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eroticstag

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Rewriting this again for berevity & clarity. Though this type of game isn't my cup of tea, I have no issue with NTR, I'm not intending to kink shame, & to keep things on topic, I'll leave my opinions on the quality of the game out of this.

My issue with the game is it is very heavy on child abuse. Now maybe that was completely unintentional on the dev's part, but by choosing the woman's son as the MC & as the person to be the "weak, wimpy beta" male to be cucked, abused & degraded, That makes it child abuse.

& before anyone says "excuse me, he's 18. He's an adult, therefore it isn't child abuse". Actually, yes it is. With how broken & lacking in any self worth & self esteem the MC is presented as, clearly the way she treats him in this game would logically be how she treated him as a child.

"Well ok, in trying to push the kink, maybe he accidentially went into territory that could be read as child abuse. So what? Why is it a big deal?" First of all, It couldn't be "potentially read as child abuse", it absolutely is child abuse. Her attitude & behavior towards her own child is beyond appalling, especially in contrast to what it SHOULD be. Secondly, why is it a big deal? Why does rule 7 ban any CP like content? Why does creating or possessing CP get you sent to prison when all other porn is completely legal? Why does, for most people, the thought of a man beating his child illicit so much more vitriol & anger than if he were to beat his wife? It's because almost all of society agrees DO NOT HARM CHILDREN.

So if I were to give the dev some constructive criticism, I'd say you're better off rewriting these as the MC observing his mother cucking his dad. By putting the MC as the cucked character, whether you intended to or not, you turned this into a child abuse kink piece.
Wait, But I love a broken beta MC and I imagine as weak beta boy when I jerk off. Sexual masochism is also a great kink for me bro.
If it was the husband/dad getting cucked, I wanna play as that dad.

You are also making kind of weird excuses to ban the contents you dont like. 18+ but also a child? 18+ but also cp?. He is a weak dude, So clearly he might have been treated bad as a kid, so you want to ban the game? It looks like you are stretching too much to get things banned.
You alright bro?
 

eroticstag

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Dec 7, 2018
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Yup that's what Ntr/Cuckolding Kink is about. It evokes feelings of intense anger and jealousy but also mixed in with helplessness. You could say it is technically Psychological Masochism. It is also why you see so many people who dislike this content even though its fictional. It evokes the strongest response.
For me it evokes feelings of strong horniness. It is why people like me highly love ntr.
Anyway this game was a bit here and there for me. I mean lot of writing but not enough CGs.
 

bkbigguy

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Jun 21, 2018
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For me it evokes feelings of strong horniness. It is why people like me highly love ntr.
Anyway this game was a bit here and there for me. I mean lot of writing but not enough CGs.
i agree! but if you like this try [ A stepmother’s life is boring and difficult without a husband ]!
 

kaggen

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Jun 25, 2020
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incest tag is false but i think its chosen because its ntr but there is no sex between mom, sister och the brother. sister and mom is just playing with the same guy but still no incest
 
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Android version anyone? I only found the first & last chapter in apk format lol every other link containing the rest of the chapters is dead unfortunately, someone gotta have it?please android version?
 

Blackice19

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Dec 21, 2018
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Any other NON-NTR or Avoidable NTR games with these female characters in them? Am interested in the girls not the kink so any games with them in it that fit that description would be great
 

Slappy Kinkaid

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Wait, But I love a broken beta MC and I imagine as weak beta boy when I jerk off. Sexual masochism is also a great kink for me bro.
If it was the husband/dad getting cucked, I wanna play as that dad.

You are also making kind of weird excuses to ban the contents you dont like. 18+ but also a child? 18+ but also cp?. He is a weak dude, So clearly he might have been treated bad as a kid, so you want to ban the game? It looks like you are stretching too much to get things banned.
You alright bro?
Late reply, I know, but I got another notification on this thread & just now noticed your post. Can you cite any part of my post where I said the game should be banned? Go back & Copy / paste the exact quote where you think I said it should be banned. Now, while you're actually reading it this time, (& subsequently discovering that I didn't say that), let me clarify, since you seem a bit mystified on the point.

The entire point of my dislike of the game has nothing to do with the NTR kink stuff. Again, if the MC was the woman's husband instead of her son, I'd think nothing of it, just more NTR shovelware. It's the fact that the MC is her SON, PLUS the way she behaves towards him, that shows that this is the way she's treated him for a considerable amount of time. These factors indicate a history of abuse of the son from the mother. THAT is what I take issue with, which is why I dislike this game so much, (well that, & the fact that it's low effort shovelware). Now should it be banned? No, because there's nothing particularly harmful in it that would warrant banning, (Well that is aside from how many brain cells it kills reading through it, but hey, Beer is still legal, so that harm is negligible). However, that doesn't change the fact that it's a shit game with themes that I personally find objectionable, which is why I deleted it & won't play it again. That's the point. Just calling a shit game what it is for the specific reasons why I think it's shit.

In short, I dislike it because it's lazy, poor quality, insipid & includes child abuse. The whole NTR thing isn't even a factor. Simple enough for ya pal?
 

Banjorune

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Jul 23, 2023
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The premise is sexy as hell, but the writing and artistic choices are poor. What I mean is, it should show more, tell less. Visually, it's mostly just words over empty rooms. You need to actually SHOW the things, you refer to, not just say them. For instance, NONE of the bullying is depicted visually. We don't actually see the protagonist suffer at all. Why not?
And in a larger sense, there's just no plot development at all. The mother and sister fall for Clyde immediately, there's no buildup to it, no seduction. It's the seduction that's the sexy part. You skip to the climax way too fast. You need more exposition. More dialog. Too much you say things like, "My sister made me run errands for her." But there's no actual dialog! We don't hear (or read) your sister actually ordering you to run errands! But we should. (EDIT: I see you do improve on this in later chapters, but still, the earlier chapters need A LOT of work.)
And just in general, it's too kinetic. There needs to to be some choices! Otherwise, it's just a story. It should be a game! Even if all choices circle back and lead to the same path, still, some choices are better than no choices.
The premise and plot are sound. The story has good bones. You COULD make this into a really sexy game with just better writing and artistic choices. Try again.
 
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str8up

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i hope oneday the game gets finnished ...recently seen a few games with the ABANDONED tag get updates
christmas will be here soon ...well ok i tried!!!
 
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