Ren'Py Hikari: First Interlude [v0.02.13b] [Hikari-Comics]

[Atherin]

Sometimes the end justifies the means my good man, one bad deed especially in this situation won't crater the MC's good guy credentials. I'll keep an eye on this to see how this plays out and determine if I can stomach a full playthrough, I do not do well with NTR...

That's fair. I'm glad you took the interest just the same. ^^

 

[TheBigWater]

I, on the other hand, like NTR. It makes games more real. Just like in real life, you make a bad choice, and you can lose your girlfriend/friend etc and I'm glad this game tries to be realistic like that

 

[Michael 4567]

I'm sorry, I tried to play the game but...
I don't understand how the "Keep your girl if you win" game against the captain works... If I select the Creampie I die, and when I kept choosing other options randomly, I arrived at 500 points and decided to stop there cause I saw no end near... Did I do something wrong? Is it a glitch? Was I not supposed to arrive at that game...? A little help please, I really want to try this game a little bit more... Thanks

 

[Fitharia]

I'm sorry, I tried to play the game but...
I don't understand how the "Keep your girl if you win" game against the captain works... If I select the Creampie I die, and when I kept choosing other options randomly, I arrived at 500 points and decided to stop there cause I saw no end near... Did I do something wrong? Is it a glitch? Was I not supposed to arrive at that game...? A little help please, I really want to try this game a little bit more... Thanks

I didn't die, but i chosen Ayra, the little redish girl, the one Captain Pervy recent gotten broken in, also on my playthrough Sasa volunteer to take the place in his bed, during the wife switch chicken, I kept mainly focused on often handjobs, keeping the captain under 0 when low enough I worked my way up to blowjob, then Anal then Doggy and finaly creampie, then I was about cumming anal one of the girls barged inside and pushed me off her and some text later it was the end of update, but didn't die.

But i think you can pick any girl, just sasa is the one needed to volunteer i think, if pick one of the other 2 it only bad for you as lose love towards you.

 

[Atherin]

I didn't die, but i chosen Ayra, the little redish girl, the one Captain Pervy recent gotten broken in, also on my playthrough Sasa volunteer to take the place in his bed, during the wife switch chicken, I kept mainly focused on often handjobs, keeping the captain under 0 when low enough I worked my way up to blowjob, then Anal then Doggy and finaly creampie, then I was about cumming anal one of the girls barged inside and pushed me off her and some text later it was the end of update, but didn't die.

But i think you can pick any girl, just sasa is the one needed to volunteer i think, if pick one of the other 2 it only bad for you as lose love towards you.

You pretty much got it. The sex game isn't well implemented. The goal is to reach "Cream-Pie" with more points than Krish. Or vice versa... my blood sugar is high sorry, in any case, if the points are in your favor, Tsuki will burst in and take the bullet for your chosen girl, thus saving her, and allowing the game to continue. That said, Michael 4567 you were only about 2 minutes away from finishing the update, atleast on that path.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

There will always be a path by which the main three will not get the business. There will always be many paths on which the player has dun fucked up and they had to pay for it.
And yes, one day, one magnificent day, Captain Krish is gonna find his ass out an airlock. The question is just... how? Main character isn't a murderer, he's the good guy.

Main character isn't a murderer, he's the good guy. I think you mean he is a pussy because that's what it sounds like. lol Like just bullet the captain and boom done everyone saved.

 

[Greebz]

Good questions. There was some world building in the comics before this, and I made it kind of complicated on purpose so we can learn about the rules of this world together but the short of it is:
- MC has super sperm, so super it overwhelms normal people
- Tsuki is already dead, so the super sperm cant hurt her, in fact it's what keeps her alive.
- Hikari... has the super sperm... cream... yeah whatever.
- Tsuki's emotional state is hard set by the person whos super sperm she last ate.
- Sasa is... well... a manipulative whore. Trained to use her body specifically to...

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The two primary story lines I have revolve around Ayre and the elder Lala sister.


Derp... as to your second question, the path where both Sasa and Tsuki spend the night with the most fertile Capt. Krish, does continue on into Ch3.
Paths that move on are:
- Sasa only with Krish
- Sasa x Tsuki with Krish
- The four wife swaps (if you win the game)
- Solo night w/ Kojia

is it possible to use your supersperm for impregnation as well? Would seem logical

 

[Danilo marques]

Avoidable NTR?

 

[Atherin]

is it possible to use your supersperm for impregnation as well? Would seem logical

Sorry, No one's gonna get knocked up, in this game... We might see some renders hear and there, but nothing in game.
Unfortunately I have plans for an entire story line that revolves around this subject that needs to happen AFTER the NEXT game/comic wtfe I'm feeling at the time entry.

I do apologize.

 

[Atherin]

Avoidable NTR?

Yes, but it's far more likely you'll get NTR on your first play. Tag is up there for a reason.

