Ren'Py Hikari: First Interlude [v0.04.08p] [Hikari-Comics]

[Avaron1974]

The Ayre section is in progress, it will end shortly after an unfinished phone section, next week it will roll into an option to see some pretty disturbing NTR stuff or recall her story from this week only have her totally naked. Since I render her naked as often as I can!

I will admit to finding confusion with the whole Ayre and NTR stuff.....

I mean, she's not one of the MC's girls so is it really NTR?

I suppose I could kinda see it if my MC also wanted her but personally i've got no interest in being with someone who's been railed by the tubby halfwit of a captain.

That and i've got more than enough with the 3 girls he has already. He's got those to keep happy and it's not like he can do much with Ayre considering what happens to normies he accidentally creampies.

I get to keep the 3 main girls safe so I guess I don't really class it as NTR. The girls on the ship are the captains girls so it only stands to reason he'd be banging them.

 

[Atherin]

I will admit to finding confusion with the whole Ayre and NTR stuff.....

I mean, she's not one of the MC's girls so is it really NTR?

I suppose I could kinda see it if my MC also wanted her but personally i've got no interest in being with someone who's been railed by the tubby halfwit of a captain.

That and i've got more than enough with the 3 girls he has already. He's got those to keep happy and it's not like he can do much with Ayre considering what happens to normies he accidentally creampies.

I get to keep the 3 main girls safe so I guess I don't really class it as NTR. The girls on the ship are the captains girls so it only stands to reason he'd be banging them.

That's fair. Ayre has been kind of a odd girl to write too anyways. She was never meant to have a big part in any story being told, she was going to be a foil for Hikari, a girl that's been through something similar but handled it much differently. She's supposed to be an unlikable stuck up bitch. But, being my first attempt at a VN, I had to park the three main girls in some relatively safe plot armor, plot chastity belts?, no matter, and put up some alternatives that could be played with, kept or thrown away like garbage, without messing with the story later on. So Ayre became a thing, to be brutalized. We've not seen her story yet at all. Hang on tight. ^^

 

[Avaron1974]

That's fair. Ayre has been kind of a odd girl to write too anyways. She was never meant to have a big part in any story being told, she was going to be a foil for Hikari, a girl that's been through something similar but handled it much differently. She's supposed to be an unlikable stuck up bitch. But, being my first attempt at a VN, I had to park the three main girls in some relatively safe plot armor, plot chastity belts?, no matter, and put up some alternatives that could be played with, kept or thrown away like garbage, without messing with the story later on. So Ayre became a thing, to be brutalized. We've not seen her story yet at all. Hang on tight. ^^

I've no complaints, that wasn't me having any sort of dig at your story. I'm quite enjoying it to be perfectly honest.

I was just confused as to why Ayre was in the NTR section.

Unless she is going to be one of the MC's girls which may put her there. Considering how bitchy she is though, I think more will enjoy watching her suffer than want to save her.

 

[Morsin]

is there any NTR in this that isn't just game over NTR? when i first played it, that was the only NTR i could find

 

[Avaron1974]

is there any NTR in this that isn't just game over NTR? when i first played it, that was the only NTR i could find

Not with Hikari and Tsuki.

They can only fuck Guardia without killing their partner on orgasm, much like the MC can only cum in those 3 (and his robo lover) without killing his partner.

I think Sasa may be a different story but haven't played the NTR side of things so don't know if she's "safe" for other people to fuck.

Simply put, there is no scenario where the MC can can have someone fuck his women without it being a game over logically.

 

[Rugerrell6]

Not with Hikari and Tsuki.

They can only fuck Guardia without killing their partner on orgasm, much like the MC can only cum in those 3 (and his robo lover) without killing his partner.

I think Sasa may be a different story but haven't played the NTR side of things so don't know if she's "safe" for other people to fuck.

Simply put, there is no scenario where the MC can can have someone fuck his women without it being a game over logically.

