i was almost tempted to try it then saw the dev's replys and then him trying to claim hes white and got a huge dick lmao. those who brag about their size are actually ashamed. so its a no from me, can't and won't support someone that unhinged
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you got triggered because of my dick What
bro play the game and just enjoy your time
by the way your comment gives to so much manly aura
still mine is not big just average just like everybody
I don't think talking about dick sizes is a flex and also bro we live in a almost degraded world where we like sex and everything about it but talking a dick size is unhinged
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another guy with false accusations
fucking read the quote i gave
i'm ok with casual bully or some internet troll
but I'm not ok with a deranged mental fucks calling me cuck all the time just because I made a netori game
when they do that i talk back what?? you just shut your mouth when someone calls you cuck
Say???
https://f95zone.to/threads/hero-v0-2-a-mob.206188/post-15129403
about this dude I can simply one thing just show me a prob you have don't just come here and spout nonsense it just hurt my rep and hurt my game show me fucking proof and then talk
don't just come here with some spelling mistakes u just embarrass yourself if you do that
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A simple thing to all
i put my left nut and head on line
English in the story is great and at the start of VN the english the english feels some what grand and alien because that is how king and nobels and royal family talk
I want to give that kind of alien feel because even some times mc doesn't get their words
I want you to give that experience
after that the english is so clean and fluent
Don't just trust me or anyone just go read the VN you will enjoy it every moment
I'm not even exaggerating it just go read
i put my left nut and head on line
English in the story is great and at the start of VN the english the english feels some what grand and alien because that is how king and nobels and royal family talk
I want to give that kind of alien feel because even some times mc doesn't get their words
I want you to give that experience
after that the english is so clean and fluent
Don't just trust me or anyone just go read the VN you will enjoy it every moment
I'm not even exaggerating it just go read
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I will now try to make a portion of your text readable, again I am honestly not 100% sure what you are trying to say but I will try to translate it.
First of and this is universal you start each sentence with a capital letter, but then again you dont use full stops either so......
About this problem you are having I would like to see some proof of it as I dont understand what you mean? And this also hurts my reputation unfairly so I would really like to see some evidence. (even though I pointed at it but I digress)
So this mess
"about this dude I can simply one thing just show me a prob you have don't just come here and spout nonsense it just hurt my rep and hurt my game show me fucking proof and then talk"
Turned into this
"About this problem you are having I would like to see some proof of it as I dont understand what you mean? And this also hurts my reputation unfairly so I would really like to see some evidence."
Crazy right?
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at least tyrant has the excuse of being several years old for lookin as dated as it does. Your game does not. And it can be a cuck game or you can cuck everyone else and even kill your rivals off and take all the womenhaha
yeah u just a dude who was butt hurt
but who knows why
fuck it
u play how you want I don't give a fuck anymore and also you support tyrant a game that has one of the worst graphics and 3d art compared to that my game is next gen
I'm not looking down or saying bad stuff about tyrant dev jusat saying what it was
as I said you play how you want i don't a f about it anymore
(My mind just messing with me , I need to get it out isn't tyrant a cuck a game??) is a cuck genre lover mocking my netori game now
play and say what you think
sorry you got so defensive and hurt by the truth but your game really is shallow and poorly written
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you cant even write a forum post with good english much less the text in the story
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I dont want to hear from who out right lies about my game has bad graphics when you support a game like Tyrant which ahs one of the worst graphics in VN space
I don't a f just bark whatever you want
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U want to correct freaking comment what a funny joke you trying to play idiot U just come out and said easily ur english is bad
I can ask u the same thing why can't u say
the english in your game is so bad it it need total reevaluation and it lacks the flow and accuracy
this is how you should have commented when you try to correct my comment idiot
there is a thing called trying to be normal and professional learn that
Where is the professionalism from you when ask same thing from me idiot and hwo you sure both my comments and game has same level of writing
i said show me the prob you have in game don't try to play a smart guy here
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As a fellow game dev who's english is not the primary language, I would like to contribute to the thread after having tried your game. Altough I am not a fan of visual novel, I must say that this whole thread piqued my curiosity.
First off, I also received a lot of harsh comment when I first released my game so I know how that feels. Unfortunately, it's part of the experience and you should learn how to cope with it. I personally think that everything can be said, but there's a way to say it.
Regarding the game, I am impressed by the visuals. I know very basic stuff with Daz but I know for sure there is a lot of time and effort in these renders. Good job, altough there are indeed some flaws (for example, the guards before entering the forest looks really small compared to the adventurer, the black dick is indeed weird, it doesn't look like just a darker tone of the skin, and the mouth of the servent after the blowjob part? Looks like Melina from MK. Again, I think that could be normal after having to suck a dick that big).