 

[leonheart92]

Ok first off I can say that reading the comics help give the characters a good starting point for the game, but for me, granted I just started, idk if you made it and never released it or what but from the comic side of the story it felt like I was missing a whole piece of the puzzle just because you end the comic on.....Please save Hikari.....and the game just gives segments of them saving her. I know I am probably in the minority with this thinking and I know NOTHING bout the reasoning behind telling your story this way, but I feel like the rest of the story leading UP TO the game should be resolved as well so the player, if they choose to read the comics to learn more bout your characters and world, knows and understands how Hikari was saved by the group. Again I just got done with the comics and started the game and was so lost trying to understand how they saved Hikari so idk if you explain anymore bout it other than the opening flash backs

 

[Atherin]

Ok first off I can say that reading the comics help give the characters a good starting point for the game, but for me, granted I just started, idk if you made it and never released it or what but from the comic side of the story it felt like I was missing a whole piece of the puzzle just because you end the comic on.....Please save Hikari.....and the game just gives segments of them saving her. I know I am probably in the minority with this thinking and I know NOTHING bout the reasoning behind telling your story this way, but I feel like the rest of the story leading UP TO the game should be resolved as well so the player, if they choose to read the comics to learn more bout your characters and world, knows and understands how Hikari was saved by the group. Again I just got done with the comics and started the game and was so lost trying to understand how they saved Hikari so idk if you explain anymore bout it other than the opening flash backs

Dude, your actually the only person who's asked about the end of the comic. And I'm glad you did. I had quit working on it almost two years ago because it really had no readers. Kinda soul crushing. Then last october I got a bug up my ass to just start fucking around and learn Ren'Py and... woops now I got a little VN going. I still have like 75% of the renders ready, I could cut something together, but it'll take time away from the VN. Perhaps I should.
Regardless, I'm planning on "Flash Back Story Time" in chapter 04, to try and fill in some of the back story... since I have all those un-used 4k renders ><

 

[Danilo marques]

Yes, but it's far more likely you'll get NTR on your first play. Tag is up there for a reason.

Will there be a mod?

 

[Lookingforthis]

I don't understand why Devs like these keep trying to reinvent the wheel. Pick a lane and get your game proper support. Its like they don't want to succeed, in an already oversaturated market, shooting themselves in the foot for no reason whatsoever.

Why would someone pick the two diametrically opposed sub genres. Harem is predicated on LI showing absolute devotion and NTR is predicated on the LI being omegasluts with no brain and cheating. It makes no logical sense, but at least is entertaining as a bystander to watch devs stumble and fail in the same way hundreds others have done before, with zero lessons learned.
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Um, I believe that they are not trying to appeal to Harem lovers so much as making the NTR spicier by adding a Harem path.

No, really, power cucking is a really underappreciated flavor of cucking.

 

[Timodjin]

If I change the name on Tsuki it does only change in the dialogbox, but not in the indexbox.
Would have been nice to be able to change all names. The original names are hard to keep track on.

 

[PinkSpectre]

Dude, your actually the only person who's asked about the end of the comic. And I'm glad you did. I had quit working on it almost two years ago because it really had no readers. Kinda soul crushing. Then last october I got a bug up my ass to just start fucking around and learn Ren'Py and... woops now I got a little VN going. I still have like 75% of the renders ready, I could cut something together, but it'll take time away from the VN. Perhaps I should.
Regardless, I'm planning on "Flash Back Story Time" in chapter 04, to try and fill in some of the back story... since I have all those un-used 4k renders ><

That sounds awesome!

 

[citrone]

I don't understand why Devs like these keep trying to reinvent the wheel. Pick a lane and get your game proper support. Its like they don't want to succeed, in an already oversaturated market, shooting themselves in the foot for no reason whatsoever.

Why would someone pick the two diametrically opposed sub genres. Harem is predicated on LI showing absolute devotion and NTR is predicated on the LI being omegasluts with no brain and cheating. It makes no logical sense, but at least is entertaining as a bystander to watch devs stumble and fail in the same way hundreds others have done before, with zero lessons learned.
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it could work if the antagonist has proper corruption powers like drugs, mind control or aphrodisiac stuff
too bad those fetishes are all banned on patreon anyway

 

[leonheart92]

Dude, your actually the only person who's asked about the end of the comic. And I'm glad you did. I had quit working on it almost two years ago because it really had no readers. Kinda soul crushing. Then last october I got a bug up my ass to just start fucking around and learn Ren'Py and... woops now I got a little VN going. I still have like 75% of the renders ready, I could cut something together, but it'll take time away from the VN. Perhaps I should.
Regardless, I'm planning on "Flash Back Story Time" in chapter 04, to try and fill in some of the back story... since I have all those un-used 4k renders ><

I'll be completely honest I didn't really know this site had comics/stories on it other than in a game format. I was just on the home page and even then it seemed more like it was asking bout making comics. Since I now know that there's comics floating around here somewhere, I feel like that should have its own tab under the latest updates and maybe people would find the comics easier and get to enjoy that persons story as well

 

[Shawnchapp]

I feel like that should have its own tab under the latest updates

it does, click this button on the right side under "filters"

 

[Unsafe]

I normally keep my opinions about games to myself unless their productive, but this is one of those rare times when I think it needs to be said.

Bottom of the barrel game, it's a game over simulator, has unpleasant unavoidable content, and the characters suck apart from like 1. I briefly skimmed it because it seems ridiculous and I had to see it for myself... was worse than I thought.

Save yourself the time and don't bother... unless you're into bad games I guess, then knock yourself out.

Thank you all for the warnings. I liked how the characters looked, but dude made presumably unlikeable characters with damn near unavoidable NTR. Harem and NTR doesnt go together.