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Yum. Although I wouldn’t want to be tunnel buddies with Zak. He’s likely raw-dogged a lot of wrong. Hope Jenny got tested.

I can understand why the developer’s lost heart in this game. It’s a fucked-up story! Not the MC protecting Charlotte and her family and all that; Harry Wolff and his sex-trafficking drug-dealing rapists. The more you see them doing their thing, the more you want the MC to go charging in there like John Matrix in Commando, and just murder them all in painful ways. You have to go into really dark places in your mind to write them realistically. It would have been easier on his soul if he’d have chosen less-evil bad guys.

The last update’s storyline did feel a little rushed, but overall I liked it. I just hope the second half doesn’t feel any more rushed. Maybe if he knocks out the solution first, then spends the rest of the time concentrating on awesome, beautiful fuck scenes that would make Emma, Lucy, and Charlotte fans weep for joy, both from their eyes and cocks. (As for Suzi… yeah, she has to redeem herself a lot more first. Taking out that douche in the bar helped.)
 
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Dessolos

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I wouldn't even be a little upset if the bad guys were all killed off or arrested next update so that we can focus on the romance stuff.
I need to take Emma on a date.
Honestly not cause im bored with the storyline but yeah I would love for the bad guys to be arrested or "dealt with" in the next update or 2. Then kind of forgotten about for the most part so the last bit of the game can be focused on romance. At least until the main boss comes into play, as we saw Harry Wolff is also just a underling to a bigger fish.
 

Joshy92

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Honestly not cause im bored with the storyline but yeah I would love for the bad guys to be arrested or "dealt with" in the next update or 2. Then kind of forgotten about for the most part so the last bit of the game can be focused on romance. At least until the main boss comes into play, as we saw Harry Wolff is also just a underling to a bigger fish.
Bro I would kill all those evil bastards in just a few renders for a date with Emma. Of course I also want to give her some nice roses before we go on our date.
 

DougDimmadope

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Honestly not cause im bored with the storyline but yeah I would love for the bad guys to be arrested or "dealt with" in the next update or 2. Then kind of forgotten about for the most part so the last bit of the game can be focused on romance. At least until the main boss comes into play, as we saw Harry Wolff is also just a underling to a bigger fish.
I agree. The whole celebrity rapists/police corruption saga is kinda boring to me. I think the strongpoint of this VN is the character development and the romance with the LIs.
 

SlapE

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Just finished, It's very very good. Loving the story so far, the story and characters are definitely this AVN's strong suit. The visuals are also great too, so overall it was a very enjoyable experience all the way through.

Lucy is my favorite LI as of now, Charlotte and Emma are both close fighting for my 2nd spot, however I'd have to have to edge it to Charlotte. Mainly because I like Emma more as just a character rather than an LI, because so far the MC's been more like a father figure/protector for her, and there's been no actual romance between them, it's been hinted at, but nothing concrete yet. Lucy on the other hand is not only an amazing character, but is easily my favorite LI, the romance between them has been built up perfectly, and she doesn't have the emotional baggage that comes with Charlotte. I love Charlotte as a character, but as an LI it's still very much slow progress with her, and I love the relationship between the MC and Charlotte and how it's developed over the course of the game. However as an LI I feel like currently Lucy is just far better than the rest.

Meanwhile, Suzi I have no interest in, not attracted to her that much, don't like her personality all too much, and she's been the least interesting one to me in terms of a potential love interest. I think she's the only main character I'll completely skip on.

As far as the side characters, I'm not interested in either Kaylah or Selena to be honest, they are side characters anyways, so I don't really see the point in pursuing anything with them. Charlotte is the better Kaylah anyways.
 
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