Ren'Py - Abandoned - Hero's Harem Guild [v0.1.2.3b Public] [Komisari]

After finishing the last version ( v 0.1.1 Beta Build 1 ) I had that feeling to write a review. Good game with a lot of potentials. The story is very interesting and the characters are unique and likable, I love all of them. Usually, I don't play sandbox games but when I saw the good graphics and amazing characters I wanted to try it... now I can say 100% that this is one of my favorite games of this genre, and looking forward to seeing how the story will proceed.

Amazing discovery... the game is pretty self aware that its a videogame and plays it very well..Some of the character actions makes you think you are watching a episode of Bobobo, just to hit you with feelings in the next 10 minutes.
Love the personalities of the girls (Must protecc Lucy).
Overal, a really nice experience, looking forward to future updates.

really a game that mixes emotion, beautiful girls and great graphics, I hope this project lasts a long time, as it is one of the few games that really surprised me, I love this game and the creators, you deserve awards for creating this masterpiece

Well written story that was totally worth about 8 hours of gameplay.
This game really surprised me with how good a mix between Ren'Py engine and Koikatsu models can turn out to be.

Never would have thought a game this big size - 6.7gb as of rn, beta 0.1.1 - also includes this of course still unfinished but definitely exciting and sometimes even emotional story.

Honestly after playing through this current beta version I cannot wait till new content gets added! It's a shame that I'm not able to support the creator Komisari on Patreon but whoever reading this should head over there and leave some love and appreciation.


At some point in the future - as I will most likely update this review anyways on newer versions - multiple other factors will be included here such as:
- Gameplay
- Design
- Music < can never forget that one even with some people straight up muting the game
- Story
and much more

But I think this should do it for the moment as all I wanted to say is:

Thank you for the dedication put into the game and please keep going with this masterpiece.

You definitely deserve these 5 out of 5!

One of the best Koikatsu-based visual novels I've had the pleasure of playing. (And it's not even complete yet!) The story is nice, funny, and can get serious when it wants. Combine that with beautifully animated scenes and you'll have a very pleasant read. Btw Evie and Sunny are my favorites! I'm glad I found a pleasant game and will support them for the great content!

More content than most games on here already. Made me laugh and made me fap. I can ask for nothing more. 5/5

It's clear as day that a lot of hard work and passion went- and is still going- into this game.

This is a great game, I spent a whole day doing everything, reading all the dialogue and this is a labor of love from the dev. Dam worth it, soon as its finished im all in for this. Hit me in the feels a few times too, im a sucker for love stories, got too much free time in my line of work.

The good, the story is great, its clear from the begging that a lot of time went into this game even in its beta stage the amount of content is enough for a whole day (if you go full investment) or a few days if you take your time. The scenes are great too but tbh... this may be the 1st game that I was more interested in the story than the porn... im a sinner. All in all pretty well done so far, im keen on following the game till the end.

The meh, there is a bit of a grind for money in the game, not too bad but I know some people here dont come for story and what not they just want to get that nut off n shit but come on its not that bad.

The bad, honestly it might just be me but... i cant really find anything bad, I was going to say there was a continuity bug with rollbacks but... it got fixed in like 2 mins... so yea. 11/10 would recommend.

honestly a well rounded experience, funny and engaging, in the shortest terms ever this is one of those games where I actively engage and read the dialoge instead of blasting through, it's really worth a download

Nice UI, easy to understand. Excellent character design and animations. Beautiful scenes and a big update is on the way. Hopefully we all get what we wanted. Again, great work. I hope to see this game going big.

Kinda reminds me of Senran Kagura series. Nice mix of 2D and 3D graphics, innovating gameplay system and character development. Looking forward to the next updates, game got me engaged already! Loved all the characters, they're cute and credible, which is important to make a good story.