Well from what ive seen it looks like he dies only after he comes in them. And he doesn't die with Sasa at all. But I think as long as he comes outside the girls he can probably still bang the other girls. I may be wrong though thats just my impression from what I've seen so far.

 

[Avaron1974]

Well from what ive seen it looks like he dies only after he comes in them. And he doesn't die with Sasa at all. But I think as long as he comes outside the girls he can probably still bang the other girls. I may be wrong though thats just my impression from what I've seen so far.

That's the thing.

He doesn't know he can't cum in them which is why it's game over ntr.

 

[Atherin]

is there any NTR in this that isn't just game over NTR? when i first played it, that was the only NTR i could find

It's almost all Sasa and in Chapter 02. Chapter three is about date night and barely has Krish in it. Chapter four we get introduced to the Captains sons... and his daughters. At which point the player will have to decided to send Tsuki or Sasa, that will lead to something in chapter 05.

Not with Hikari and Tsuki.

They can only fuck Guardia without killing their partner on orgasm, much like the MC can only cum in those 3 (and his robo lover) without killing his partner.

I think Sasa may be a different story but haven't played the NTR side of things so don't know if she's "safe" for other people to fuck.

Simply put, there is no scenario where the MC can can have someone fuck his women without it being a game over logically.

Yes this only Tsuki and Hikari as was discussed in the mess of exposition in chapter 01. If you send Tsuki AND Sasa to get the captain of your back, then it'll be fine too. I do apologize for not separating this out into a Good Girl / Bad Girl thing right down the middle, if at any time you get the game over, take the "Go back" option, that's meant to be there as part of the game loop.

Well from what ive seen it looks like he dies only after he comes in them. And he doesn't die with Sasa at all. But I think as long as he comes outside the girls he can probably still bang the other girls. I may be wrong though thats just my impression from what I've seen so far.

You die in Chapter one. Of course we don't go strait to sex with the girls we've barely be introduced too. ^^ Play through to Tsuki or Hikari's date night. I'm betting that'll be more satisfying. ^^

That's the thing.

He doesn't know he can't cum in them which is why it's game over ntr.

... do it. And did the game actually end? Hikari remembers and will bring it up later on fyi. =P

 

[Avaron1974]

At which point the player will have to decided to send Tsuki or Sasa, that will lead to something in chapter 05.

Do we have to send them?

I kinda promised to keep Sasa safe after she opened up and i'd rather not let anyone touch my Tsuki.

... do it. And did the game actually end? Hikari remembers and will bring it up later on fyi. =P

I've only done a couple of the NTR scenes to see what would happen, I haven't touched any NTR stuff on my main playthrough.

I adore all 3 girls and nobody else is good enough to lay a finger on them.

 

[Rugerrell6]

It's almost all Sasa and in Chapter 02. Chapter three is about date night and barely has Krish in it. Chapter four we get introduced to the Captains sons... and his daughters. At which point the player will have to decided to send Tsuki or Sasa, that will lead to something in chapter 05.


Yes this only Tsuki and Hikari as was discussed in the mess of exposition in chapter 01. If you send Tsuki AND Sasa to get the captain of your back, then it'll be fine too. I do apologize for not separating this out into a Good Girl / Bad Girl thing right down the middle, if at any time you get the game over, take the "Go back" option, that's meant to be there as part of the game loop.



You die in Chapter one. Of course we don't go strait to sex with the girls we've barely be introduced too. ^^ Play through to Tsuki or Hikari's date night. I'm betting that'll be more satisfying. ^^



... do it. And did the game actually end? Hikari remembers and will bring it up later on fyi. =P

So if we send Tsuki to go off with his sons we can take them out early? Also I was wondering if you are gonna get the chance to have another sex battle and add Lala-fon and other girls to the harem?

 

[Atherin]

Do we have to send them?

I kinda promised to keep Sasa safe after she opened up and i'd rather not let anyone touch my Tsuki.



I've only done a couple of the NTR scenes to see what would happen, I haven't touched any NTR stuff on my main playthrough.

