This one turned out to be surprisingly good. No real problems with the English. The plot seems fine; probably the craziest thing about it is just how much of an asshole the average guy in this game is...
If there's one thing I find ludicrous, it's that the MC considers buying the spitefully overpriced pulshie from the bookstore, rather than finding the stupid thing online and probably get it for a fraction of the price. It sure looks distinct enough to be able to find it off a description alone.
And I suppose while you have quite a bit of freedom when it comes to who the MC engages with sexually, it still irks me when he's just fine with blow/handjobs (or more) from people I'd rather not let anywhere near my dick for various reasons... I've mostly concentrated on the main story, but I imagine there are way more such situations if I start actually engaging with the roughly 40 girls in this game... One of the few optional things I wanted to do was to tell Abi about the serum so she doesn't torture herself with guilt or whatever. But apparently there's no way to do that without things escalating into a blowjob.
Edit:
Almost forgot: I stumpled upon a bug. When trying to click Rhea from the front of the library, I get a message, "Error somewhere! Roll back now to avoid crash to main menu!", followed by the game continuing as if I hadn't clicked her button.