As for the writing, these are still some errors here and there but all in all, it was better than I thought. You could benefit from trying to run your "script" through ChatGPT first, so the syntax and grammar gets corrected. And from your earlier comments, you talk like your story is the best thing to have happened since sliced bread. I think it is OK, but I think you should show some modesty.
Finally, like a said, I'm a developer too. I know how much work it takes to create a game, especially when you release it in another language or when it's your first one and you're learning the ropes while trying to deliver something people will enjoy. But I also think that :
- You are doing too much in having people subscribing to your Patreon: Do not create a game for the money. If people are supporting you then it's a nice plus for sure, but do it for you. For your own experience, thrill and amusement. People should sub for what you offer and deliver, not to uncensor a picture or see a sex scene in a sex-based game;
- As a writer of a visual novel, you should pay effort and attention to your posts here. My first reaction was not to play your game since I based the quality of the writing on how you were expressing yourself here;
- Grammarly is fine, but trust people here that speaks english 24/7. I don't know that app, but does it checks for syntax too?;
- You take the comments here too personal: Even if someone says that you are a cuck, who cares? We don't know you. I think you should not engage in arguing on that.
I would like you to read this post as I tried to write it; respectfully. I do not want to insult you, your partner or your feelings in any ways.
Cheers!
(This post was not redacted or revised by ChatGPT, despite my advice to OP)
First off, I also received a lot of harsh comment when I first released my game so I know how that feels. Unfortunately, it's part of the experience and you should learn how to cope with it. I personally think that everything can be said, but there's a way to say it.
Regarding the game, I am impressed by the visuals. I know very basic stuff with Daz but I know for sure there is a lot of time and effort in these renders. Good job, altough there are indeed some flaws (for example, the guards before entering the forest looks really small compared to the adventurer, the black dick is indeed weird, it doesn't look like just a darker tone of the skin, and the mouth of the servent after the blowjob part? Looks like Melina from MK. Again, I think that could be normal after having to suck a dick that big
).As for the writing, these are still some errors here and there but all in all, it was better than I thought. You could benefit from trying to run your "script" through ChatGPT first, so the syntax and grammar gets corrected. And from your earlier comments, you talk like your story is the best thing to have happened since sliced bread. I think it is OK, but I think you should show some modesty.
Finally, like a said, I'm a developer too. I know how much work it takes to create a game, especially when you release it in another language or when it's your first one and you're learning the ropes while trying to deliver something people will enjoy. But I also think that :
- You are doing too much in having people subscribing to your Patreon: Do not create a game for the money. If people are supporting you then it's a nice plus for sure, but do it for you. For your own experience, thrill and amusement. People should sub for what you offer and deliver, not to uncensor a picture or see a sex scene in a sex-based game;
- As a writer of a visual novel, you should pay effort and attention to your posts here. My first reaction was not to play your game since I based the quality of the writing on how you were expressing yourself here;
- Grammarly is fine, but trust people here that speaks english 24/7. I don't know that app, but does it checks for syntax too?;
- You take the comments here too personal: Even if someone says that you are a cuck, who cares? We don't know you. I think you should not engage in arguing on that.
I would like you to read this post as I tried to write it; respectfully. I do not want to insult you, your partner or your feelings in any ways.
Cheers!
(This post was not redacted or revised by ChatGPT, despite my advice to OP
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thanks I highly appreciate your wordsAs a fellow game dev who's english is not the primary language, I would like to contribute to the thread after having tried your game. Altough I am not a fan of visual novel, I must say that this whole thread picqued my curiosity.
First off, I also received a lot of harsh comment when I first released my game so I know how that feels. Unfortunately, it's part of the experience and you should learn how to cope with it. I personally think that everything can be said, but there's a way to say it.
Regarding the game, I am impressed by the visuals. I know very basic stuff with Daz but I know for sure there is a lot of time and effort in these renders. Good job, altough there are indeed some flaws (for example, the guards before entering the forest looks really small compared to the adventurer, the black dick is indeed weird, it doesn't look like just a darker tone of the skin, and the mouth of the servent after the blowjob part? Looks like Melina from MK. Again, I think that could be normal after having to suck a dick that big
As for the writing, these are still some errors here and there but all in all, it was better than I thought. You could benefit from trying to run your "script" through ChatGPT first, so the syntax and grammar gets corrected. And from your earlier comments, you talk like your story is the best thing to have happened since sliced bread. I think it is OK, but I think you should show some modesty.
Finally, like a said, I'm a developer too. I know how much work it takes to create a game, especially when you release it in another language or when it's your first one and you're learning the ropes while trying to deliver something people will enjoy. But I also think that :
- You are doing too much in having people subscribing to your Patreon: Do not create a game for the money. If people are supporting you then it's a nice plus for sure, but do it for you. For your own experience, thrill and amusement. People should sub for what you offer and deliver, not to uncensor a picture or see a sex scene in a sex-based game;
- As a writer of a visual novel, you should pay effort and attention to your posts here. My first reaction was not to play your game since I based the quality of the writing on how you were expressing yourself here;
- Grammarly is fine, but trust people here that speaks english 24/7. I don't know that app, but does it checks for syntax too?;
- You take the comments here too personal: Even if someone says that you are a cuck, who cares? We don't know you. I think you should not engage in arguing on that.
