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Yum. Although I wouldn’t want to be tunnel buddies with Zak. He’s likely raw-dogged a lot of wrong. Hope Jenny got tested.
I can understand why the developer’s lost heart in this game. It’s a fucked-up story! Not the MC protecting Charlotte and her family and all that; Harry Wolff and his sex-trafficking drug-dealing rapists. The more you see them doing their thing, the more you want the MC to go charging in there like John Matrix in Commando, and just murder them all in painful ways. You have to go into really dark places in your mind to write them realistically. It would have been easier on his soul if he’d have chosen less-evil bad guys.
The last update’s storyline did feel a little rushed, but overall I liked it. I just hope the second half doesn’t feel any more rushed. Maybe if he knocks out the solution first, then spends the rest of the time concentrating on awesome, beautiful fuck scenes that would make Emma, Lucy, and Charlotte fans weep for joy, both from their eyes and cocks. (As for Suzi… yeah, she has to redeem herself a lot more first. Taking out that douche in the bar helped.)
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