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Night Hacker

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Problem with this title, it needs to be written by someone else and here's very small example:
Offline/In person, a woman who's experienced trauma half as much as Charlotte.
Highly unlikely she would Ever allow Emma to consider being a part of the industry.

Let alone, date Zach(Ever) without examining so far up his ass..she see's what he ate months ago.
Parents on 'Alert', Even Much More so.
Know the industry, know parents(VERY Small example).
While I love this story, little problems like this aside, I find it interesting that she was perfectly fine with Zach and was distrusting of the body guard that saved her daughter's life. Same comment with the sister who distrust's the MC, given how protective she is of her little sister, you would think she would be all over the MC in a positive way (could have been an opportunity for a better relationship between the two). I love this story, but I can see better ways to write some of it and still have moments that draw characters closer while maintaining the drama and everything that makes this a good story.

Charlotte's trust is misplaced, as well as the older sister. I just hope the dev sees the flaws in this and corrects it. The older sister I can handle, although not hearing anyone about what happened makes zero sense. But Charlotte carrying on as if the MC is some sort of danger just insulted my intelligence to no end.
 

MrD812

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While I love this story, little problems like this aside, I find it interesting that she was perfectly fine with Zach and was distrusting of the body guard that saved her daughter's life. Same comment with the sister who distrust's the MC, given how protective she is of her little sister, you would think she would be all over the MC in a positive way (could have been an opportunity for a better relationship between the two). I love this story, but I can see better ways to write some of it and still have moments that draw characters closer while maintaining the drama and everything that makes this a good story.

Charlotte's trust is misplaced, as well as the older sister. I just hope the dev sees the flaws in this and corrects it. The older sister I can handle, although not hearing anyone about what happened makes zero sense. But Charlotte carrying on as if the MC is some sort of danger just insulted my intelligence to no end.
Story's can be good yet, not well written.
Happens all the time with Novels, Movies, Plays... just to name a few.
 
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Night Hacker

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Story's can be good yet, not well written.
Happens all the time with Novels, Movies, Plays... just to name a few.
Oh for sure, I don't like to complain as I still enjoy this more than most VNs. Just a little constructive criticism on a game I love. The end of this chapter certainly showed promise. Charlotte seemed to have come around and the older sister seemed to show remorse for her reaction which was positive. Gives me hope for the next chapter.

When it comes to movies, I tend to overlook the flaws and just enjoy the show, same with VNs like this.
 

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Story's can be good yet, not well written.
Happens all the time with Novels, Movies, Plays... just to name a few.
Oh for sure, I don't like to complain as I still enjoy this more than most VNs. Just a little constructive criticism on a game I love. The end of this chapter certainly showed promise. Charlotte seemed to have come around and the older sister seemed to show remorse for her reaction which was positive. Gives me hope for the next chapter.

When it comes to movies, I tend to overlook the flaws and just enjoy the show, same with VNs like this.
I think DB had an idea; well, it's hard to call it an idea when it's a "Lexi" rip-off. A borrowed one, if you will. It's something he couldn't come up with on his own. I highly doubt he'd finish it up properly. Happens to humans.
Now that the excitement's run out. He's got nothing to further the story. Now we have certainly reached an impasse, because the dev is in such a state where nothing he does will satisfy none. This is what half-assed vision does to VNs in F95ZONE. This exact situation leads to a rushed whatever-that-is or abandonment or a hard reset.
 
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I think DB had an idea; well, it's hard to call it an idea when it's a "Lexi" rip-off. A borrowed one, if you will. It's something he couldn't come up with on his own. I highly doubt he'd finish it up properly. Happens to humans.
Now that the excitement's run out. He's got nothing to further the story. Now we have certainly reached an impasse, because the dev is in such a state where nothing he does will satisfy none. This is what half-assed vision does to VNs in F95ZONE. This exact situation leads to a rushed whatever-that-is or abandonment or a hard reset.
Well said, nothing/no one is perfect and no one should really 'go it alone'.
This is why so many supporting writers/editors/producers/friends/assistants can really be beneficial.
Lots of productions are examples of this, 'can' be observed in several fields.
 
