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Thank you all for the warnings. I liked how the characters looked, but dude made presumably unlikeable characters with damn near unavoidable NTR. Harem and NTR doesnt go together.
Harem and NTR is a tuff concept to combine indeed, but still possible to do if they on different paths. But I seen a well made game having Harem and Netorase, called "Desert Stalker". So yea I think you can perfectly combine opposites, aslong they well made, but it won't probably suite every sort player, alot people out there still doesn't like to share or lose a girl. I think also Atherin does know well what he/she is making and the story is pretty solid.
 
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[...] Harem is predicated on LI showing absolute devotion and NTR is predicated on the LI being omegasluts with no brain and cheating. [...]
Literally both of these statements are wrong.
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Dude, your actually the only person who's asked about the end of the comic. And I'm glad you did. I had quit working on it almost two years ago because it really had no readers. Kinda soul crushing. Then last october I got a bug up my ass to just start fucking around and learn Ren'Py and... woops now I got a little VN going. I still have like 75% of the renders ready, I could cut something together, but it'll take time away from the VN. Perhaps I should.
Regardless, I'm planning on "Flash Back Story Time" in chapter 04, to try and fill in some of the back story... since I have all those un-used 4k renders ><
Yeah, if you need to do some work - it's better to package all of it into one product.
Even if the full on flashbacks would be bad for the flow of the story - and it can be a bitch - you can incorporate flashbacks into the ongoing sex scenes.

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If I change the name on Tsuki it does only change in the dialogbox, but not in the indexbox.
Would have been nice to be able to change all names. The original names are hard to keep track on.
Ok. That's easy enough to implement. Thank you.
 

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it could work if the antagonist has proper corruption powers like drugs, mind control or aphrodisiac stuff
too bad those fetishes are all banned on patreon anyway
Aaaaaand I totally dumped Patreon. I drew the line when they demanded I give them control of my identity. Patreon can get stuffed. Plus I only had like two patrons, and they were both friends. XP

We'll see what happens. ^^
 
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I'll be completely honest I didn't really know this site had comics/stories on it other than in a game format. I was just on the home page and even then it seemed more like it was asking bout making comics. Since I now know that there's comics floating around here somewhere, I feel like that should have its own tab under the latest updates and maybe people would find the comics easier and get to enjoy that persons story as well
Yeah, it's been part of F95 for... well forever. But people really do come here for the free games. But there is a thriving art community sitting just beneath the surface. I didn't realize the new "Latest" interface had those until recently myself... and I was posting a comic that showed up on it ><
 

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how prevalent is the rape?
It's more akin to coercion at the moment. Ayre (Pink braid elf) has been forced into sexual servitude at the start of the game under threat of murdering the last of her people. The plan is for something more hard core later, but not a lot of it. The MC will never rape. Maybe get raped... It depends on how horney Tsuki gets.... hadn't thought about it.
 
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Literally both of these statements are wrong.
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Yeah, if you need to do some work - it's better to package all of it into one product.
Even if the full on flashbacks would be bad for the flow of the story - and it can be a bitch - you can incorporate flashbacks into the ongoing sex scenes.

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Wow! Thank you! That's like 30 min of your life you just gifted along with some really good thoughts/ideas. O.O

Generally I'm only sacrificing my Saturdays to this VN, the computes can run the render queue all week without me. Finishing book seven might not be a quick thing, but I bet I could do a 6.5 of sorts in a couple of Sundays. Sorry Video games... you'll have to play without me...

Man there were alot of renders no body got to see...

Fuck it...
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Yeah I'm out. I didn't really check out the tags before trying this and just saw a few renders and thought they looked good enough. You can't progress shit without being cucked. Good luck.
 

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Harem and NTR is a tuff concept to combine indeed, but still possible to do if they on different paths. But I seen a well made game having Harem and Netorase, called "Desert Stalker".
Wow. Hold up. Desert Stalker is a full blown Harem game with incest. It has some avoidable Netorase/Sharing scenes, which were added for the cucks who payed about 50-100$ per month, and the devs tried them somewhat to impliment them. From what I played there like 2-3 of them, with mostly that russian guy you share it...but thats it. So that isnt a good example at all.
 
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Literally both of these statements are wrong.
How...? He said the 1:1 theme which goes on for every Harem story in any media. This didnt changed all these decades. What you just said in your example, is a story with Harem elements -> but that dosent make it a Harem. Same like bunch of salad on top of meat dosent make it vegan now. As in your example, the focus in this game is to "save" the girls, which might add some tension, but if its the whole focus of it -> then its not a Harem. Then you also have to look it from its theme, which is that its already a story full of used hoes, who either did it, do it, or will do it. Since its not a VN or any straight forward type of media, but a supposed game with choices, you might at least have here a point here. However: Its once again what type of content is already present and how they are differ in quality, and from what I heard, its more on the NTR side.

Now, im not saying you cant have "this" in your game, whatever it tries to do or portray, and Im sure it has it appeal to some, but you really have to do some mental gymnastics to look at it and say its a Harem. No need to start about what NTR is currently, as this would be another topic.
 
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What you just said in your example, is a story with Harem elements -> but that dosent make it a Harem.
That is... exactly how 'tags' work.
Then you also have to look it from its theme, which is that its already a story full of used hoes, who either did it, do it, or will do it.
...Just like MC?

Same like bunch of salad on top of meat dosent make it vegan now.
Ok, that is a lot of words.
Let's be concrete here:
What is the plot in the harem game about?
It's about conquering the girls.
[..]
Without that, you have no plot. The girl just falls in MCs lap, suck on his face, and you get bored after 10 min. Moving to the next girl.
You don't agree with that - did I understand you right? Then just give your vision on 'what is the [ideal] harem plot' to you.
Just simply answer the question:
If you have "absolute devotion" in your harem - what these characters supposed to do on the screen?
 

kev4U

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Downloaded and played it till you had to share one women to that fat captain, and flatly said no.

Which resulted in me punching the fucker only to get shoved out an airlock.

So when the game gave me three options fuck it I'm out of here I agree. Good luck developer.
 
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