RPGM Holdcraft Chronicles: Aki [Ch.9] [Seez]

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Furmilk said:
Decided to play this, seems pretty good. My only question is regarding their plan with Jake. If they're transforming him into something similar to Nicole, why have him be a cuck? Or will his personality change as well with time into something more like Gideon? It would make more sense imo, have him become so dominant that he's ok with Aki doing what she does as long as she comes running back to him. Inferior to superior would be some great progression for him. Hell, let Aki dropping her bombshell news be the catalyst for it, turn the table on Madame or even Nicole and start asserting himself. Unless your plan is to keep Jake meek and submissive, though it feels like such a missed opportunity.
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Well seems somewhat logical for him to be submissive at this point and not turn the tables. He started out cheating on Aki by getting a blowjob and getting his penis enlarged. Now he continues to chase that high and with Aki signing off Jake doing this thing as long as she gets to do her stuff with Nichole, they pretty much amp each other into the cheating/cuck fetish. Imagine getting all the sexual stimulation you can wish for by simply following the lead. If he's mentally predispositioned for this he won't fight it. Aki being pregnant does seem like a catalyst for them to drift apart rather than him "renconquering" Aki. I can totally see him running back to his mistress and Gideon for coping with more sexual relief.

Troqu said:
Aki has a clear disdain, possibly even dislike for Jake at this point imo. She wouldn't treat him the way she does otherwise. She constantly lies to him, shows clear favor for everyone else around her, and even when given the opportunity to talk to the man who is constantly willing to take all kind of shit to make her happy, she would rather deceive him. She will never let him become anything like Nicole who she actually respects.
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I agree with the rift between Aki and Jake but not to the point of disdain. Aki getting hit by the realization of her being pregnant by someone else than Jake is clear indicator of her still being emotionally invested in Jake. Sure the attachment to him is now shallower than in the beginning -> talking about argument about Jake fucking maids and aki therefore lashing out at him, as they had a deal for each having only one other partner.
Although the pregnancy might either sink the relationship or what is more likely: will cement a new dynamic.
Aki's mom is somehow invested in Jake and will definetly get a piece of him and Jake's mistress will get to have Jake for himself. I am not sure how Aki will emerge from that but Nichole shooting down Aki (confession) even though she will bear her child does kinda paint a bleak picture for Aki.
 
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netcov said:
I agree with the rift between Aki and Jake but not to the point of disdain. Aki getting hit by the realization of her being pregnant by someone else than Jake is clear indicator of her still being emotionally invested in Jake.
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She didn't even cry for the fact that she hurt Jake, she cried because that hurt might make him hate her. Worrying that your actions will come back to you instead of the hurt said actions might cause is pure disdain. I think it's pretty telling that on the preview of the sequel game we saw all of the main cast except one person.
 
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Well seems somewhat logical for him to be submissive at this point and not turn the tables. He started out cheating on Aki by getting a blowjob and getting his penis enlarged. Now he continues to chase that high and with Aki signing off Jake doing this thing as long as she gets to do her stuff with Nichole, they pretty much amp each other into the cheating/cuck fetish. Imagine getting all the sexual stimulation you can wish for by simply following the lead. If he's mentally predispositioned for this he won't fight it. Aki being pregnant does seem like a catalyst for them to drift apart rather than him "renconquering" Aki. I can totally see him running back to his mistress and Gideon for coping with more sexual relief.



I agree with the rift between Aki and Jake but not to the point of disdain. Aki getting hit by the realization of her being pregnant by someone else than Jake is clear indicator of her still being emotionally invested in Jake. Sure the attachment to him is now shallower than in the beginning -> talking about argument about Jake fucking maids and aki therefore lashing out at him, as they had a deal for each having only one other partner.
Although the pregnancy might either sink the relationship or what is more likely: will cement a new dynamic.
Aki's mom is somehow invested in Jake and will definetly get a piece of him and Jake's mistress will get to have Jake for himself. I am not sure how Aki will emerge from that but Nichole shooting down Aki (confession) even though she will bear her child does kinda paint a bleak picture for Aki.
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Technically Jake didn't cheat at first a demon forced herself on him
 
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netcov said:
Well seems somewhat logical for him to be submissive at this point and not turn the tables. He started out cheating on Aki by getting a blowjob and getting his penis enlarged. Now he continues to chase that high and with Aki signing off Jake doing this thing as long as she gets to do her stuff with Nichole, they pretty much amp each other into the cheating/cuck fetish. Imagine getting all the sexual stimulation you can wish for by simply following the lead. If he's mentally predispositioned for this he won't fight it. Aki being pregnant does seem like a catalyst for them to drift apart rather than him "renconquering" Aki. I can totally see him running back to his mistress and Gideon for coping with more sexual relief.
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While true that he has that going for him, including him cumming from thinking about his mistress banging someone else, he's also quite possessive of Aki, as he's stated in the past that he's ok with her being with other women, but not men. Aki as well, as she stated he better not be knocking up any of the maids, she's still very much attached to him. Even if she's turned on by cheating on her husband, the sheer guilt she feels about betraying him makes me think things won't end with seperation. In my mind there are only 3 ways this will resolve while still being consistant with what's has been established by the story so far:

