- May 15, 2020
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Im not opposed to a slow burn. i don't like fuck fests. Lets be honest here even the best sex scenes kind of suck. Worse than those porn clips from the early days of the internet. They are not good in terms of actual sex they are good because of the situation, the story and the characters. If one wants to see sex he's better off just googling for some.@grohotor:
There are just different games for different players. Some are really high paced, some aren't and each will have their fans. I mean, one can suggest that some (some) patrons may not like a really slow burn, but you may just as well say that some people enjoy their coffee with milk and sugar. Sure, that's the case, but it doesn't really add anything to how the game should move forward.
Yes, being on this platform kind of encourages "lot's of lewd content right away" but it doesn't mean that every game here has to be the same or has to be developed in the same way.
My problem is with the way the story is told and how new things keep getting introduced and nothing is getting resolved.
Skylaroo posted a list of plot threads
1. MC's past about the other Emma
2. Charlotte's past (the assault by actor)
3. The stalker
4. The peeping tom
5. Suzi's blackmail
6. Emma crushing on Zack
7. The other student crushing on Emma
8. Kaylah's story?
9. Lucy's story?
10. Steve's story?
atm the only one that has any sort of payoff is 6. The main plot also has the problem that it could easily be solved if Suzi, Charlotte and Emma had a little chat. The Mc is also doing a piss poor job of solving this. Why the hell didn't he push Suzi for information once she asks him if he's here because some guy ? why doesn't he talk to Charlotte about this immediately if he can't get information from Suzi ?
I'm mainly interested in Emma. i don't see how that can advance in any meaningful way atm without the MC being a total creep and a shitty bodyguard. The only appropriate way would be after he deals with the stalker and the peeping tom but once those things are resolved the story is done. I feel like it would have been better if this whole stalker thing was used just to bring the characters together it got resolved in a update or two and then have the main story be about something else. I'm afraid that the dev might have wrote himself into a hole and thats why the story is running in place.
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