Its goat :v
I absolutely love the game. Fresh story, lovely characters, unique world. The gameplay itself was super fun, there are very few negative stuff tho such as the lack of content which is not really a problem since the game is still new, the animation in the H scenes could be better too but generally, one of the best games out there. Looking forward to the updates *-*

It's cute and easy-going. Could use some work at navigating through the locations, walking around the house feels like a bit of a hassle but otherwise very fun.

Even thought it's 0.1.0 at the time of this review, it still has enough content for a couple of hours.

The game's plot is engaging and thrilling at times, the character models are decent but could be improved other than that the game's system and mechanics are done well. The game is definitely worth your attention. Gonna give it a 5 star to encourage people to at least pay attention or try the game in this early stage and encourage the dev to keep on developing this

After playing up to where the game lets me play, I can say that the game is quite entertaining, it's quite funny and it has a background story that if done well, it would be excellent

bad thing for me? I suppose few "interesting" events with the girls, but it's obvious, the game is only just beginning.

the comedy is good and it made me laugh a lot, but at first with the chicken or later with jimmy, a great person that jimmy

I would give it a 4.5 but it would be unfair to give it a 4 so I will give it a 5

Hi. I'm a big fan of games based on these Plots and Ideas. So I leave my assessment:

- Content {Little} = there is currently little in the game that makes you want more, especially scenes (+18).

- History {Good} = very good the base plot of the story, puts it in an important and interesting role in the world, where it leaves with a taste of wanting more.

- Quality {Great} = despite using an already good base system, some games end up not striving for quality, but in this game I see a tremendous effort, in Characters, where they are unique and well-designed, and maps and regions, where they are very beautiful and not found in other games, so exclusive. Apart from the Church ... I've seen Design in other games, despite having the Room behind and leaving something new.

- Potential {High} = I really expect a lot from the game it has a good base plot, overall quality of the game is perfect, well worked on animations and with that I can say that I am in the hopeful.

- I like the Sandbox theme, where you are free to follow the order you want in the game's "Heroines".

- This evaluation is being carried out as of Version [v0.1.0 Build 1].

Thank you for your attention, good luck with the Project.

So i guess its feedback time (aint my strongest) i played the demo and the newst version as well and i can say: it got a huge potential to become something big.

the characters are all unique and their got their own little stories (still in development tho but you got the hint)
Even if its still in 0.0.1 it got some good amount of content like quest, scene etc.
the story is for the beginnig good
Edit:
The character development is sure notice able in a extrem good way especially Shino,Rebecca and Evie
The humor was on point if this was'nt a H game it would be a great comedy game for sure
Story wise it got some really deep moments which are good as well


Also jimmy is our lord and savior.(and you're best bro)

Note: Updated the review for version 0.1.1. The update from 0.1.0 to 0.1.1 was massive. Ton of content, new characters. Really impressive game and hope the updates continue to show this astonishing level of quality.

Writing: Very good, good humor, world building is top notch.

Graphics: Excellent. Really dig the style. It's hard to believe this is produced by a one-man-development team - blows the quality of other games out of the water.

Navigation: The UI for moving from location to location is fine. Navigating within the guild and within the market is a bit rough. This is one of the few areas that could really use improvement.

Characters: Excellent. They are distinct and characters feel unique.

Grind: Moderate. Takes a bit longer than I would like for the "hero income" to come on line. Mining income introduced in v0.1.1 is a big improvement over the fishing system from v0.1. Have not tried the new fishing system for v0.1.1 - a bit gun shy after the grind of the original system.

Conclusion: easy 5 stars. Production quality outpaces the other top games on this site by a wide margin. Highly recommend.

reviewing 0.1.0:
The story is a good vehicle for the sex parts of the game. Money making from the fish is tedious, I would scale the lowest fish price up to maybe 5 copper and go from there. Otherwise I can't wait for more!

