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I agree. Her not wanting to bring the MC to the event where the person responsible for most of her issues will be at, made me want to strangle her. Sorry, poor choice of words.
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- Jun 30, 2018
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The curative properties of adult game penis can cure demonic possession. If MC had come out of the shower and shown Charlotte his dick, it would have been like three years of Alcoholics Anonymous and having Seal Team 6 as her private security force.
- Mar 3, 2020
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yeah theirs literally a guy just waiting to attack but she still wont talk to the mc she could even talk to him with Lucy present
- Oct 1, 2018
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Nice plot for a Charlotte dream scene or nightmare.
Depends on her momentan mental status.
Anyone else got this issues with the dialogues in this update?
Charlotte: [name_Aunt], did [name] help you?(in bed after waking up with her sister)
MC(to Emma): How are things this morning, [name1_yd]?
MC(to Emma when she wants to ask something): Yes, [name1_yd]?
MC(to Emma):[name1_yd], is there anything you can think of that i could buy your mother?
MC(to Emma):Okay. I'm sorry. Have a good day, [name1_yd]
Detective Carter: Nothing like that is going to happen. I'm going to keep Emma safe this time (Shouldn't MC say this?)
Charlotte: [name_Aunt], did [name] help you?(in bed after waking up with her sister)
MC(to Emma): How are things this morning, [name1_yd]?
MC(to Emma when she wants to ask something): Yes, [name1_yd]?
MC(to Emma):[name1_yd], is there anything you can think of that i could buy your mother?
MC(to Emma):Okay. I'm sorry. Have a good day, [name1_yd]
Detective Carter: Nothing like that is going to happen. I'm going to keep Emma safe this time (Shouldn't MC say this?)
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- Oct 21, 2017
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Playing this recently (so I didn't have to wait long for this update) I think the progression is fine. I think we have to take into consideration that Charlotte has minimal contact with men since MC and maybe some photographers. Considering that, it makes sense that she hasn't tried to fix her issues regarding men.
Now she's ultimately fighting herself because of her daughter's safety. I understand her. I believe it won't be long till she realizes the MC isn't a horrible man.
Perhaps I'm too optimistic. As I know the people playing this game from the start might be a bit more impatient regarding that.
Now she's ultimately fighting herself because of her daughter's safety. I understand her. I believe it won't be long till she realizes the MC isn't a horrible man.
Perhaps I'm too optimistic. As I know the people playing this game from the start might be a bit more impatient regarding that.
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Except for the fact she doesn’t trust him at all, she was just backed into a corner
- Oct 1, 2018
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Now we have the real MC: Charlotte. The playable MC is only a freak.
What a boring mess.
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- Aug 27, 2020
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Ok,
So I am a fresh set of eyes here. I am a proof reader on a few AVN, and I have to say that the story here is engaging. What I am not seeing is much in the way of a path forward. Charlotte is TOO shut down. Lucy is TOO ready, and Emma is not an issue. I have zero sexual attraction to Emma, because of the story, I bought into the protector role and I likely will never breech that. Charlotte and Lucy on the other hand, I am attracted to. Both are age appropriate, but the path forward is very murky. If I want to be with Lucy, I can see that, but so far I have found nothing to suggest ADULT in the content. I prefer the elusive prey of Charlotte, and as a former security specialist, turned engineer, turned government drone, now retired, I think the qualms of the MC are well written. What I do not like is the absolute lack of something to pull me forward. I appreciate a good story, but for commercial success there needs to be some actual porn quality renders, and I have seen zero in every attempt to play. This is an unforgiving environment, and while I like the MC, there needs to be a pull to invest, to spend money to support the dev. It is not here. I offer my own writing as I spent 16 years in technical writing and editing for the US department of Homeland security so I have skill, my talent I am willing to audition. You guys need help... Just saying. Otherwise I wish you the best of luck
So I am a fresh set of eyes here. I am a proof reader on a few AVN, and I have to say that the story here is engaging. What I am not seeing is much in the way of a path forward. Charlotte is TOO shut down. Lucy is TOO ready, and Emma is not an issue. I have zero sexual attraction to Emma, because of the story, I bought into the protector role and I likely will never breech that. Charlotte and Lucy on the other hand, I am attracted to. Both are age appropriate, but the path forward is very murky. If I want to be with Lucy, I can see that, but so far I have found nothing to suggest ADULT in the content. I prefer the elusive prey of Charlotte, and as a former security specialist, turned engineer, turned government drone, now retired, I think the qualms of the MC are well written. What I do not like is the absolute lack of something to pull me forward. I appreciate a good story, but for commercial success there needs to be some actual porn quality renders, and I have seen zero in every attempt to play. This is an unforgiving environment, and while I like the MC, there needs to be a pull to invest, to spend money to support the dev. It is not here. I offer my own writing as I spent 16 years in technical writing and editing for the US department of Homeland security so I have skill, my talent I am willing to audition. You guys need help... Just saying. Otherwise I wish you the best of luck
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Info: the variable "name1_yd" is not a fault, it was added (among other variables!) with version v0.5.1 at the beginning in "script.rpy" and defines the name "Miss Lloyd". These errors occur when loading an old save from v0.5 or older.
Funny. Because I started a new play thru when this one dropped. So, not sure why I got it, if it's due to using an old save.
- Aug 14, 2018
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That' s indeed strange...
When making my Mod I have only noticed one bug ([name_Aunt] instead of [name_aunt]), and in one scene I think the wrong person is saying a sentence.
- Oct 24, 2019
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Yeah. I fixed that one also and some variables that hadn't set in ep5 for some reason.
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Unfortunately many people on this site are kind of jarred when VN's such as Hillside and others of course try to take realistic approaches to situations. Many people complaining like the MC has earned her trust for not perving on Emma for the first 2 weeks. Like he's done the bare minimum and should be rewarded?