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Suggesting a new more intriguing title for this otherwise excellent pinup:Pinup #157 - Shopping with Charlotte [8k]
Pinup #157 - Bummer [8k]
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Pinup #157 - Bummer [8k]
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I think we will need Special Agent Fox to investigate....undercover.....while wearing a see through teddy bear nighty.What if MC (after Suzi returns home and occupies her room again) goes to Steve's bar to celebrate, see bottom of the glass once too many times, come to Suzi's bed and cuddle with her... Well... at least try to cuddle...
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I like your idea. MC will like your idea... if he survive the cuddle with Suzy. Suzy could like it too.
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Suzi may have to be cuffed and watch, while Agent Fox conducts a proper interview of MC. Of course she would fill out a 302 report with all the details. Whether it gets filed is another question. I am sure Agent Fox will be on top of things.
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I already don't trust that other cop who was with agent Fox
Maybe I'm just mistrustful by nature
Maybe I'm just mistrustful by nature
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Yeah, could be something. He appears in few scenes, but I'm too uneasy about him. He is there, but it appears he's not. He didn't do anything wrong. Yet...
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I'm much more unsure about the MC's bartender friend. A very smooth bastard, he resembles a pimp, a smuggler and a drug dealer rolled into one. I can’t shake the feeling that his knife is already aimed at the MC’s back.
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Only because you think he's going to ask Emma out on a date.
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well pervert knows pervert.Pervert!
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Yeah... I don't think Darkblue did accidentally show us Steve in this shopping mall... Steve was there for a reason... And the Emma's picture was taken there... So... It's an accident he was there, he has an own agenda, he works with fake Wainstein, Jason (or dirty cops) or he's on MC's side and watch his six...
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I happen to agree, it's a relatively common gambit - the trusted friend is really the bad guy. The corrupt cop was involved with the Weintein character so it may make some sense that the bartender is on his own Charlotte/Emma agenda, separate from that. Depending on how much story is left to tell, it could be that the dirty cop confronting MC and getting killed happened too early to be the final twist in the tale (as far as plot, that is).
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Personally I think that was a red herring. it was perfect timing, MC sees Steve being weird in the mall, then later that night the house gets broken into by someone who took a picture of them right as we saw Steve. it seems too obvious.
I have no doubts he has his own agenda, but it probably isn't malicious, I hope
My theory is that if you are on the Charlotte path, then at some point you will be able to have Steve and Lucy meet and hit it off.
Or maybe if you are on the Lucy path like me, you will be able to have Steve and Charlotte meet and hit it off
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Hi, guys.
I will be ready to start testing sometime next week. There are always things that need fixing and changing, so testing will likely take a couple of weeks after that.
Thanks,
DB
I don't know. Emma was left alone with Steve and nothing happened. Charlotte and Emma visited Steve without the MC there to protect them. I do think that Steve will play a bigger part in the ending of the story, but I'm betting that he has the MC's back.
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