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- May 22, 2017
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Manners are not your strong side, I see.
Sorry for trying to help you, I'll try to remember never to make that mistake again.
- Jun 30, 2018
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Once again it seems that my version is a bit strange. I am on the Charlotta path (that will progress into Emma's later on) and did not have a single choice. Char also did not complain about MC leaving to have sex with Kaylah.
Speaking of which, the scene was a bit underwhelming and can be summarised with "I am so horny, but I only have five minutes, so hurry up." Very erotic. In the end we don't even know if MC finished somehow or was sent away high and dry. I will check out the second path with Lucy if the scene there is better.
Other than that we've planted seeds. We already have two characters - Char and Lucy - noticing how attached Emma has become to the MC. Easy to develop this from wanting to have a daddy into a crush on "daddy".
Charlotte's behaviour has been discussed ad nauseam. I think we can compare it to "Get rid of this big bad spider, but if you kill it you will sleep on the couch for at least a month."
Two further points:
- Could it be that Agent Fox's first name is Megan?
- I don't know if I've been brainwashed / fed with clichés by crime series, but I did not quite understand how the police can just ignore an FBI agent and take away a suspect / the MC once said agent has declared that she is taking over the investigation. I feel that would usually lead to - at least - a reprimand for the involved officers if not serious consequences for insubordination. However, that is just a feeling based on watching crime series and I am not sure how that is handled in reality.
Final thoughts: I've read that DB was not able to present the latest update the way he wanted to, so I'd be interested to know his original vision. I am not sure if he'll ever share it. I hope that he'll get his mojo back and the game won't end up abandoned. I keep my fingers crossed and wish him all the best.
Speaking of which, the scene was a bit underwhelming and can be summarised with "I am so horny, but I only have five minutes, so hurry up." Very erotic. In the end we don't even know if MC finished somehow or was sent away high and dry. I will check out the second path with Lucy if the scene there is better.
Other than that we've planted seeds. We already have two characters - Char and Lucy - noticing how attached Emma has become to the MC. Easy to develop this from wanting to have a daddy into a crush on "daddy".
Charlotte's behaviour has been discussed ad nauseam. I think we can compare it to "Get rid of this big bad spider, but if you kill it you will sleep on the couch for at least a month."
Two further points:
- Could it be that Agent Fox's first name is Megan?
- I don't know if I've been brainwashed / fed with clichés by crime series, but I did not quite understand how the police can just ignore an FBI agent and take away a suspect / the MC once said agent has declared that she is taking over the investigation. I feel that would usually lead to - at least - a reprimand for the involved officers if not serious consequences for insubordination. However, that is just a feeling based on watching crime series and I am not sure how that is handled in reality.
Final thoughts: I've read that DB was not able to present the latest update the way he wanted to, so I'd be interested to know his original vision. I am not sure if he'll ever share it. I hope that he'll get his mojo back and the game won't end up abandoned. I keep my fingers crossed and wish him all the best.
- Jul 10, 2017
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MC is Creasy .. Creasy is a specialised bodyguard who is alone fighting for this sweet lil girl.
This game upped the ante - the girl actively goes looking for the rapist.
Bonus points, the mom of the sweetest girl actively avoids the drug rapists.
Bonus points the sis of the sweetest girl is resisting as best she can the blackmailer.
we still have the sweetest girl.
Also, anything you do before the showdown with the killer, MC will never step out of bounds.
You do not hav ta refuse anyone, Keep your attention on the sweetest girl and be her prottector.
We all know nothing can stand between a ma and her sweetest girl, not even MC.
This game upped the ante - the girl actively goes looking for the rapist.
Bonus points, the mom of the sweetest girl actively avoids the drug rapists.
Bonus points the sis of the sweetest girl is resisting as best she can the blackmailer.
My question to you lot is... Why are you trying to reason MC'S s decision to kill carter NOW? It's something that already happened in the old update. No one had any issues back then. I don't remember a single soul running his mouth on that particular issue.
So listen cunts, the current problem is Charlotte and sus Suzy. Get on it!
It's not only weak, but a PREPOSTEROUS one! Come up with something new. I'll make sure it gets complimented too.
She STILL wouldn't be your TOP 1 'cause Emma cried and came running back.
This game grows to redeem creasy after the man on fire fiasco,
we still have the sweetest girl.
Also, anything you do before the showdown with the killer, MC will never step out of bounds.
You do not hav ta refuse anyone, Keep your attention on the sweetest girl and be her prottector.
We all know nothing can stand between a ma and her sweetest girl, not even MC.
- Nov 14, 2017
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A few thoughts. I actually liked this update. I think the characters are behaving fairly realistically.
The scene at the police station was totaly ridiculous. I think DB just wanted to get that part over with, and it shows. But I didn't mind, as I didn't want to spend the whole update at the police station anyway. The quicker it was addressed the better.
I think that those that are surprised by Charlotte's reaction, are too jaded from watching action movies or playing video games. In real life, most people, would be quite shocked to see their mild-mannered bodyguard snap someones neck right in front of them. Also, Charlotte has many reasons not to trust men, and she has experienced violence from many that she has been close to, that she thought she could trust. So to see the MC snap someone's neck, even though he nearly killed them all, would have most people being a little distant while they collected their thoughts. It took her some time, and inner reflection to realize that he ultimately did the right thing, probably.
The scene with Kaylah was terrible. I never was too enthusiastic about her character compared to the others, but thought she could be a fun diversion. But I can't remember seeing a less sexy sex scene in these games, in a long time, if ever.