I would like you to read this post as I tried to write it; respectfully. I do not want to insult you, your partner or your feelings in any ways.
Cheers!
(This post was not redacted or revised by ChatGPT, despite my advice to OP
but still people have different goals you want to make game I want to make money
Well grammerly is professional software used in colleges bro and also I didn't said english in the game is next level I said it is understandable you also said that.
but these people trying to sabotage that rep we trying to build by saying lies
Still I don't give f if some calls me cuck but if they repeat that 10 times anyone gets triggered f95 deleted all those comments
in the end thanks for the words the English understandable that is what we trying to say to people you can understand it and enjoy
still thanks for you reply it would be best if you highlight this part
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As for the writing, these are still some errors here and there but all in all, it was better than I thought. You could benefit from trying to run your "script" through ChatGPT first, so the syntax and grammar gets corrected. And from your earlier comments, you talk like your story is the best thing to have happened since sliced bread. I think it is OK, but I think you should show some modesty.
because people need to see from someone so they can understand ok we can get through this.
2 stars?!!! Wth, why a game with such cool premise have only 2 stars?? (still didn't play the game waiting for 0.3 atleast)
I'll go check the reviews WTH
THX
I'll go check the reviews WTH
THX
well I urge you to try the game not the reviews
just a Co dev speaking sometimes reviews are just shit u know that too
Yeah man I always things for myself but I like being mentally prepared lol. I like having my own opinion plus I won't lie I've been expecting a game like this on (with a leveling system working akin to the on in SL but working with lust) for a long time. Albeit my idea of it was a bit different and more adventurous. Less focused on a certain kink and more on overall kinks. But Ig a game like that would be too complex foe fresh devs. The overall branching and organization might be too much.
It's just a bit sad yk, I was hoping for a similar game for a long while and seeing it suffer such poor ratings is a bit sad.
I just hope devs aren't crybabies (believe me a lot can't take criticism or tank it AT ALL). I hope it's not their case, that they will take the constuctive part of the hating and use it to make their game better.
Now I've seen most mention the english not making sense, nowadays this is easily fixable using good translators like deepL or straight up using an AI like chat gpt. Idk what they use but if they use either of these I can promise you that it can't be THAT bad and believe I played games that are THAT bad priot to good translations possibilities. Then ask one ofyour supportes or just one of the players here. Who want to be a beta tester for free (pls precise it lol). Maybe promise him an early access to all version of the games even when you don't need him anymore in the future or some sh1 like that.
I also saw smn saying to no mind the comments here just focus on the story you want to tell bla bla bla.
I know he prbbly means well but no I wouldn't do that. You aren't writing a novel, book, mana or whatever linear sh1t where you tell your story, this ain't even a kinetic novel.
So yeah the base, original plot and bigger ideas of the story might be yours. But this is a project you share with your community. Avoiding ppl comments albeit a bit harsh and not listening to the community is a weaka$$ mindset.
Instead, use them, get better and shut the haters down by proving them better. I mean just look at how overwatch ended up the moment they got some competition on the market. If they listened to their community and indulged some of their requests they prbbly would be so low rn.
SO yeah the real hard thing is finding balance.
Anyway, Gl mate I'll be coming back to this on 0.3 to try it
THX
this is a kinetic novel your choices are just a decoration and we heard we changed hwo to story goes further what community need and we removed anything the community thought is problematic
we did everything the community asked what you still want please ask away
that is what we doing from day 1 but the constant hate the tag hate now english hate
who knows why they do that
we took so much criticism to the head and changed the narrative that fit audience view
we not even lying check comment we a real critic seriously and that is the reason I urge you to play the game that way
U understand maybe u can go futher or not or may be u can give some tips
take your time but play the game that is what we asking just spend a 30 minutes of your time on this game and give ur review
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you sure? then a tag is missing and I don't think this
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I hope you didn't see me as rude mate I just hate when this happens. If you knew for how long I've been waiting for similar games to pop only to see that when one did it's not even a game but a kinetic novel...
The kinetic tag is rly important I hop you'll add it
Still I wish y'all the best mate but I'll say if you rly want to succeed kinetic games ain't the way man.
THX
This is where we're not going to come to an agreement but that's fine. Maybe you could target other platforms such as Steam or put a fixed price on Itch.io if making money is your goal?
I was also talking story-wise, that it is not THAT special, at least to my own taste.
Anyway, I wish you both the best. Cheers!
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I never said my game or story was special maybe you misread it
lets agree to disagree every dev has his own motivation and view for money simple as that