1. What I personally hope for, this will be the spark in Jake that ignites the more dominant and aggressive side of his new futa identity (for as established by this story, these are futa inherent traits), being pushed by his new mixing hormones to being more in charge. There are multiple scenes where Aki says something about Jake kind of reminds her of the new feeling Nicole instilled but not being quite as strong, I could see her going back around to him as Jake progresses with his transformation. In fact, now that I think about it, I'm starting to think the "training" Madame is putting Jake through might be similar to Gideon's training based on the tidbits the story has given us so far. This combined with the established ability of their being twins with 2 different fathers makes me think he'll end up impregnating Aki as well to balance things out, maybe even having his child be the first born. Hell if they could make this happen, it could let Aki continue lying to Jake as she could convince him BOTH children are his, which would probably consume her with guilt as she's shown to feel worse and worse about her lying, but it's possible.

2. Aki and Jake end their relationship and go be with there new lovers. Aki go on to be Nicole's concubine, and Jake becomes Madame's new Futa plaything. This seems like a rather large stretch given what we've seen so far. While they may be fighting a bit more lately, Aki and Jake still seem to love eachother, even if they're spending time with others, they still come home to eachother and share a bed.

3. This new level of cheating will cause him to orgasm himself unconscious, and he'll wake up telling her how great it is that she's having someone elses baby. To me it feels so lazy and while possible, would mean the writer established tons of rules and lore for Nicole and her friends, but chooses dilberately to exclude Jake. Option 3 just doesn't make sense.

According to the dev, this is a 10 chapter game and we just finished chapter 6, so we're more than halfway through the story. This wouldn't be a good time start changing the rules that have been established, as putting in some "writers convinces's" to make things make sense never really sit well with an audiance. Regardless, we'll just have to wait and see where this goes.
 
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Furmilk said:
While true that he has that going for him, including him cumming from thinking about his mistress banging someone else, he's also quite possessive of Aki, as he's stated in the past that he's ok with her being with other women, but not men. Aki as well, as she stated he better not be knocking up any of the maids, she's still very much attached to him. Even if she's turned on by cheating on her husband, the sheer guilt she feels about betraying him makes me think things won't end with separation.

According to the dev, this is a 10 chapter game and we just finished chapter 6, so we're more than halfway through the story. This wouldn't be a good time start changing the rules that have been established, as putting in some "writers convinces's" to make things make sense never really sit well with an audiance. Regardless, we'll just have to wait and see where this goes.
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Troqu said:
She didn't even cry for the fact that she hurt Jake, she cried because that hurt might make him hate her. Worrying that your actions will come back to you instead of the hurt said actions might cause is pure disdain. I think it's pretty telling that on the preview of the sequel game we saw all of the main cast except one person.
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Samuraibear said:
Technically Jake didn't cheat at first a demon forced herself on him
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Can people clarify this for me? At first it seemed Nicole had a agenda to turn Aki a pet for their upcoming Main event. I thought the holdcraft's are manipulative and evil. But in later chapter it seems that's not the case anymore. Though Nicole still manipulated Aki here and there (making her agree to set honeytrap for Jake etc) though also she is the one who pointed out that Aki may love Jake more than her (Aki didn't think of Jake at this point until she pointed it out). Also in Nicole's thought she says Aki may come to hate her when everything is said and done.

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Their plan/tone shift when they learned she is a kitsune and daughter of a power kitsune. As a Corruption fan Aki's fall was fast but I stayed for the story and the hot sex scenes. But the story became little bit confusing for me follow.

And I totally agree with Troqu about Aki's feeling, seeing the story lore she knew Jake will die before her and as far we know she wants all people to like her. So she is just sad that Jake may not like her in his short lifespan. She is not remorseful for her action and it's never implied she will stop it cause cheating is one of her kink. She willingly started to cheat even before becoming a futa addict. It was her choice all along.

But for Jake she was manipulated and honeytrapped by Aki and holdcrafts. He is doing this so he can have large dick and please Aki (the first pool scene confirms it also by Saki when she says he will go above and beyond for her).

What I love in NTR game is the corruption of FMC, what I hate is there is no drama after the corruption. It only goes 2 ways BF/Hubby becoming willing cuck/oblivious cuck or left alone with dick in his hand.

