested in seing other people fucking but that's me, i recommend you to put something refering that you are not the only one that have action and put the voyeur tag or something like that. Good luck with your game!.

FUCK dude
ok good what you said was correct
Did you even read new version where I solved this she was looking down by tyrant and that cuts away that is it

I solved this and you still talking???

this is totally happened in the game I fucking said I don't have time to make a full blown renders and animation that mc are not involved

really play the game you understand what is going on just reading these comments won't take you any where
it is just you hating me for nothing and the active member laughs on you and me for a fake comment he posted

This is what happened and this is what I mean when I show snippets to make you understand





you can go serach all my comments I never said I want to show 5 or a half dicks in her ass or anywhere,
read the story not the comments


the reason I waited two days to debunk all the comments that posted netotare cuck. I know those people came here only to ruin me and my game because it is not for them and for the tags

they are idiots and here is the proff above

because they didn't play the game they just saw the comments and blabbing bow bow..,

that is what really happened in the game
dude play the game not just mine any game and decide for yourself because we have weridos here spout nonsense based on there own bias

 

[Juerhullycin]

I am going to say this so people coming here can understand. there is no need to be overly harsh with the developer of this game. you can suggest what they work on in a civilized manner, offer help in some way, or just help them by explaining what some terms mean such as what ntr is. again, all of this can be done without the need for insults

did you read anything the dev said on here, just asking? because, he is the one spew toxic sludge with every post, you dont need to wonder if the whole conversation gets toxic. People tend to answer with the same energy given.

 

[Incognito^]

did you read anything the dev said on here, just asking? because, he is the one spew toxic sludge with every post, you dont need to wonder if the whole conversation gets toxic. People tend to answer with the same energy given.

you didn't read anything
dude

I debunked you ass and you talking
What a pity I hope you use your free time on even more good things
read all the comments

i never said i want to show dicks in her ass I never said this and that
all I said I will show few snippet to make you understand story
And I proved it you didn't played the game or anything

Show me one toxic sludge I say you people??

you just coping with comments for interactions

FUCK dude
ok good what you said was correct
Did you even read new version where I solved this she was looking down by tyrant and that cuts away that is it

I solved this and you still talking???

this is totally happened in the game I fucking said I don't have time to make a full blown renders and animation that mc are not involved

really play the game you understand what is going on just reading these comments won't take you any where
it is just you hating me for nothing and the active member laughs on you and me for a fake comment he posted

This is what happened and this is what I mean when I show snippets to make you understand
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you can go serach all my comments I never said I want to show 5 or a half dicks in her ass or anywhere,
read the story not the comments


the reason I waited two days to debunk all the comments that posted netotare cuck they are idiots and here is the proff above

because they didn't play the game they just saw the comments and blabbing bow bow..,

that is what really happened in the game
dude play the game not just mine any game and decide for yourself because we have weridos here spout nonsense based on there own bias

 

[Incognito^]

How many people hate me brother
another werido did he even played the game? and gave me a review

there is no reason to be there
WTF

What did I shove here
he won't eloborate because he don't know what is in the game
there is no sex scene related to any potential female who bed with MC
there is no forced story plot. All I did was show the villan and mc and he saying those things have no real reason to be there

wtf
are you serious

But I agree on dialogues some are top and some are way bottom give me time to fix that
But coping with wrong reviews dude just say you didn't like the game

shove content some people won't like
So he saying

you people don't like
GORE
Anti hero
Villain being villain

especially a commnet did way better than what he trying to say


this what he trying to say


don't write review based on your own bias write based on what is in the game stop this cap @Antoni308

 

[Xxrizz]

Dude you said power for tale and I tried to correct you and you didn't saw it and went on I'm wrong
again I tried to correct for your mistake and told you reason

Me giving reason makes combative for mild critics and you took my side Dude do you think I care about some cuck comments I fucking play with them Until I get bored that is how it works

and also dude I'm not english professor to make every sentence has correct grammer ok
"your pussy feels good compared to all" what you didn't understand here can you please elaborate sir
everything is your fault and coming at me for one or two dialogues that are wrng

that is not called criticism you just cheery picking a wrng line and saying I'm wrng when I wrote good lines like this
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and I have even more good lines like this that elevates the story and some cope artists trying to show a fucking line

