- Aug 25, 2016
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The story's shaping up pretty well, and it's a sweet dynamic between all the girls in the family and MC.
It does feel that most of the tension seems to stem from all the main adults behaving like teens. And Emma's high school drama comes across a bit too soap opera for me. Zak just needs a moustache to twirl while going on a monologue. Charlie's story of survival in the cesspit that is the model industry is much more compelling in comparison.
It does feel that most of the tension seems to stem from all the main adults behaving like teens. And Emma's high school drama comes across a bit too soap opera for me. Zak just needs a moustache to twirl while going on a monologue. Charlie's story of survival in the cesspit that is the model industry is much more compelling in comparison.