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I think DB had an idea; well, it's hard to call it an idea when it's a "Lexi" rip-off. A borrowed one, if you will. It's something he couldn't come up with on his own. I highly doubt he'd finish it up properly. Happens to humans.
Now that the excitement's run out. He's got nothing to further the story. Now we have certainly reached an impasse, because the dev is in such a state where nothing he does will satisfy none. This is what half-assed vision does to VNs in F95ZONE. This exact situation leads to a rushed whatever-that-is or abandonment or a hard reset.
I have a question how is Charlotte and the MC going to have a satisfying love story or a romance when the game

is going to end in 3 updates



i feel that certain updates was wasted doing the same thing over and over again

and if I remember correctly the developer has only three updates to start a

convincing and satisfying relationship between Charlotte and the MC in only 3 updates
 
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CrazyRabbit

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I have a question how is Charlotte and the MC going to have a satisfying love story or a romance when the game

is going to end in 3 updates



i feel that certain updates was wasted doing the same thing over and over again

and if I remember correctly the developer has only three updates to start a

convincing and satisfying relationship between Charlotte and the MC in only 3 updates
Given what we got until now, not just Charlotte and MC but every character, I feel we won't get the satisfying part....:(
 

Turki 10

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it would be one thing if they were building a bond throughout the story but in this game

every time they build a bond or a connection it's ruined by the next update
Nothing was ruined my friend, MC didn't lose any progress in this update, it was just that Charlotte needed some time to get over what happened, she fancied herself with MC and this is the first time it's happened in any update,She put her hands on him and didn't want to stop, we're close I trust DB will make the story of MC and Charlotte perfect, and I never think the game will end after three updates.
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Nothing was ruined my friend, MC didn't lose any progress in this update, it was just that Charlotte needed some time to get over what happened, she fancied herself with MC and this is the first time it's happened in any update,She put her hands on him and didn't want to stop, we're close I trust DB will make the story of MC and Charlotte perfect, and I never think the game will end after three updates.
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okay first of all all perverts are brothers and sisters

so I am not your friend I am your brother

and secondly

I don't know I want to be wrong I really do
 

Turki 10

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okay first of all all perverts are brothers and sisters

so I am not your friend I am your brother

and secondly

I don't know I want to be wrong I really do
Well brother,Hillside so far it's a masterpiece, I'm sure it will continue like this, DB said his passion has become less, this is something that happens after you've been working on something for a long time we're talking about three years, DB is always active on Discord And most of the time he is working ,What I see now is that DB needs a rest and then he will come back and the game will be at the same level Till the end. The current update was very great, so I really don't understand the reason for this drama
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Well brother,Hillside so far it's a masterpiece, I'm sure it will continue like this, DB said his passion has become less, this is something that happens after you've been working on something for a long time we're talking about three years, DB is always active on Discord And most of the time he is working ,What I see now is that DB needs a rest and then he will come back and the game will be at the same level Till the end. The current update was very great, so I really don't understand the reason for this drama
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well I don't know if you could find out more information so we can know for sure but I heard that we have two small updates planned

then one big update

and then that's the end

but I could be wrong but that's what I heard
 

MrD812

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Well brother,Hillside so far it's a masterpiece, I'm sure it will continue like this, DB said his passion has become less, this is something that happens after you've been working on something for a long time we're talking about three years, DB is always active on Discord And most of the time he is working ,What I see now is that DB needs a rest and then he will come back and the game will be at the same level Till the end. The current update was very great, so I really don't understand the reason for this drama
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While i am not inclined to agree with Your perspective, i Do Salute Your Positive Outlook! (y)
 

Penfold Mole

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I didn't want to get into this petty bickering, but I just had to. I really hate to bust your bubble of 'Holiness' but you can. You seemed to have not to completely thought out, or tried all of the variables, and or conditions that will cause a lowercase to be produced while pressing the shift key. That condition would be . . . . wait for it . . . . When the Caps Lock is engaged. Just sayin..
Q. E. D. Thank you.
 
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Night Hacker

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I think DB had an idea; well, it's hard to call it an idea when it's a "Lexi" rip-off. A borrowed one, if you will. It's something he couldn't come up with on his own. I highly doubt he'd finish it up properly. Happens to humans.
Now that the excitement's run out. He's got nothing to further the story. Now we have certainly reached an impasse, because the dev is in such a state where nothing he does will satisfy none. This is what half-assed vision does to VNs in F95ZONE. This exact situation leads to a rushed whatever-that-is or abandonment or a hard reset.
I disagree. There's more to this story to come. There's still a corrupt police force influenced by a corrupt man and there can be much more to just the personal side of things depending on which way the love interest of the MC goes and the reactions of those he rejects etc... and when you're famous, there's always some nutcase out there obsessed that could be worked in as well as perhaps angry friends/family of the deceased.
 

ghost1122

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Had to do a complete play through (new computer) and still love this game. I liked this chapter. Don't know why all the hate for it. To me, it's consistent with the other chapters when played as a whole. Side note - would like to see a Lucy and Steve couple.
 
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