I like this Vn so far, but there's a few *minor* things that seem a bit more dramatized, granted they're not deal breakers, and I understand where the writer is coming from in regards to setting up the situation and characters etc. Keep in mind this is more nit-picking from my standpoint as a player.
Charlotte, as a character is a bit...overdone. I don't know how to properly describe it without sounding overly harsh. Given the horrible incident that the character endured, and reoccurring incidents with her attacker I can see how she gets stand-off'ish. But she seems *overly* hesitant to accept a man near her or in her house. Even she questions her own actions during the story.
And Emma, as sweet as a character as she is, is the cliché of the "virginesque" naïve girl. I know she's sheltered, but she DOES go to a school where she'd be at least somewhat exposed to things like sex etc. She almost acts/th'inks like a 10 year old, which again I feel the writer is doing to accentuate her purity, but it seems excessive.
Again, I know it's somewhat nit-picking on the character traits, but with how well this one is written I was hoping that some cliche's wouldn't pop up (Overly-sexual aunt for instance).
I'm sure a lot of this will be remedied by the story as the characters develop, I'm looking forward to more updates.