But this one felt different as it's more focused on the story lore rather than making/showing Jake's cuckiness/anguish.

So what do you think, did Nicole manipulated Aki or did she genuinely wanted to be her friend (which doesn't make sense to me)
 
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xcalibar4 said:
So what do you think, did Nicole manipulated Aki or did she genuinely wanted to be her friend (which doesn't make sense to me)
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Honestly, I do think Nicole did want Aki to be a friend at first. Especially as a bit later the story for her previous "pet" is revealed and her stating she wanted her to be a friend at first. Now, there was a certain amount of resistance from Nicole of having Aki any contact with her cum and thus spiraling into the addiction. I am not sure when Nicole's sentiment turned from "actually being friends" to a more intimate relationship, but I'd tag this as somewhat of development Aki did not expect and Nicole at least feared. From her perspective she evolved from sex-driven demon into a manager who wanted to have a taste of "normal" live. At least that is my impression of Nicole.
 
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Can people clarify this for me? At first it seemed Nicole had a agenda to turn Aki a pet for their upcoming Main event. I thought the holdcraft's are manipulative and evil. But in later chapter it seems that's not the case anymore. Though Nicole still manipulated Aki here and there (making her agree to set honeytrap for Jake etc) though also she is the one who pointed out that Aki may love Jake more than her (Aki didn't think of Jake at this point until she pointed it out). Also in Nicole's thought she says Aki may come to hate her when everything is said and done.

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Their plan/tone shift when they learned she is a kitsune and daughter of a power kitsune. As a Corruption fan Aki's fall was fast but I stayed for the story and the hot sex scenes. But the story became little bit confusing for me follow.

And I totally agree with Troqu about Aki's feeling, seeing the story lore she knew Jake will die before her and as far we know she wants all people to like her. So she is just sad that Jake may not like her in his short lifespan. She is not remorseful for her action and it's never implied she will stop it cause cheating is one of her kink. She willingly started to cheat even before becoming a futa addict. It was her choice all along.

But for Jake she was manipulated and honeytrapped by Aki and holdcrafts. He is doing this so he can have large dick and please Aki (the first pool scene confirms it also by Saki when she says he will go above and beyond for her).

What I love in NTR game is the corruption of FMC, what I hate is there is no drama after the corruption. It only goes 2 ways BF/Hubby becoming willing cuck/oblivious cuck or left alone with dick in his hand.

But this one felt different as it's more focused on the story lore rather than making/showing Jake's cuckiness/anguish.

So what do you think, did Nicole manipulated Aki or did she genuinely wanted to be her friend (which doesn't make sense to me)
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given jakes personality up till this point he seems like he will just accept the relationship when the time comes. prob some drama first, but ultimately he is gonna accept it.
 
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netcov said:
Honestly, I do think Nicole did want Aki to be a friend at first. Especially as a bit later the story for her previous "pet" is revealed and her stating she wanted her to be a friend at first. Now, there was a certain amount of resistance from Nicole of having Aki any contact with her cum and thus spiraling into the addiction. I am not sure when Nicole's sentiment turned from "actually being friends" to a more intimate relationship, but I'd tag this as somewhat of development Aki did not expect and Nicole at least feared. From her perspective she evolved from sex-driven demon into a manager who wanted to have a taste of "normal" live. At least that is my impression of Nicole.
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But the images I posted about Nicole and Saria's conversation is before Nicole thought Aki as her friend. It clearly indicates that she had some plan for Aki for the big event where she wouldn't be surprised to see the all debauchery, she will be ready by then. It is cleared on the Ch 5 orgy event where Nicole took Aki. Nicole said she is ready early so she can take her now to this event otherwise she was suppose to take Aki in the main event (where she would fuck her in the stage like Gyn). And I think Nicole manipulated Aki (still doing it), and come to think of her as friend in later in the story rather than first.

And I think the main Event is where the Holdcraft feed on the couple's extreme negative emotion and use to stabilize the portal cause the portal is stable few times a year & the main event also happens few times a year (coincidence!!). But things change when they learn that Aki is powerful kitsune & now they want to use her power and the couples emotion to cross over.

Hiarus said:
Tbh didn't care for Jake much anyway, if he eventually starts getting left out of the story because he became that other girl's sex toy and because Aki just doesn't care anymore I wouldn't complain
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Carchek said:
given jakes personality up till this point he seems like he will just accept the relationship when the time comes. prob some drama first, but ultimately he is gonna accept it.
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Yep I also think so. Jake or the NTR jealousy/aghast emotion isn't focus of the game. He will end up as Elains pet & Aki will leave him so she can travel to Heaven Realm with Nicole.
 
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