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Hahaha well, something like that. Suzy getting angry for whatever reason, trying to punch MC, MC trying to avoid getting punched and calming her, she getting more and more frustrated, pushing MC through the glassdoor, MC getting slightly hurt she angry at herself for what she's done and at MC for the original reason.. going down on him over the glass just to keep punching and out of nowhere kissing him to the point of suffocation... just pure beautiful chaos of emotion sparkling everywhere.
- Sep 5, 2019
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NO sex of any kind, come back next year.
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Depends on what you consider to be a sex scene. If you count a woman masturbating, then 1. Otherwise, nada.
- Sep 5, 2019
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Facepalm into oblivion, fuck Randy Orton, he isn't worthy of carrying the jockstrap of a Dusty Rhodes, or a Ric Flair, and just fuck Micheal Cole and his shitty commentator clones.
There's a sex scene in the flashback and also one at the party Emma goes to
- Sep 5, 2019
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It's called a story dude, if you want mindless sex, try something else.
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Just to make it clear, I do want Suzy in love with MC. But I don't want her to become a cute little puppy whose eyes become heart shaped every time MC appears. I want her to hate that she is in love with MC. Treating him bad and only surrendering to him in the most vulnerable moments, in the beginning totally in denial, not understanding what the hell is wrong with her, then denying that it is possible and only accepting it when there is no other possible alternative and totally hating the idea, as if she was sick and needed to be cured. Getting jealous and treating bad to any other woman getting close to MC (even hating that Emma is getting MC attention) but also treating bad MC. Feelings so strong that she dislike having that almost drive her mad.
And yes, the first time I really believe hate fuck would be the same. In fact, almost all times until they actually acknowledge their feelings (very far into the novel), with them fighting very bad and suddenly rolling on the floor fucking each other mad just to finish and right again..
It is a pity so very few heroines remain rival to the MC.
that would be a really interesting plot line.
However, I think that would be a big twist. Initially, she took the lead in the relationship with the MC.
Is she really jealous of her sister?
I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
- Nov 9, 2019
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Forget sex scenes now, expect to arrive in version 0.23
Now you will only see tears and more tears.
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i think its scary for her to start to trust the mc, so she is trying to make excuses to effectively run away (fire him), the truth is her walls are crumbling, and i think the mc telling her his emma story will mean a huge forward step.ok, maybe not all
But I see it a little differently.
The relationship with Charlotte is as bad as it was at the beginning.
She feels uncomfortable around him and wants him out of the house as soon as possible.
She doesn't like the fact that Emma trusts him.
Charlotte's sister acts like a little girl and punishes him without even asking what his problems are.
Emma's big sister's behaviour needs no words.
Emma's behaviour is more like that of a nine-year-old girl than a young adult.
It goes far beyond the behaviour of a naive young woman. yes, her mother shields her from the outside world, but she seems more like a little child.
Best Regards
from everything we know the mc is likely also quite scared by what happened around emma's death, and worse he blames himself, Charlotte wasn't the only one to have seen a person responsible for a lot of scars that night, so it wasn't just "anger".
Charlotte's reaction to the mc having a emma nightmare wasn't written perfectly, if i was writing it i would make it so that she briefly remembers that the very first day he responded quite strongly to that name, but she wouldn't be able to tell one way or the other so she would be slightly worried/suspicious.
the way i see it Charlotte is simply afraid because she is getting quite attached to him and she is afraid of heart burn (due to breaking trust, etc)
Version 0.8, 200 pages worth of comments, zero nudity except from a dead girl. This is going to be the next Dual Family, isn't it?
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This 100%.
And then you have people claiming this slow burn adds rEaLisM. Having fully grown adults acting like emotional teens having their first crush, is the exact opposite of realism. And so many games rely on that shit to stretch the story....