I adore all 3 girls and nobody else is good enough to lay a finger on them.

You have to choose one of them to send to cock-block ether brother, whomever you choose will pretty obviously align with ether Ayre or Lala-fon in Chapter 05. The real girls on the line will be those two, but if the correct main girl wasn't sent to get started w/ operation "No pussy for the boys", they may need to do somethings they'd rather not in chapter 5. But that's what I'm working on right now.

So if we send Tsuki to go off with his sons we can take them out early? Also I was wondering if you are gonna get the chance to have another sex battle and add Lala-fon and other girls to the harem?

One way or the other, Tsuki will deal with Jacob so the player can spend time with Lala-fon, or Sasa will deal with Victor so the player can do Ayre's chapter. I'm not gonna lie and say I've done Tsuki's part yet, BUT! knowing her I'm betting however it goes down she's gonna have fun. (She's cray cray)

 

[Gooningmaster]

good game

 

[Atherin]

good game

Thanks man, you made my day w/ two words. Glad you like it.

Just for you Gooningmaster, quick peek at what's been going on in the last week or so w/ progress on ch5. ^^

 

[TheBigWater]

Thanks man, you made my day w/ two words. Glad you like it.

Just for you Gooningmaster, quick peek at what's been going on in the last week or so w/ progress on ch5. ^^

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Finally some fun for the Captain! It's notgirl from "our" team but it will stillbe good!

 

[Gooningmaster]

I would gladly translate this game in french if I could but sadly I dont know how to code
Also I'm glad I made your day Atherin (I dont know how to tag someone on this site ), I just speak my mind
this game truly deserve more attention keep up the good work

 

[Gooningmaster]

Also it would be awesome if could give another paying platform beside subscribestar, I use a mastercard and each time I try to buy a tier , it refused , even my prepaid card.... Patreon work but I know that they are a pain in the ass to deal with....

 

[Atherin]

Also it would be awesome if could give another paying platform beside subscribestar, I use a mastercard and each time I try to buy a tier , it refused , even my prepaid card.... Patreon work but I know that they are a pain in the ass to deal with....

I'm sorry to hear that, the war on Porn rages on... fucking banks. I need to do a cofe'. There WAS an ichi.io page but the banks got that too. Patreon... well they don't do anything to earn the absurd cut they take out of the creators pockets plus the problems subscribstar has with payment processing are universal. Payment processors... if they can take down Steam, then no one really stands a chance.

 

[Gooningmaster]

I'm sorry to hear that, the war on Porn rages on... fucking banks. I need to do a cofe'. There WAS an ichi.io page but the banks got that too. Patreon... well they don't do anything to earn the absurd cut they take out of the creators pockets plus the problems subscribstar has with payment processing are universal. Payment processors... if they can take down Steam, then no one really stands a chance.

Didn't steam also got their 18+ game purged? Dam.....the censorship is crazy , well If you do find some alternative platform where I could support your project I would gladly do so but for now I can't do anything....

 

[Gooningmaster]

Here's a picture of my dog to make someone days better ❤

 

[Febui]

Well this was surprisingly not bad. I do like the mission statement of a harem with a strong emphasis on NTR mechanics. And with virgins too, spicy.
A lot of spelling and grammar errors though. Like commonly mistaking loose and lose.
I hope in future updates to watch Hikari lose her virginity to someone. Interesting to think how that would be when you're psychically linked like that.
Also want Lala-sue. Way preferable over Ayre.

Most importantly, I want the girls that are mine to fool around with others because they want to, not be forced into it. Rojin seems like a likely way that'd happen, manipulating and charming his way into their pants.
Hikari seems like, I suppose, someone that has to be willingly shared or forced, can't do it without the player's permission because they have that link. Though, if she and the player are getting very horny, a sense of "no, don't do that" could fall on deaf ears, a kind of ambiguous sharing/cheating thing.
It's just not hot in the slightest when the girl doesn't enjoy it, so as long as they aren't forced, I'm not too picky.

Best of luck with it.