I wrote for fun like 2 lines he showed Dude

you have a plan to ruin my game for some wrng lines and removing everything in the game

i didn't know you but you attacking me with your lazy review you didn't tried to read what you wrote and I corrected you you didn't read that

when I gave explanation I'm toxic and I can't take critic's WTF

everybody is victim around me except me. this dude take a wrng line and say all the grammer in the game is bad etc., and he is victim and I'm toxic for calling him out

OK if your Engrish is so good why is so fucked up in your replies here i mean not even one sentence is coherent every answer is like people are talking with Yoda '' Do or do not. There is no try. '' this is how im seeing it and here some of the people are trying to help you out but half of the stuff you're saying iam becoming blind wtf and i am not even Native but still fuck

 

[Incognito^]

OK if your Engrish is so good why is so fucked up in your replies here i mean not even one sentence is coherent every answer is like people are talking with Yoda '' Do or do not. There is no try. '' this is how im seeing it and here some of the people are trying to help you out but half of the stuff you're saying iam becoming blind wtf and i am not even Native but still fuck

why I need to be so good with some replies my dude
I'm not writing a letter to my boss I'm writing to comment but when It needed I write comments properly but when I writing to some weirdos I don't care

just like now, it is just based on person my dude

And you probably one of those guys who takes comments seriously than what is in the game.
I fucking showed above what is the extent of english i used in game but still you don't care because you came her to fight, not to read

for these weirdos only thing I say open your eyes and see the comment above where I showed pic that shows what kind of english did I use

is this English good for you mr member and Grammer expert

 

[Xxrizz]

why I need to be so good with some replies my dude
I'm not writing a letter to my boss I'm writing to comment but when It needed I write comments properly but when I writing to some weirdos I don't care

just like now, it is just based on person my dude

And you probably one of those guys who takes comments seriously than what is in the game.
I fucking showed above what is the extent of english i used in game but still you don't care because you came her to fight, not to read

for these weirdos only thing I say open your eyes and see the comment above where I showed pic that shows what kind of english did I use

is this English good for you mr member and Grammer expert

Ok dude ...but still sucks

 

[Incognito^]

Ok dude ...but still sucks

for a guy who came here to fight, everything is sucks

i debunked every comment that said bad about me and my game
my game grammer and story has issues I debunked it
my game has unnecessary stuff that shows Netotare I debunked it
you said my english is Engrish I debunked it

still my answer suck because you're here to fight not to read
So for you a question

how you become a member of F95 when you're this biased

I don't get how this member system works do you pay them or you a member of there staff I don't get

you're biased as fuck brother

 

[Rockero_69]

Finally an MC who is not mediocre or who needs to grow a backbone, that is how an MC should be, not letting anyone down, I'm already waiting for the next update and I hope it's not as short as this demo and I support Netori.

The redhead MILF 11/10, greetings and good luck DEV

 

[Incognito^]

Finally an MC who is not mediocre or who needs to grow a backbone, that is how an MC should be, not letting anyone down, I'm already waiting for the next update and I hope it's not as short as this demo and I support Netori.

The redhead MILF 11/10, greetings and good luck DEV

finally I'm waiting for guys who appreciate the MC and you arrived

I'm not saying people who don't like mc are not wrng but I'm waiting for you guys

 

[Xxrizz]

how you become a member of F95

I just registered like every other person and you're arguying not me you can not take a criticism some of the people are trying to help but you are quite ''angry'' person but ok good luck with your game ....

 

[Incognito^]

I just registered like every other person and you're arguying not me you can not take a criticism some of the people are trying to help but you are quite ''angry'' person but ok good luck with your game ....

I can not take critics OK
boom

boom
boom

boom read full grim thread I'm and him had a civil convo what he want what I can do

boom he said I don't like game based on his opinion not blamming my game for what it is and I said my opinion two growns ups talking



unlike you they don't saying stupid stuff they being good and critical and I'm being good and respond to them respectfully
it depends on person

I can't critics damn How many times do I need to debunk your lame ass

and I can see you putting laugh emoji for a civil reply that is where your mind go stuck

Now I understand anyone can apply for F95 member both Intelligent and stupid people

I'm angry

you're a stupid when you can't can't even normally respond to normal reply

 

[ewewewewew]

Hi dev i think netorare is more suitable for your game

 

[Incognito^]

Hi dev i think netorare is more suitable for your game

sorry to disappoint you my dude
I don't have any interest in doing cuck mc netotare is cuck I ;m not trying to mock you

I want a mc who was always incharge of everything sorry to disappoint you