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Joshy92

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I'm actually glad I never saw that bathroom scene. I want the first time I see Emma naked to be special.
 
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sulek83

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Am I the only one for whom this story is completely unbelivable and... stupid?
Ok so this Charlotte, why she is still modelling? Yes, yes she said about helping girls but who is she really helping? Shes scared of own shadow, besides she doesnt need it to help other girls. On the contrary, if thats her goal she propably could do more good from backstage. I mean woman of her caliber, worldwide well known supermodel right? Her name only should open most doors in the industry. Why did she even still live in this city if shes so frightened? She should have houses, connections all over the world. But this is exactly why this story goes wrong in my opinion. Its all seems like shes only supermodel in this city, hell its more like theres no world outside at all. The idea was good but this should be some unknown, new model whos struggling in abusive industry. It doesnt make any sens in this story...
and dont let me start with this stupid FBI plot.
First of all, theres no way in hell that local agent is asigned to local case let alone be in command. Thats exaclty opposite to how theyre operating in case of any corruption. And case as big as this? There should be whole unit working on this, linked directly to headquarters.
Sure its not all bad, there are some other ups and downs, I like MC but he could be more manly sometimes and less pussy and definetly less retarted.
Good luck for the devs tho, cheers.
 

TonyMurray

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Am I the only one for whom this story is completely unbelivable and... stupid?
To be fair... well I was going to say it's not like a Hollywood script, but then, are Hollywood movies all believable and not stupid? It's a story by an amateur writer (no disrespect to the dev), and I'd guess the intention to be as realistic as possible is probably a little bit down the priorities list.
Ok so this Charlotte, why she is still...
She does give answers to some of these questions in dialogue with MC so I won't cover that (for repetition and potentially spoilers if you've not seen that yet). Ultimately though, she's still at the top of the game, despite (or in spite of) her age. She has the contacts and access in the industry and that allows her to still be in a position to do what she wants to do.
I like MC but he could be more manly sometimes and less pussy and definetly less retarted.
I'll preface this by saying it's in jest, because there's no requirement to be perfect here, but it's hard to take statements like this seriously when you spell "retarded" wrong :ROFLMAO:
 

HillsideVN

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May 3, 2020
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Am I the only one for whom this story is completely unbelivable and... stupid?
No. But simply reading the story would address most of your criticisms...

and dont let me start with this stupid FBI plot.
First of all, theres no way in hell that local agent is asigned to local case let alone be in command.
She isn't a local agent. This was explained in the last update.
 

sulek83

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She does give answers to some of these questions in dialogue with MC
You clearly read only my first few words since I explained in details why what she said makes no sense and why this story is without logic.
I'll preface this by saying it's in jest, because there's no requirement to be perfect here, but it's hard to take statements like this seriously when you spell "retarded" wrong :ROFLMAO:
Im really sorry princess but english is not my main so that kind of things can happend and its shouldt be taken as a point of reference. Its says more about you than me actually.
She isn't a local agent. This was explained in the last update.
Im not talking about her but guy in command who shut down this so called operation. Hes local as he said so himself. Read carefully as I wrote about person being in command for purpose.
 
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HillsideVN

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Im not talking about her but guy in command who shut down this so called operation. Hes local as he said so himself. Read carefully as I wrote about person being in command for purpose.
I read it carefully, but what you wrote is wrong in a number of ways and therefore confusing.

- Local FBI do investigate local cases of corruption, so you are wrong to assert otherwise.
- The case was not a corruption case when it came under the purview of the Special Agent in Charge (local agent). So your erroneous assertion is irrelevant anyway.
- Once the investigation widened to include the corruption, they began attempting to shut it down. This explains why there is currently no "whole unit working on this".
 

sulek83

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Local FBI do investigate local cases of corruption, so you are wrong to assert otherwise.
Ehh no. Even if there is a field office in the same city, people working there are from defferent sides of the country. When you are joining FBI you are assigned to field office but never in the same city or even state. Thats why FBI agents have to relocate with theirs families once their assigment starts and they are smart enough to dont put someone in charge from the same city in case being affiliated with locals and compromised. Pls stop saying otherwise, its just shows you create something knowing nothning about.
The case was not a corruption case when it came under the purview of the Special Agent in Charge (local agent). So your erroneous assertion is irrelevant anyway
As I said, theres never "local agent" beacuse your "local agent" is compromised. Thats exactly my point. If they need someone local, theyre working with some local cop after making sure hes clean but even this have to be confirmed and allowed from higher ups.
Once the investigation widened to include the corruption, they began attempting to shut it down. This explains why there is currently no "whole unit working on this"
Another aspect of your lack of knowledge. Every case starts in central headquartes, then handed over to closest field office etc
You create this fbi-thing like some local police department. FBI agents are no freelancers, everything is directed from above and assigned. There is a chain of command and you are to stubborn to admit own mistake.

I dont wannt to fight over this, just hoped for healthy conversation with actual arguments, nothing more. Mayby Im expecting to much from this story.
 
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Dessolos

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eh each to their own the story is believable enough to me. someone things but not be accurate but close enough to believable for me
 

JJ1960

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Ehh no. Even if there is a field office in the same city, people working there are from defferent sides of the country. When you are joining FBI you are assigned to field office but never in the same city or even state. Thats why FBI agents have to relocate with theirs families once their assigment starts and they are smart enough to dont put someone in charge from the same city in case being affiliated with locals and compromised. Pls stop saying otherwise, its just shows you create something knowing nothning about.

As I said, theres never "local agent" beacuse your "local agent" is compromised. Thats exactly my point. If they need someone local, theyre working with some local cop after making sure hes clean but even this have to be confirmed and allowed from higher ups.

Another aspect of your lack of knowledge. Every case starts in central headquartes, then handed over to closest field office etc
You create this fbi-thing like some local police department. FBI agents are no freelancers, everything is directed from above and assigned. There is a chain of command and you are to stubborn to admit own mistake.
Hate to break this to you, pooky, but there isn't really a place called Hillside which is the movie and modeling/fashion capital of the world. This is the dev's story and he can play with his world any way he wants. If you dislike this game/story so much delete it and move on. Insulting the dev doesn't gain you anything other than you deluding your low self-esteem into thinking you've actually accomplished something.
 

sulek83

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This is the dev's story and he can play with his world any way he wants
Absolutly and I can speak about it. I used actual arguments for it not saying simply its stupid cuz its stupid. This is forum or what? One would think its here for sharing own opinion, exchange experiences and making conversation.
 
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