I think Dark Blue as written himself into a corner with the 4 main LIs. It is obvious that Charlotte is the "true" LI, in the devs mind. The others are there for some choice and to expand the fan-base, but I just don't see how he is going to pull it off. Lucy is great, so I think he has done a good job with her as a believable more fun alternate to Charlotte. In real life, Lucy would be a much more fun LI than the cold and emotionless Charlotte. However, Emma's character behaves just too immaturely, and clearly sees the MC as a father figure more than anything else, that I don't see how any other option could work. Plus, no way would Charlotte or Suzie ever accept a romantic relationship between the MC and Emma, nor does it makes sense based on the MC's personality so far. And Emma is not going to realistically abandon her family for the MC, nor should she. I don't know how the dev is going to make this option work in a believable way.
Suzie has some of the same problems as Emma. I just don't buy that Charlotte would be OK with that, despite Suzie actually acting like her real age (20?).
I don't follow the devs Discord, but is it true that he plans around 2 smaller updates and then a finale? I don't know how he can wrap up everything so quickly in a satisfying way. There are so many loose ends that have barely been addressed. Unless he just plans to have a Charlotte only route, and forget anything else, there isn't time in three updates to wrap this game up, without being criminally rushed.
I hope the dev doesn't pull a "Freeloading Family", where just as it started to get good, that dev suddenly moves to a conclusion, angering just about the entire fan-base.
The scene at the police station was totaly ridiculous. I think DB just wanted to get that part over with, and it shows. But I didn't mind, as I didn't want to spend the whole update at the police station anyway. The quicker it was addressed the better.
I think that those that are surprised by Charlotte's reaction, are too jaded from watching action movies or playing video games. In real life, most people, would be quite shocked to see their mild-mannered bodyguard snap someones neck right in front of them. Also, Charlotte has many reasons not to trust men, and she has experienced violence from many that she has been close to, that she thought she could trust. So to see the MC snap someone's neck, even though he nearly killed them all, would have most people being a little distant while they collected their thoughts. It took her some time, and inner reflection to realize that he ultimately did the right thing, probably.
The scene with Kaylah was terrible. I never was too enthusiastic about her character compared to the others, but thought she could be a fun diversion. But I can't remember seeing a less sexy sex scene in these games, in a long time, if ever.
I think Dark Blue as written himself into a corner with the 4 main LIs. It is obvious that Charlotte is the "true" LI, in the devs mind. The others are there for some choice and to expand the fan-base, but I just don't see how he is going to pull it off. Lucy is great, so I think he has done a good job with her as a believable more fun alternate to Charlotte. In real life, Lucy would be a much more fun LI than the cold and emotionless Charlotte. However, Emma's character behaves just too immaturely, and clearly sees the MC as a father figure more than anything else, that I don't see how any other option could work. Plus, no way would Charlotte or Suzie ever accept a romantic relationship between the MC and Emma, nor does it makes sense based on the MC's personality so far. And Emma is not going to realistically abandon her family for the MC, nor should she. I don't know how the dev is going to make this option work in a believable way.
Suzie has some of the same problems as Emma. I just don't buy that Charlotte would be OK with that, despite Suzie actually acting like her real age (20?).
I don't follow the devs Discord, but is it true that he plans around 2 smaller updates and then a finale? I don't know how he can wrap up everything so quickly in a satisfying way. There are so many loose ends that have barely been addressed. Unless he just plans to have a Charlotte only route, and forget anything else, there isn't time in three updates to wrap this game up, without being criminally rushed.
I hope the dev doesn't pull a "Freeloading Family", where just as it started to get good, that dev suddenly moves to a conclusion, angering just about the entire fan-base.
- Nov 14, 2017
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i could give you 3 examples.
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I would like to say. That this VN is so good and have this sensuality without the neccesity of sex. The characters are so good and you can emphatize with them. Also, the story is so captivating plus I don't want the MC have the same destiny with the first Emma.
Please God don't allow it.
Please God don't allow it.
- May 22, 2017
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Geez... Arguing? Debating? I just pointed out that RenPy controls are case sensitive.
Most people are not aware of the tiny problem that caps lock disables all RenPy letter key controls, so it makes perfect sense to check first.
Calling that arguing must be a stretch of the century.
Your answer was to piss off?
Thank you very much.Untwist your panties and calm down.
- Jun 2, 2017
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Everyone is losing sight of the REALITY that there is NO one set way to react to trauma.
Even those with PTSD don't have the same triggers or behaviors even when 2 people got PTSD from the same event.
Charlotte reacts the way she does because that is Charlotte's way. It is as simple as that.
PEACE
Even those with PTSD don't have the same triggers or behaviors even when 2 people got PTSD from the same event.
Charlotte reacts the way she does because that is Charlotte's way. It is as simple as that.
PEACE
- Jul 15, 2017
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I didn't want to get into this petty bickering, but I just had to. I really hate to bust your bubble of 'Holiness' but you can. You seemed to have not to completely thought out, or tried all of the variables, and or conditions that will cause a lowercase to be produced while pressing the shift key. That condition would be . . . . wait for it . . . . When the Caps Lock is engaged. Just sayin..
- Jan 3, 2018
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Not in the US, or the UK.
It used to be part of the entry criteria, but these days it's considered discriminatory.
They used to have min & max weight criteria, too.
In the US, specifically NYC, it was lowered to 5 foot 7,
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- Jul 3, 2021
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I think one of my favourite moments that gave me a chuckle was the following horrifying revelation MC had...
<shudder>
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I think he was and SO WERE YOU WITH THAT SEARCH FUNCTION!
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Did Charlotte's brain go for a hike in EP12?