Good Points
+ Story and plot feels good, interesting and well written.
+ Character developments and their own stories lovely, sometimes sad and definetely well written.
+ Game have realy good sense of humor. Most of story scenes was pretty funny Espacily that chicken is killing me LOL
+ Girls/women looks realy hot/cute.
+ We have lots of animations. Even some talk scenes have some little animations to. And they are looks decent/good. But they need some work and improve.
+ We have enough content but for getting those contents we need make lots of grind and its little bit boring...

Bad Points
- Game have some grammer problems and typos.
- For getting scenes or making some quests we need make lots of grind. First you need make grind for getting relationship points but they are not that boring i say. Secondly you need money for quests and its OMG... Its god damn boring... Fishing, mining or sending guild members missions etc gives realy low amount of money and for making quests you will need lots of money. DEV need change that money amounts for sure. Maybe grind make game more long but make more boring aswell.
- Game size is 6.5GB... Its pretty big size and there is no torrent download you can use, i hope with next update we can see torrent download option because its looks like new update gonna have bigger file size even more than current one...
- We didn't get update for 1.5 year and interestingly DEV still active user in this site so i asked him when we gonna get update and he said: ''Update will come before the first quarter of this year or around those dates. (It can take longer, but if it does, it would be an extra month or two.'' which means this game gonna get nearly after 2 year without update... Well... I hope its not gonna be big disappointment after nearly 2 year without update... Still not making update for 2 year is not acceptable... At this rate this game never gonna get 5 star from me, unless he make 2 year worth amazing update this literaly means permanent -1 star for my review. Anyway, we will see...

For The End
This is realy good game and i love it! But grind makes this game boring and makes it longer than it needs to be, thats not natural length of game and needs fix ASAP with new update, i hope DEV will fix that problem. Now im gonna give 3 star because of not getting update for 1.5 year and bad points but i do believe this game can be 4-5 star rate game without those problems, i hope they can achive that...

Seeing the glowing reviews for a game that really looks like my kinda thing I was really excited to try this. I played for about five minutes before I couldn't take it anymore.

The character models look fine mostly. Some are a bit weird but all in all the visual aspect is fine. The gameplay from what little I saw seem like a sandbox/vn hybrid in the style of Corrupted Kingdoms (complete with a very similiar UI) which works very well for that game so there's no reason it couldn't work well here.

The problem comes down to the writing. That's a very broad statment but it can be broken up into three seperate issues. I'll discuss them in order of least to most severe.

The first problem is that the dev is obviously not a native english speaker. There's a lot of grammatical errors as well as some confusion about terms, such as refering to what is clearly a rooster as a chicken. This problem, while vexing is not a big deal simply because it is very easy to fix. Just having a native english speaker taking an editing pass should sort this out pretty quick.

The second issue is the main character. He's pretty annoying. The intention here is probably to be funny but I just found him to be insufferable. A good main character dosen't necessarily have to be likeable but I would argue that there's a difference between a character who's unsympathetic and one who's just annoying and that in a game such as this the idea is probably for the player to project themselves on to the protagonist. Most of us probably don't think of ourselves as annoying doofuses (even if others see us that way) so it's going to be hard to project upon someone who is an annoying doofus. Though it would take a bit of work this problem could also be fixed. The best solution would probably be to give the player some different conversation options. They don't have to impact the story or anything, just give the player an option to behave a bit less like a class clown if they don't find that whole sthick funny.

The third problem is the worst and also the most difficult to adress since it pervades the entire game. It's a bit vauge and difficult to define but I guess the writing feels kind of childish. It really feels like a bad anime filtered through a western perspective. Lines like ''eeeeeeeeeehhhh!'' and ''What will I do with this FUCKING chicken?'' just makes me roll my eyes and this is what really took me out of the game. As intriguing as I found other aspects of the game I just couldn't bear the writing for long.

I don't typically write negative reviews, if I don't like a game I just delete it and move on with my time. The reason I wrote this up was because there is potential here and I really hope the game improves. I'll revisit it sometime in the fututer for another look. Untill then I wish good luck to the dev.